if remix wouldn’t have ended.pg37 - Page 3

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Posted: 19 years ago
#21
people im sorry 4 da delay il post da part soon it will take some more time cause my exams r comin near i just came onlne cause i new it u all must be waitin 2 no who da guy is just wait 4 some more time pls.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#22
awesum fic __________ i donno ur name ??????.plzzzz cont it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#23
okay,waiting,but plz post fast 😳 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ashi: uv wats da matter.tum waha se kyun chale aaye.
uv: wats da matter ashi? u were dancin with dat guy as if?

ashi: as if wat uv? jo tum think kar rahe ho waisa nahi hai. agar maine uske saath dance kiya so wat?

( dis makes uv really angry. he rushes 2wards dat guy 2 box him just dan ranveer n ashi catch hold of him.)
ashi: stop it uv just chill tumhe angry hone ki koyi zarurat nahi hai.

uv: i no ashi ye hi tha jisne tumhe wo gifts aur cards bheje the. ill kill him.

ashi: iski koi zarurat nahi hai kyunki ye mera cousin hai.

uv: wat?
ashi: ya mujche pata tha ki tum mere saath koi prank play karne wale ho jab tum canteen main aake baithe tab hi main samaj gayi ke ur up2 somethin. so i thougt of a plan.

uv: lekin wo cards n gifts?

ashi: wo rajeev ne hi mudche bheje the aur pehle bhi bheje the it came at da right time aur maine soch liya tumhare saath kya prank khelni hai. uv i no u better dan ny1 else does.
( uv is releaved n hugs ashi)
uv: woh sab thik hai lekin ab aise pranks mat play karna. u no 4 a moment mujche laga ki i lost u 4ever. ek bar ho chuka hai not again.

rajeev: ashis cousin. ok to main chalta hu before u kill me uv.

uv: im really sorry dude.
rajeev : dats ok i understand.
ashi: uv dis is rajeev my cousin pata hai his kam from london aur hum saath saal baad mil rahe hai isliye usne muche gifts aur cards bheje the.

rajeev: ok guys bye problem solved main chalta hu.

every1 : bye
( 4 of dam continu partin uv n ashi dance 2gether n r really romantic)

next mornin canteen main uv is sittin alone ranveer comes dare)
ranveer: kya hua uv ab to sare problems solve ho gaye
uv : ya dude lekin ab ek aur problem hai ashi ka birthday aaa raha hai n i want 2 make it special aur ye problem tumhare liye bhi hai bana kyunki tia ka bhi birthbay same day par hai to kya apne decide kiya ki aap kya karne wale hai

ranveer: nahi dude ill think about it
uv: ranveer?
uv: i want 2 spend some time alone with ashi.tum mudche do gahnte main milo main tumhe kuch ideas deta hu tum mudche dena?
ranveer: aap pagal ho gaye ashi ke liye idea hamare bas ki baat nahi lekin do ghante main milte hai.

(wat does uv plan 4 ashi ill pst it next time its really excitin dats if ull like dis part)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow man..it was awesum..really i liked this part very much//plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon as possible..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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people im gonna post a new part on every friday so ull can check it out on fridays dis is so dat ull dont have 2 keep chekin in 4 a new part everyday all u have 2 do is just check it out on friday.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#27
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part.just luved it re 👏
plz do cont asap.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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1st of all i appologise 4 not postin fast cause i had my exams they just got over yesterday.n i have 1 request can any1 tell me how 2 download da video of 13th july from india tube plssssssssssssssssss!


( after 2 hrs ranveer meets uv in his room just dan sid comes dare)
Sid : Kya ho raha hai koi party hone wali hai.

Uv; ya sid ashi ka birthday aa raha hai n i want 2 make dat day special 4 her.

Ranveer: aur hum tia ke liye kya kare.

sid : tum tia ko soft toy de sakte ho.

ranveer: bana unka birthday hai friendship day nahi.

uv; ya right! sid rack ur dumb brain. ranveer tum tia ke liye ek romantic date kyun nahi set karte.

ranveer: idea acha hai bana hum yehi karenge sirf hum aur tia.

uv: dude control ab muche koi idea do.

sid: uv tum ashi ko soft toy do.

uv: sid agar tumne yeh soft toy nonsense bandh nahi kiya to main tumhe soft toy bana dunga aur waise bhi ashi n soft toy no ways bro.

ranveer: uv Aap bhi ashi ko kahi bahar kyun nahi leke jaate.

sid: candle light dinner.

uv: no sid it has 2 be very special main uske liye kuch alag karna chata hu. u no how ashi is diff from other girls. kuch wild karna hai.somethin spooky.

sid: phir tum ashi ko ek skeleton kyun nahi gift kar dete ya phir 1 bhoot bangla.

uv: shut up sid! just go away from here. agar tumne 1 aur stupid idea diya to main tumhe yahi ground kar dunga. Hey bhaggu! muche koi idea do.

sid: dude muche 1 bahut accha idea Aaya hai. tum ashi ko 1 horror movie dikhane le jaoo.

uv; u no wat sid main ashi ko yahi leke aata hu tumhe dikhane ke liye kyunki tum thodi der main bhoot banane wale ho kyunki main tumhara murder karne wala hu.( he gets up 2 box sid)

ranveer: bana shant ho jayeye. ashi ke liye idea dena aasan nahi hai. Aap khud hi sochye hum sid ko lekar jate hai.

sid : bye dude. have a nice time.( uv thinks a lot n finaly gets n idea)

next part how ranveer n uv ignore tia n ashi so dat they dont come 2 no about their plan.



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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee part 👏
plz cont fast this time.

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Posted: 19 years ago
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(ashi n tia meet in da corridor)
ashi:hey timbo tumne guys ko kahi dekha kya.

tia:nahi timbo bhi i mean tia bhi tumse yehi puchna chati thi.

ashi:main thodi der pehle canteen main gayi thi lekin jab maine pucha ki wats goin on to dono ne bahut weird behave kiya.

tia: chalo canteen main unhe milte hai.
(both go 2 da canteen.)

ashi n tia : hi guys.

uv: ashi main tumhe baad main milta hu.
ranveer: hum bhi tia apko baad main milte hai. bye.
(dey both move away)

ashi:saw maine kahaa tha na. i thin they r up2 somethin lekin hame batana nahi chate.

uv: ranveer hum unse zyada der tak nahi chupa sakte.
ranveer: bana tension mat lijiye do din ki hi to baat hai.
part 6

(im postin 2 parts 2gether cause i was late in postin parts cause of my exam sorry 4 da delay people.)
da last nite at 12oclock

(ranveer gets in2 tias room wishes her happy birthday)

tia: ranveer tumhe tia ka birthday yaad tha. jis tarah tum behave kar rahe the tia ko laga tum tia ka birthday bhool gaye.

ranveer: aapka birthday hume kaise yaad nahi rehta.

(on di other side ashi waits n has feelins dat uv will come n wish her like last year but he doesnt come. ashi thins uv has forgoten her birthday. next day mornin ashi is really angry.she goes 2 da common room.)

(when shes goin 2 da common room she sees soft toys over dare its writen from uv 2 her life ashi is really very happy uv comes from behind n hugs ashi.)

uv: hi sweetheart happybirthday.

ashi: uv thanx ye soft toys bahut ache hai.

uv: kya ye tumhe ache lage. muche laga ki tum muche do piece main cut kar do gi ye soft toys dekh kar.

ashi: dats tru ji muche soft toys pasand nahi par tumne itne pyaar se diya hai to main kaise except nahi karti it would have been selfish on my part.

uv: ashi yehi to tumhari baat hai wich makes me go crazy. i luv u so much. (uv hugs her).ashi ye mera asli surprise nahi hai.waha ek envelop hai wo check karo aur ek gift bhi hai.

ashi opens da envelop n is surprised)

(wats dare in da envelop n wats da gift ill post it next time dats if ull like dis part pls give comments so dat i can understand if ull like it.)




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