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Posted: 19 years ago
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(she moves inside her room.uv gets inside da room)

uv: come on ashi itna angry hone ki kooi zarurat nahi hai.

ashi:uv pls!(she puts her hand on da table unaware dat vrinda had broken a glass over dare.she gets hurt.)

uv: ashi!(he grabs her n makes her sit on da bed. removes da first aid box n puts ointment on her hand.)
tumne dekha nahi wahaa glass tha ab dekho kitna khun beh rahaa hai.


ashi: chill sycho khun beh rahaa hai mera khun nahi ho gaya hai.

(ranveer n tia come inside ashis room as dey thught somethin was rong seein uv puttin bandage on ashis hand.)

ranveer: (singin)tu hi meri shab hai tu hi din hai mera
tu mera rab hai jahaa hai tuhi meri duniya. tu wakt mere liye main hu tera lamhaa kaise rahega bhalaa hoke tu muchjse judaa.

uv:(blushin) shut up ranveer. ashi im ready 2 take part.


tia: kya tia ko koi samjaayegaa yahaa ho kya rahaa hai.

ashi: woh samajne ke liye brains ki zarurat hoti hai jo tumahre paas nahi hai.muche cookin competition main part lena hai lekin i need 2 people wit me kya tum dono mere saath..........


ranver n tia: what!

uv: ranveer tia pls haa keh do pls well have fun. plssssssssss!


ranveer: thik hai.

tia: agar ranveer ko koi problem nahi hai to tia ko bhi koi problem nahi hai.

( next mornin all meet in da common room.)

tia: hi ranveer hi uv. woh red punk kahaa hai.

ashi: timbet shut up!

tia: tia tumse sirf yeh kehnaa chati thi ki woh tumhare saath competition main part nahi le sakti hai.

ashi: tim brains tum competition main partzarud logi u no y kyunki agar tumne part nahi liyato main tumahre papa ko bahut tang karungi.

tia: u punk tia competition main part legi par sirf papa ke liye.

ashi: acha to ab think ki kya banayenge?

sid: gajar ka halwa.

ashi: sid hum cookin competition ki baat kar rahe hai best filmi dish ki nahi.

ranveer: paneer chilly.

ashi: nahi thakur hamari dish dusroon se alag honi chayiye.

uv: prawn fiesta

tia: no way uv itna sara fat r u crazy tia kaa figure kharab ho jayegaa.

ashi: timbo hume khana banana hai khana nahi hai. aur once more tumne silly billy talk ki hai to main tumhe prawn ki tarah fry karke khaa jaoongi.

ranveer: ashi shaant rehakar sochiye.

sid: bye guys main chalta hu tum log socho ki kya banana hai.

tia:tia ko lagta hai sprouted salad perfect rahegaa.

ashi: u dinosaur brain hume goats ko nahi judges ko yeh dish khilani hai.

tia: tumne tia ko dinosaur brain kyun kahaa.

ashi: kyunki dinosaur ki tarah tumhara brain bhi extinct ho gaya hai. aur agra ke pagal khane main ek bhi jaghaa khali nahi hoti na tab bhi tumhari halat dekhkar tumhe wahaa bitha dete.

uv: ashi just chill socho.

ranveer:uv humeh lagta hai humeh kitchen main jaakar apni pasand ki chiz lakar usmeh se kuch banana chahiye. kyunki agar hum aise sochne baithe to yeh dono ek dooserey ko maar daalegi.

ashi: thakur awesome idea i wonder tumhe is tim brain main kya acha lagtaa hai.

uv: ashi shut up! ab socho ki hum yeh dish kahaa banaayenge.

ashi: humeh yeh dish maurya ke kitchen main banaani hogi.

all 3: wat?

ashi: agar lab main banaa sakteh hai to i dont mind khanaa kitchen main hi banayaa jaata hai.

tia: lekin hum wahaa jayenge kaise.

ashi: hum wahaa saath nahi jaa sakte.isliye thakur tum timbo ko lekar wahaa 12 o clock ko bahucho main aur uv tumhe wahi milenghe.

( tia n ranveer reach da kitchen uv n ashi just come after a minute)

wat happens in da kitchen ill post it da next time.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
yayyyy,me d first one 2 reply 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
nice part finally you continued good do here's your reward 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
ashi: quik humare paas time nahi hai. agar jumbo ne hume dekh liya to?..........

uv: quik get ur things.

(ashi gos n brings a chilly uv brings cream ranveer pepper n tia lettuce)

ashi: timbo thakur uv aur main jo laye hai usme tumhe lettuce ka connection kahi dikhai deta hai kya?

tia: puh-leez ashi tumhari chily se to acha hai cool n calm.

ashi: ya rite main tumhari eyes main daal ke dikhati hu.
(she streches her hand just 2 scare tia. tia screams n closes her eyes)

uv: ashi lagta hai tum ye competition ke liye serious nahi ho.

ashi: sorry!
tia: humeh thode eggs boil karne chaiye.main water boil karne jaati hu.

(after some time jumbo comes dare.)

jumbo: yeh yahaa kya ho raha hai.

wat will jumbo do how will ashi n da rest get out of dis ill post it da next time.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55
nice part but write longer parts please👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
nice part....

why is it sooooo short???


continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
jumbo: yeh yahaa kya ho raha hai?

uv: sir. woh....hum....woh...sir.sir ha woh ashi ki tabyat thik nahi hai isliye hum uske liye soup bana rahe hai. kyunki agar dost khud banakar khilaye to dost jaldi thik hote hai. haina sir?


jumbo: ashi bimaar hai aur woh tumhari madaad kar rahi hai.


ashi: woh sir muche kuch chizo se alergy hai isliye main inhe bata rahi hu ki soup kaise banana chaiyeh.

jumbo: ashi tumhe kya hua hai/

ashi:nahi pata. mera matlab hai exactly kya hai nahi pata mera matlab hai sir woh muche. (uv cuts in)


uv: woh sir ashi ka matlab hai useh bukhaar hai lekin flue hai yeh sure nahi hai.

jumbo: achaa ashi tum yahaa Aaoo dekhoo tumhe kitna bukhar hai?

(ashi n di other 3 do not no wat 2do. ashi hurriedly puts da thermometer wich she has in da boilin water.)

ashi: sir mere paas yeh thermometer hai sir main iseh mooh main daal du.

jumbo: ok!

(after some time)

jumbo: ab thermometer muche dikhaoo. 103!
ashi tumhe rest karni chaiyeh main abhi sonia ko phone karta hu.

ashi: nahi sir!woh pareshaan ho jaayegi main promise karti hu main rest karoongi.

jumbo:thik hai aur tum log jaldi se apnaa kaam khatam karkeh kitchen se bahaar niklo.

ashi: sycho yeh tum jumbo ko kya keh rahe the. agar agar mere paas thermometer nahi hoti to Aaj jumbo muche punishment dekar sachmooch bimaar bana deta.


uv:to main yeh kehta ki sir hum yahaa cookery competition ke liye dish bana rahe hai.lekin yeh bataao woh thermometer tumhare paas Aayi kahaa se n woh temp 103!
tum instant bimaar kaiseh ho gayi.

ashi:ha woh mamaa aayi thi. muche ghar nahi jaana tha isliyeh maine bimaar hone ka natak kiya. aur thermometer mere pant main reh gayi. i just dipped it in hot water b4 goin 2 jumbo.

uv:ashi agar tum khud natak karo to no problem aur jab maine jumbo se(just dan ashi realises dat dare is flour on uvs nose n starts laughin.)

uv: ab wacho kya hua . ab haas kyun rahi ho?

ashi:uv. woh tumhare nose peh .. uv tum apnaa face mirror main dekho joker lag rahe ho.

(uv looks in2 da mirror n we turns ashi runs away from da kitchen)

uv: ashi main tumhe nahi chodungaa.(he runs bhind her ashi runs in2 da shed.)

( uv lifts her from da waist n turns her round . he looks at ashi n dey both laugh 2gether. ashi raises her hand 2 remove da flour from uvs nose uv catches her hand ashi is totally lost in2 uvs eyes n so is uv.he kissee her hand gently. he hugs her.)

uv: ab wapas chale warna jumbo sochega ki yeh koi naya tarikaa hai bimaar ko thik karne kaa.

(m dey go back dare dey see dat tia n ranveer have almost prepared da dish)

ashi:thakur yeh dish almost complete hai.

ranveer: haa kyun ki aap aur uv chale gaye to hum aapko disturb nahi karna chate the aap bimaar jo hai.

uv: shut up ranveer!

( wat happens next in da kitchen n do dey win or loose in da contest ill post it da next time.)
Edited by picadally - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part. 👏 plz cont soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ashi: acha chalo humeh baaki ki dish puri karni hai. timbo muche besan laake do.

(tia brings flour)

ashi:tia yeh flour hai besan nahi.

tia: kya phadak padta hai.

(ashi gets really angry n she takes a handfull of flour n drops it on tias hair n anoder handful on her face.)

ashi: yeh phadak padta hai?

tia: u punk tumne tia ke baal khrab kar diye . tumne tumne tia ki dress ruin kar di . tia tumhe nahi chodegi.

(she gos n pulls ashis hair on di other hand ashi does da same thin.ranveer runs 2 pull tia n uv runs 2 draw ashi apart. both try hard 2 n finally get both off dem off each others hair.)

uv: will ull stop fightin . aise lag raha hai ki yeh cookin competition kam aur fightin competition zyaada lag raha hai. come lets complete makin da dish.

(dey finish makin da dish n move 2 da venue dare after some time da results r declared n dey finish up wit da second prize.)

tia: yeh hum jeet gaye.

tia: hum agar itna fight nahi karte to 1st aate.

ashi: ya sorry timbo lekin fight nahi karte to mazaa nahi aata.

uv: ur rite ashi.

tia: tia bhi sorry hai ashi.( sayin dis she hugs ashi bot uv n ranveer r shocked.)

uv: girls ki yeh baat muche kabhi samaj meh nahi aati kabhi zagadte hai kabhi ek saath ho jaate hai.

ranveer: yeh humare bas ki baat nahi hai bana.toh ab wapis jaaye aur waise bhi ashi bimaar hai.

(dey reach maurya tia n ranveer move 2 wards da shed 2 spend sometime alone n uv n ashi move in ashis room)

next part some romantic moments between ashi n uv but till dan read dis part.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
nice part 👏 post the next part soon

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