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Posted: 19 years ago
#41
nice part continue soon 👏 don't you dare discontinue the fic 😡 continue soon 😉 😆 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tia: kal maurya ke toilet main drugs mile. phir police ko pata chala n dey goin 2 close down maurya.

ashi: but dis is unfare. ho sakta hai ye kisa ka trap ho. thakur tumne hume call kar sakte the na.

ranveer: humne try kiya tha lekin Aap dono ka phone reachable nahi tha.jumbo sir ne police se bahut plead kiya tab jakar un logo ne hume ek din diya maurya khali karne main.

ashi: lekin hum maurya khali nahi karenge.well find out kisne yeh kaam kiya hai.hume protest karna hoga.

sid n meher: ashi is rite.

ashi: rite lets go.

(da police come dare 2 take dam out just dan all da students stand dare n start protestin.)

ashi: (screamin)maurya pe injustice nahi chalega. maurya bandh kabhi nahi hoga)

(every 1 joins ashi)
maurya pe injustice nahi chalega nahi chalega nahi chalega . maurya bandh kabhi nahi hoga kabhi nahi kabhi nahi hoga.
(jumbo is really happy 2 see dis.)

police: agar tum log ne yeh bandh nahi kiya to hume tumhe zabardasti bahar nikalna hoga.

ashi: Aapko jo karna ho kijiye.

varun: hum yahaa se kahii nahi jayenge.

police: thik hai main tum log ko 1 din deta hu. tum maurya ko beguna saabit karo.

jumbo: students Aaj main yeh dekhkar bahut khush hu ke main akela nahi hu jo nahi chata ki maurya bandh ho jaye main tum logo ko permission deta hu AAp log maurya ko bachane ke liye jo karna chate hai kar sakte hai.

ashi: guys humeh pehle to yeh find out karna hoga ki culprit hai kaun.

ranveer: Aap thik kehti hai.

uv: humeh Aaj rat ko hi find out karna hoga.

meher: humeh iske liye alag alag rehna hoga.

ashi: rite. meher sid tum dono common room main raat ko. tia ranveer tum log hostel ke paas. varun pri aur maate tum canteen main aur main aur uv corridor main khade rahenge.kuch bhi galat ho ek doosre ko call karna humeh culprit ko saath main pakadna hoga.

( all agree its nite time n all r at dare respective places. ashi n uv r standin at da corridor. in da nite uv n ashi saw a shadow goin 2 1 of da claa room dey at once follow it)

ashi: uv lets follow

uv: ha lagta hai room no 5 main hai.

culprit: ha kaam ho gaya jaisa Aap chate the waisa. maurya bandh ho jayega.

( uv n ashi open da door 2 see da culprit dey r surprised.)

whos da culprit n how all of dam save maurya ill post it next time but dis time pls reply soon.




iloveashi thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#43
nice part 👏 continue soon now who is the culprit
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Posted: 19 years ago
#44
nd natasha,plz never think ki we dun like ur fic,its awesomeeeeeeeeee 👏 dont u dare 2 discont it 😡 😡 aab jaldi se next part likh de 😃 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#45
gr8 part once again,plz reveal d suspense jaldi 😳 😃 cant wait nemore 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#46
culprit: ha kaam ho gaya jaisa Aap chate the waisa. maurya bandh ho jayega.

(uv n ashi were surprised 2 see dat da culprit bhind dis was shashank sir.)

ashi: hum bhi dekhte hai kaise bandh hota hai maurya.

shshank: tum kya kar sakti ho tumhara maurya bandh hokar rahega.

(just dan he sees dat da hole gang heard dis)

uv: Ab sir kya karna chahenge police se confess karna ya zabardasti jail jana.

shashank:(laughing wickedly) tum log mera kuch nahi bigad sakte.woh drugs maine hi maurya ke toilet main plant kiye the tab kisi ko pata nahi chala to ab kya pata chalega.

(wen he was sayin dis ashi records his voise n statement on her cell. da whole gang moves aside 2 show dat da police was also standin bhind n had heard everythin he said.)


shshank:(2 da police)sir ye sab muche phasa rahe hai. jab maine kahaa ki main ye nahi bolunga to uv ne muche apne baap ki dhamki di.

( just dan ashi plays da statement wen shshank says kaam ho gaya n tum mera kuch nahi bigaad sakte.)

varun: humne pehle se hi ye plan banaya tha.

(police takes shshank away jumbo is really happy)

jumbo: im proud Aaj tum log ne maurya ko bandh hone se bacha liya. isliye maurya main ek wekk ki chutti.

every1 2gether: yes we did it.

meher: ashi agar tum nahi aati to shayad maurya bandh ho gaya hota.

ashi: come on agar tum log ne saath nahi diya hota to main kuch nahi kar paati.

ranveer: nahi ashi meher thik keh rahi agar Aap yeh protest karne ke liye nai kehti to hum sab apne apne bag utha kar chale gaye hote aur maurya bandh ho gaya hota.

tia; ha ashi ranveer thik keh raha hai.

ashi: ok!ok! Ab muche need Aa rahi hai sone jaaye.( all agree.)

(uv moves 2wards girls hostel wit ashi.)

ashi: uv tumhara room us taraf hai.

uv: pata hai lekin jaane kaa maan nahi kar raha.

uv: kal subhe milte hai.

(next mornin in da canteen)

uv: hi sweet heart kya kar padh rahi ho.

ashi: uv main soch rahi thi ki muche kuch excitin karna hai n dis article is just perfect. isme cookery competition ke liye add hai. lekin isme char logo ki zarurat hai. do to ho gaye.

( just dan ranveer n tia join ashi n uv)

uv: do kaise.

ashi:main aur tum

uv: no way main yeh competition main part nahi lunga.

( ashi gets angry n leaves. uv gos bhind her. tia n ranveer cant understand wats goin on. ashi moves 2wards da coridor 2wards girls hostel n reaches her room)

uv: anvesha wait

ashi: sycho i just don wanna talk 2 u.

does uv agree 2 take part n how dey decide wat 2 make 4 da competition ill post it da naext time till dan keep guessin wat dey r onna do while makin da dish.


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Posted: 19 years ago
#47
Im really sorry people but i think i should discontinue da fic cauze i myself think da fic is borinn n i no dat even ull think da same but its just dat ull dont wanna be rude by tellin me 2 stop writtin n i really really appreciate dat. thanx 4 respondin 2 my 7 2 8 borin parts. now im not gonna take more of ur time. thanx once again. bye. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#48
please don't stop writing 😭 i really like your fic. i regularly read your fic. don't you dare discontinue the fic ok. now give us the next part now. 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#49
guys give me da permission 2 stop da fic if ull dont like it only if many people tell me 2 continue da fic will i do so.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#50
i am telling u 2 cont 😡 jaldi likh,warna 🤢

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