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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
gr88888888888888888888888888888888888888888 part natasha.
plz cont soon.can't wait 4 d next part.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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AWSOME!!!! Come on Tashu, jaldi continue karo naa.

luv u hamesha,
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
(tia n ranveer in da shed.)

ranveer: humeh kuch karna chaiye. kahi bahar chalte hai.

tia: kahaa?

ranveer: chaliye aaj hum aapko ek achi si movie dikhane le chalte hai.

tia:chalo sabse puchte hai.

ranveer:nahi tia humeh kuch wakt aapke saath akele bitana chate hai.aur humeh lagta hai ki humeh ashi aur uv bana ko bhi thoda waqt akele bitane dena chaiye.

tia: ya waise kitni mushkil se dono saath hue hai chalo tia aur tum hi movie dekne chalte hai.

(meanwhaile in ashis room )

(ashi sits on da bed uv sits next 2 her. he keeps starin at her.)

ashi: kya hua tum muche aise kyun dekh rahe ho.

uv:ashi we r in love par hum pehle yeh itna deny kyun karte the?

ashi: i dont no may be hum dono ki ego humeh yeh sochne ke liye majboor karti thi ki we dont love each other. lekin tum sid ke saath woh bet....

uv:ashi dat time muche yeh realise hi nahi hua ki i loved u. its only jab muche tumeh batana tha ki yeh ek bet thi dat i realised ki yeh ek bet nahi honi chaiye thi.i couldn't say no 2 u n at da same time muche samaj main nahi aa raha tha ki main tumhe saach kaise bataaoo.
lekin now i dont wanna loose u.(he gos close 2 ashi n kisses her on her forehead)

ashi: uv agar humne aise hi saath milkar baat ki hoti to hum kabke...(just wen she was about 2 cont uv grabs her hand n makes her get up from da bed.)

ashi: uv kya kar rahe ho?

uv: lets go 4 a ride on da bike ride tum karogi ya main?

ashi: main ofcauz its my bike.

(ashi puts in da key 2 start da bike. the keychain had a photo of uv n ashi uv saw dat but didnt say nythin he was really very happy.as soon as ashio starts da bike she sits on da bike n uv dits after her.as da bike passes maurya he puts his hands round ashis stomach n holds her tightly feelin very happy, ashi wanted 2 tell uv not 2do dat but somewer deep inside da heart even she felt very happy n cozy.dey pass by da park in wich ashi had brought uv wen dey were 1st datin each other or rather a bet 4 uv.)

uv: (puttin his hand on ashis shoulder tryin 2 stop her.) ashi ruko. ruko... ruko .. ruko!

ashi: (sayin in a scared tone )kya hua r u allrite.
now wat has happened ill postit da next time yeh time tum log ko heavy dose dia hai bada part post karke.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 👏 plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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uv: ya. remember dis park. tum muche raat ko yahaa khich ke le aayi thi n wen we saw park bandh hai to u went over da gates lets get in.

ashi:ya remember. aur jab maine tumhe help ke chilaya to tum kaise aaye the bhaag ke. (sayin dis ashi is about 2 open da door of da park wen uv uv puts his hand on ashis hand n stops her.)kya hua ab dont tell me u dont wanna go is baar main nahi chilaoongi.

uv: nahi ashi. tum aise gate kholke mat jaaoo. hum waise hi jaayenge jaise hum pehle gaye the above da gate.

(bot of dem climb above da gate n get in2 da park)

(dey get inside da gate. uv grabs ashis hand n pulls her 2wards da n puts his hands on da wall so dat ashi cannot move. ashi is about 2 move from under his hands wen he nos ashi wud have done dis dat is y he catches her hand he den leans 2wards her his about 2 kiss her wen

ashi: sir aap?

( by dat time ashi runs away uv runs bhind her. ashi is finally tired n sits down. uv sits next 2 her n dan lies down on her lap)

uv:ashi tumne kabhi socha tha we bot will fall in love ?

ashi: no ways. jab main tumse pehli baar mili thi i just wanted 2 kill u.

uv: aur ab.

ashi: i just want 2 luv u.

uv: i thin ab humeh chalna chaiyeh.

( ashi gets up n uv falls flat on his head)
uv: ashi kya kar rahi ho yeh mera sir hai naryal nahi.

ashi: yumeh hi to jaana tha na to chalo.


(bot of dem reach maurya.)

sid: hey people maurya main kuch excitin hona chaiyeh.

pri: ya like eatin competition.

ashi: pri excitin not borin.

meher: a fashion show?

varun: no somethin diff

vrinda: humeh garibo ki madat karni chaiyeh.

ashi: maate olz. i have n idea kyun na hum maurya main dandiya rakhe somethin new n special.

varun: ya rite.

sid: sufi man! ashi amazin idea.

uv: akhir girl frien kiski hai.

ashi: lekin pehle humeh jumbo se permission leni hogi

ranveer: humeh lagta hai hum sabko saath main jana chahiyehtaaki hum unhe saath milkar convince kar sake.

uv: lets go.

( dey go 2 jumbos office)

gloria : kya kaam hai?

ashi: humeh jumbo sir se... mera matlab hai jamwal sir se baat karni hai.

gloria: sir bisy hai tum log baat main Aaa sakte ho.

ashi: gloria plz just 2 mints?

( all of dem get in2 jumbos office)

(wat happens does jumbo give dem da permission how dey celebrate dare navrartri n a surprise next time....)



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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
Awsome Tashu!!!! Jaldi continue karo naa!!!!

luv u,
Komal
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
nice part natasha continue soon👏 v
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ashi: sir abhi navratris start hone waali hai isliyeh hum useh maurya main celebrate karna chaate hai.

jumbo: yeh ek acha idea hai lekin board iski permission nahi dega kyunki yeh ek educational institution hai. lekin tum log ko holidays zarud milegi.


uv: sir aap kuch to kar sakte hai.

jumbo: nahi uv.

(every 1 moves out of da office.)

meher: now wat usss jumbo ne toh saara plan hi ruin kar diya.

tia: dont woory angel tia aur uski angels to saath main hi celebrate karegi.

ranveer: sirf tia aur unki angel nahi hum sab.

vrinda: ranveer yeh kaise ho sakta hai.

ranveer: dekhiyeh humeh holidays to mil hi rahi hai aap sab humare saath sanghaner chaliye. aakhir hum bhi aapko dikhate hai ki humaare sanghaner main dandiya kaise khelte hai.

sid: dude dis is really sufi man!

uv: toh thik hai ek ghante main sab maurya ke bahr milte hai.

(dey pach dare bags n reach outside maurya.ashi is late.)

uv: tum kahaa thi ashi?

ashi:: muche maate ke kaaran late ho gaya. useh aane ke liye convice karne main hi 45mints chale gaye aur rest 30mints packin main isliyeh late ho gayi. ab aur late ho jaaye isse pehle chale?

( ranveer's mother n vasudha r waitin 4 ranveer n his friens. after dey reach sanghaner vasu is really happy.)

ranveer's mother : kaise hai aap log? jab se vasudha ne sunaa hai ki aap log aane waale hai tab se yeh toh bas raah dekh rahi ki aap log kab aayenge. aap log haath mooh tho ligiyeh khana khake humeh bahut saari taiyaariya karni baaki hai.

( dey have dare lunch n r all set 2 decorate da place. dey wer gonna njoy da navratris wit da people over dare . meher n sid wer helpin 2 invite da people over dare. varun meher n pri wer lookin after da food arrangement. tia n ranveer looked after da costumes. uv n ashi looked after da decoration. uv n ashi took out da decoration wich dey had brot wit dem.dey borrowed some matkisn all da traditional dupaatas 2 give it a traditional look. ashi climbs on 1 of da stools 2 hang a dupatta on top. while hangin da dupatta she by mistake moves her lrg outside da stool she nos shes gonna fall n she screams uv.. uv leaves da decoration n runs 2 catch ashi n dare ashi is in2 uvs arms.)


uv: always dare 4 u babes (lookin in2 her eyes.)

ashi: thanx ab muche neeche rakho.

uv: nahi! i just wanna stay like dis.

ashi: uv! yeh romantic hone ka time nahi hai humeh decoration complete karna hai.

( uv gets annoyed n puts her down . he gos n blows a heart shape ballon. hes about 2 stik it on da wall wen)

ashi: uv yeh kya kar rahe ho tumeh navraatri ki decoration karni hai kissi kid ki bday party ki nahi.

uv: i no wacho! ( he puts da ballon aside n gos n blows another balloon n stands beside ashi.)

ashi: sycho tumeh ho kya gaya hai tum aise kyun behave kar rahe ho?

uv: ashi yeh mera dil hai.( dayin dis in a filmi andaaz)

( ashi takes a pin burst da ballon n conts doin her decoration .)

uv: (screams as if his hurt ) ahhh!1 ashi yeh tumne kya kar diya?


ashi: ( shes really scared she turns n sees uv flat on da floor wit his eyes shut.) uv kya hua uv just speak up uv...

uv: ashi tumne mera dil tod diya.( ashi gets angry but immigiately after sayin dis uv kises her on da cheek n says wit love from uv. n dare ashi melts like a candy floss. n she kissed him back.)


next part wat happens on da dandiya nite ive posted a very long part sorry 4 dat cauz im not gonna cont4 some time cuaz of my exam as my exams get over ill definately cont soon. sorry once again!
Edited by picadally - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
great part!!
please continue soon!!!

Good luck for ur exams!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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finally natasha you posted your part waited since yesterday yaar. rocking out the world. it is sufi dear
👏 you are good in romantic parts too😳

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