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Posted: 18 years ago
Ok we will wait till mon but dont give any reasons on mon
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Posted: 18 years ago
mp: babes we will get ready but jo theme hai waise kapde toh hamaare paas nahi hai.

anaina:no prob tum sab log mere saath chalo.

(she takes them 2 a rooom filled wit clothes , accessories shoes n lots more)

anaina: u all can pick up watever u all want.

meher: this is so excitin a room filled wit clothes .

vrinda:baap re ananina yeh kis liye?

anaina: hum cousins jab bhi yahaa aate hai go 2 da disc n disc main diff themes rehti hai toh my dad just made a seperate room 4 dat.

sid:dis is sufi man well gyus chalo warna late ho jaayenge.

ranveer: aap thik kehete hai.
(dey all get ready keepin da theme in mind sid dressed in black pantsn a sleevless shirt wit some accessories , meher wit a simple black dress yet funky vrinda in a long black skirt. mp wit loose pants varun in black jeans n shirt ranveer in black jeans n a tight leather jacket wit a holf cap. uv in balck cargos n black full sleeved body huggin shirt with his hair gelled n a black scarf tied as a bandana. tia wit n offshoulder dress wit black stilletoes n her hair curled 2 look funky ashi in a black short skirt wit n alter neck top a band in a her hand black boots wit pencil heels achain tied around her skirt n a balck bandana complementin her red hair. anaina in balck shorts wit a pocketed shirt wit black leather gloves n a black scarf n plain black sleepers n a nose ring flauntin her care a dam attitude. all of dem looked wild n funky accordin 2 da theme. dey all went in da sports cars which anaina had leavin ashi n uv on da bike supportin da theme of a ganster. well dey all looked like hot n happenin gangsters as dey stepped inside da disc dey made heads turn)
Edited by picadally - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
plz tell me whose dress is da best. among da boys n da girls.
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Posted: 18 years ago
NICE PART NATSA I LOVED ASHI AND YUVI DRESS MOST I CAN IMAGINE THEM THEY ROCK 👏 KYA NATSA ITNA CHOTTA PART PLEASE WRITE LONGER PARTS NA PLEASE 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey dear the part was very nice 👏 plzzzz cont sooooon 😳 I like Ana & ashi then uv's dress most 😳 U knoe what I like ur fic the most because It has mp & ashi together once again 😉 😳 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetyvidya

Hey dear the part was very nice 👏 plzzzz cont sooooon 😳 I like Ana & ashi then uv's dress most 😳 U knoe what I like ur fic the most because It has mp & ashi together once again 😉 😳 😊

thanku 4 dat.
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Posted: 18 years ago
actually na naatu black is my fav colour so i just love evry dress made of it so i cant choose ne1 of them........ 😉 😉 😉
but this part was kool n very short too 😉 😉

plz continue son
luv
sonam 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey natasha,i m replying after a long days.i just read the all parts of ur fic.its going awesomeeeeeee.plz cont soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
U are most welcome dear😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
anaina: finally we r here. well yahaa hamesha contest hote hai. like da best dressed couple da persont wit da best attitude the best dancin couple n many more.

ashi: hey dats fun man lets see how many titles we take home.

mp: ur rite babes.

uv: ya lets see ashi but uske liye we need 2 njoy so wat r we waitin 4.

(dey hit da dance floor just dan da anchors come in in order 2 start da competition.)

The anchors: hey guys r ull ready 4 da competition? this time we have 5 titels in all 2 give away. n dis time we r gonna do somethin wild n crazy supportin r theme of gansters. da most difficult title 2 win dis year is da title of da most darin couple n it meets u love ur partner somuch dat u can do nythin 4 dem. howz dat noe so lets start. all da couples interested plz give in ur names.

(only tr n ay n some other couples give in there names. till da competition starts all of dem njoy demselves on da dance floor. meanwhile dey were being juged on da other titles.den there was a call 4 all da participants 4 da most darin couple. dey all move 2 da place where dey were called.)

da anchors: so guys ready each n every round main apko instruction diye jaayenge. apki aid ke liye yahaa doctors maujood hai.if nyparter feels there is danger in doin nytask u can step out.pehle round main all da guys plz come 4ward.(all da guys saw dat there was hot wax box kept over there.)

ranveer: uv1 bana!

uv: ya dude main bhi vahi soch raha hu but dun worry shayad hameh girls ka wax karna hoga think positive.(just as di anchors give instructions dey both look at each others face cauz it was di other way round of wat dey had thought.ashi n tia looked at dem as if 2 say its k we can give up.wat both of dem cud remember was wat happened 2 dem wen dey were 1st waxed in maurya. but dis time it was 4 here love n dey certainly wud not step bk. da 1st round started after tia n ashi waxed their legs dey screamed as if dey were murdered by some1. many couples gave up in da 1st rount itself.)

anchors: now da boys can step bk da girls plz come 4ward. u all can see a bucket filled wit ice in front of u all u have 2 do is dat there r some pins in da bucket u have 2 find out atleast 10 pins n remember u can set ur hands out only wen u get all da 10 pins. tough but ot impossible so go ahead girls. (ranveer n uv were really scared tia n ashi dipped thier hands n da expression on their face was terrible uv n ranveer cud not bare dis see dis da way ashi n tia were shiverin but ashi n tia succeded in getin da 10 pins there n dan itself only 2 couples were left after dis round ay n tr. all da ppl weer anxious 2 no who wud win cauz both da couples wud do nythin 4 there love. but ranveer n uv were bothered 4 ashi n tia.)

ranveer: tia hamari wajah se apko yeh taklif hui hameh maaf kar dijiye tia.

tia: nahi ranveer tumne bhi toh tia ke liye itna dard jela toh tia kyun nahi? aaj tia ko pata chal gaya ki tum tia se kitna pyaar kar ho.

uv: ashi! (he just said dis n hugged her tight cauz she was shiverin wit cold ashi felt much bettter.)

anchors: ok so only 2 couples left lets see who wins da boys will b given a bike n u have 2 ride on dat wooden plank easy but not dat easy wen u have 2 ride it wen da plank is set wit fire u will b given a jacket n akll da safety precautions r ready u need not worry r u ready. (both da girls insisted on givin up but da boys were adamant. bot of dem completed da task wit ease n da girls breathed a sign of releif.noe it was da last task which da girls had 2 do dis wud decide da winner.0

anchors: so girls after doin somethin cold lets do somethin hot. there r some coal peices which have been put off from fire sometime bk all u have 2 do is walk on dem bare feet.(da girls were ready 2 do it. just as tia walked a few steps ranveer cud not see it da pain on her face but see walked just some more steps n fainted da doctors rushed 4 her aid n ranveer lifted her n da doctors aided her.)

tia: ranveer tia bahut sorry hai woh yeh task nahi poora kar paayi.

ranveer: apne koshish ki vahi kaafi hai koi aur hota toh yeh karne se mana kar deta.

(lookin at tia uv was scared n looked at ashi but ashi showed her hand as 2 show him dat she is fine n dat she can do it.she starts walkin uv feels da pain more dan her she walks half way down n she cant walk ny further uv is scared all her friends r scared as 2 wat will will happen but she walks further n finishes her task just as she finishes she is about 2 fall but uv comes rushin n hugs her tight n ashi feels dat uv is always there 2 suppor het dis feelin fills more enerjy in2 her n she bk 2 normal.)

ashi: duh-uh tumhe kya laga main timbo ki tarah faint honewali hu?

uv: nahi i was sure u wud do it but i was very happy da way feel 4 each other n i realised how much u luv me. iluv u(n he had tears in his eyes ashi cud not bare dis n she 2 bcame emotional.)

anchors:so da winner of da most darin couple r anvesha bnerjee ray n yuvraj dev.(ranveer n tia were really happy 4 dem. ) n noe di other tiles da title of da person wit da best attitude goes 2 anaina ashi vrinda n mp were happy 4 her da best dessed couple yuvraj n anvesha da cutest couple sid n meher n da best dancin couple ranveer n tia.(every1 is very happy just as dey r about 2 leave anaina remembers 2 collect somethin from da counted day da passes of da bike racin competition but every 1 insist on celebratin makar sakranti n anaina agrees 2 it.)

anchors: so da winner of
Edited by picadally - 18 years ago

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