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Posted: 19 years ago
#11
its a nice start nikki......will be waiting for ur next part 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
plzzzzzzzzz cont soon nikkki 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
yup nikki,plzz cont sooooooooooonnnnnnnnn.eagerly waiting 4 ur post sweetie.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
lol
ty ppl!
i kinda felt guilty dat i posted such a small part so here is part 2....njoy! 😛
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Part 2

Auditions were held that afternoon and a huge line on excited teenagers slowly one by one entered the gym room to audition in front of Mrs.Rao, who will ultimately decide the best among the rest…

The line grew shorter and hopes grew bigger as everyone was satisfied with what they had done…when Mrs.Rao was about to exit the room as all the students were done and had left…a boy came running over the corner with his jet black curls bouncing right behind him….." Yuvraj Dev! I am very sorry but auditions are over!" she announced rudely "but ma'am I am sooo sorry for being late please give me 5 mins or atleast one try…" yuvi pleaded.

"Fine! But hurry up!" Mrs.Rao agreed and saw yuvi's performance….."result will be out tomorrow…" she said as soon as yuvi was done. As soon as she left a red-head ran upto her…"Mrs.Rao………"
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ohkaaayy!!! dis isnt such a big part either 😭
sowy!!
Edited by a.r.t.y - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#15
awesome nikki 👏
plz cont sooooooooonnnnnnn.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#16
whopee,me d first one 2 reply. 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#17

lol
kk
here's part 3...........
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Part 3

The next day jumbo called all the students for an unexpected assembly….again. He began to say…"students! Mere hath audition ke results hai…yea students Maurya ko dance competition me represent karenge …..

Everyone started growing excited and as far as those two were concerned…they were excited too…but their expressions showed it as if this was the lamest thing in the entire world!

Jumbo cleared his throat as he unfolded a piece of paper and read out…."the boy that will be representing our school will be………" His voice trailed off as his eyes widened and he opened his mouth to say….."Yuvraj Dev!!??"

The students were as shocked as jumbo was! Yuvi made his way to the place were jumbo was standing…on reaching there he stood straight and smile to everyone…who were still frozen in shock.

As soon as jumbo snapped out of this shock…he said…."ab vo ladki jo Maurya ko represent karegi…. Vo hai….."girls!"yuvi thought as he looked around for a hot face he hoped to be picked to dance with him. Then again jumbo's eyes grew wider as he said…."A-An-Anvesha Baneerji Ray!!??" suddenly all eyes fell on a semi tall mischievous girl. As for yuvi he was looking at her some time ago and a smile started to play on his lips as soon as jumbo mentioned her name……

He noticed those deep brown eyes shimmering with excitement…that playful face and that innocent smile….Suddenly! His thoughts came to an abrupt stop…. He got a hard jerk of reality check….his throat choked up as he managed to loudly say…''KYA!!!!!"………

He was shocked as well as amazed as jumbo called out her name….."no way!" ashi screamed "yeh mera partner nahi ho sakta hai!" came the response…."like I want to be partners with you!" yuvi teasingly said…" now… now both of you" jumbo said…"tum dono Maurya ko represent karoge… no further discussion"… he left… as the students began to disperse...ashi and yuvi could not stop staring at each other… they were so bugged….finally something they wanted to do soo badly and now they have to do it with someone they don't even like!

Then finally Vrinda dragged ashi out of there who was still looking at yuvi as she was about to kill him… yuvi stood there still staring at her then Sid stood beside him..."dude!...tumari bad luck hi kharab hai…jo tumhe ashi jaise partner mili…you must be sooo sad….."

Yuvi gave him a sheepish smirk…was he sad or happy??

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hehehe........so how was it??

its longer now😆

Edited by a.r.t.y - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
wow man..awseum part..i luved uv's expression..plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon..u write really well man..hats off to u
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Posted: 19 years ago
#19
hehehe lol 😆 😆
m really glad u ppl lik my fic
i hav a lot....lol
dis is lik the 2nd fic here in rf... 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
heya nikki,awesomeeeeee babaes 👏
plz cont asap. 😳

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