if remix wouldn’t have ended.pg37

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picadally

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Posted: 19 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: iloveashi
finally natasha you posted your part waited since yesterday yaar. rocking out the world. it is sufi dear
👏 you are good in romantic parts too😳

thanx shilp but dares still more left 2 come after my exams

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shilpa

@iloveashi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#72

best of luck for your exams natsa 👍🏼 we all are waiting for your next part 😳

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sonam1509

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Posted: 19 years ago

#73

hey natasha !!!!!!!!!
i read ur fic just now n all the parts r just amazing
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plz post the next part soon
n ya all the very best for ur exams

luv
sonam 😳 😳 😳

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 19 years ago

#74

Awsome Tashu!!!! Continue soon!!! and good luck on ur exams babes!!!!

luv,
Komz

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sayantika

@sayanti_ashiuv

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Posted: 19 years ago

#75

gr8 part nats nd best of luck 4 ur exams 😳 😃 cont asap.

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picadally

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Posted: 19 years ago

#76

it was nite time n all da arrangements were done. da people over dare had kept prizez 2 give away. every1 was bysy gettin ready. dey had all planned 2 dress in traditional clothes. da people over dare helped dem in gettin ready. da 1st 2 get ready was meher. meher looked really beautyful n sid was shocked lookin at her dan pri who looked sweet n vrinda who looked cute as usual dan tia. ranver was just out of his mind lookin at her. da last was ashi. uv had just waited 2 see ashi in traditional clothes but ashi was in normal clothes all set 2 rock. but uv was upset n aanoyed ashi realizez dat n goes 2wards him.

ashi: kya hua uv?

uv: ashi i no ki tumeh traditional clothes pehena pasand nahi hai lekin atleast 2day? atleast mere liye nahi vasu ke liye to pehen liya hota woh bechaari kabse keh rahi thi ki woh tumeh traditionalclothes main dekhegi.(sayin dis he walks away.)

(every1 was njoyin wit dare partners . dare were 2main prizez dat was best dancin couple n da best jodi. uv was all alone as ashi had disappeared somewhere. dan dare is n announcement made dat da song dholi taro will be playedon wich some people will perform. as da song is payed da people of sanghaner perform leadin in da song comes ashi dressedin exact rajasthani clothes ghagra choli n all da jewelry. every1 is stunned lookin at her uv cud not help but dance wit her . every1 joined dem. after some time da results were announced ranveer n tia were da best dancin couple n uv n ashi were da best jodi. every1 had enjoyed da nite every1 was tired n had gone 2 sleep but da nite didnt seem 2 get over 4 uv n ashi. ashi went n stood bhind da bench ware uv was sittin far away from ranveers house. ashi puts her hand on uvs shoulder.)

uv: ashi thanx atleast mere liye nahi atlast vasu ke liyeh to tumne yeh clothes pehen liye.

ashi: (she sits bsides him but doesnt look at him n says.) yeh maine vasu ke liye nahi kiya hai.

uv: toh phir?

ashi: ( ashi turns her face 2wards uv looks in2 his eyes n says) tumhare liye.

(uv doesnt no wat 2 say he just grabs her hand n takes her far away from ranveers house. a really romantic place. dare was only 1 nite dare , moonlite n da sound of da river water flowin. uv removes da duppata from ashis head. he dan removes da hearin wich she was verin n runs his finger over her ear n wispers i luv u. he dan kisses her on da ear. he moves 2 di other side n removes her necklace n kisses her on da neck . he lifts her in his arms n walks 2wards da river n dan gently makes her sit dare.)

ashi: uv tum.......

uv: ssshhs! ashi kuch mat bolo. we r da best jodi to muche humari jodi ko admire karne do. tum nahi jaanti ki wat diff uve made in my life. i mean yuvraj dev was never like dat i thin ive just gone crazy. main tumse itna pyaar kyun karta hu?

ashi: kyunki main tumeh usse kahi zyaada pyaar karti hu.( she hugs uv tightly.) i luv u.

ashi: uv lets go back b4 koi dekh le.

dey bot go back n r in dare dream world on da bed.

dis part is specially 4 u shilp hope u like it.

Edited by picadally - 19 years ago