One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz plz cont fast
da fics totally rocking yaar 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was way way out of this wprld please continue soon can't wait
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thank u.. 😛

shall continue as fast as i can 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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shreyasi!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
how much times do u wanna hear it- U ROK ON IF
N DA WAY U WRITE IS TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLLLLL THAT I CANT EXPRESS IN WORDS.
MIND BLASTING YAAR 👏
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wowowo sonam thxxxxxxx you really touched me 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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my pleasure but wen r u going to continue again????
plzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon i m waiting
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Posted: 19 years ago
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suberb.........fantabulous......... 👏
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Part 6

The Eiffel Tower. Every time he looked at it, it seemed to him as if it looked back with the same affirmation, same benevolence and same potency. Its structure, somehow gave him comfort and even after all these years in Paris, the Eiffel Tower still gave him a shiver down his spine.. it was a feeling of romance, and of thrilling excitement.

If only Ashi was here, he thought. He would take her to the top of Eiffel Tower, and have a candlelit dinner with rock music for her. And then the lights would go out.. and there will be fragrance of roses.. her favorite flower. Then very slowly another tune would start, and they would start dancing to it. His hands on her hips and hers on his shoulders. Slowly they will be locked in a tight embrace.. and will never part. This has always been his favorite dream……

The visiting card was moistening Ashi's hand. She gripped it more tightly. The card was really tampered now. But she couldn't help it. She couldn't belive what she was seeing. Two names, stared back at her in bold blue letters.

Pierre and Yuvraj. Pierre and Yuvraj. She knew she had to choose, she had to choose between Pierre and Yuvraj.

"Ashi, give me one more chance please.. Mujhe patahai tum mujhe pyaar karti ho. Please Ashi."

And that day she had said no. And just like that, one day when she wanted him more than her life, wanted to take all her harsh words back, there had been nothing, only his picture..

For six years, she had comforted herself with his Picture. Then she had seen someone else. Pierre. She thought her head would burst with thoughts. Numbly she took her baggage and set foot to the Exit. In less than two minutes, she was outside.

She was in Paris. In the land of Pierre and Yuvi.

His phone rang interrupting his stream of conscious thoughts.

"Hello"

"Hi Dr. I am back from my trip to India. I think you will be happy with the results of the experiments."

"Great job, buddy."

He liked that boy. He was about his own age, but he was so much more full of life. In some ways, he reminded Yuvi of Ranveer. He was jolly and was a great asset to him in his medical processes.

"Thank you Dr."

"So how was India??? Did you like my motherland?"

"Yes Dr. and I met a girl on the plane. She was very elegant and beautiful.. she seemed really nice, and beyond words."

"Oh, great! Looks like you're in love huh?" Yuvi teased.

"Oh I don't know about love Dr. You know me. Never ready for a commitment.

"Anyway, what's her name?"

"Well, we didn't talk properly. Actually our baggages got misplaced. Her name is Anvesha Banerjee Ray."

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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
chooooo sweet

Shreyasi cant wait for the next part

plz post it soon

the first part was awesome! 😳 😳

i mean this one "The Eiffel Tower. Every time he looked at it, it seemed to him as if it looked back with the same affirmation, same benevolence and same potency. Its structure, somehow gave him comfort and even after all these years in Paris, the Eiffel Tower still gave him a shiver down his spine.. it was a feeling of romance, and of thrilling excitement.

If only Ashi was here, he thought. He would take her to the top of Eiffel Tower, and have a candlelit dinner with rock music for her. And then the lights would go out.. and there will be fragrance of roses.. her favorite flower. Then very slowly another tune would start, and they would start dancing to it. His hands on her hips and hers on his shoulders. Slowly they will be locked in a tight embrace.. and will never part. This has always been his favorite dream……"

plz continue soon

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#70
how dare u!!!! again leave the fic on such an interestin part shreyasi....anywayz im sure ur bored of my dares ;)
😉

anywazy it rocked!!!!as usual...the first n last part were damn gud...
waitin anxious for teh next part!! post it fast plzzzz!!!

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