One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
😳😳😳 there shreyasi uve got complimented by the forums best riter 😆😛
its brilliant u continue sooon pleeez i cant w8 for a n y to meet u cant keep us waiting lyk this
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: fate

well i dont read fics..and even if i do after the 1st or 2nd post.........i stop reading.......
but if i keep on readin then the fic has to b mind blowin
and i ve read all the parts till noe and i love it like hell......
tai..lekha bondho korar kotha bhuleo bhabo na...onek shomoy ppl dont have the time to post comments kintu taar mane aai noe je tomar fic ta bhalo na....well tumi jodi chao i promise i will post my comments after each part..fic ta totally onno rokom aar its awesome..tai taratari porer part ta lekho



yeah i agree 2 watever she said 😆 😆 😆 and shreyasi i do read yr fan fics but never commented on dem 😉 neways pls do continue 😃 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
hey shreya continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
hey Shreyasi

plz continue soon

the fanfic is fantablous

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 5

"Yes, I am Anvesha Banerjee Ray."

"Hello mademoiselle, is this your suitcase?"

"Yes.. uh its actually mine." Unbelievable, for the first time, someone other than Yuvi has made her blush.. blush deeply like a beetroot.

"thank you so much for this. I was really worried."

"Its my pleasure madam.."

Their fingers touched as they exchange the suitcases.. and again when they shook hands. His hands, somehow had an unbelievable refreshing feeling. They were a bit cold and the fingertips were red. But as they touched hers, an unknown message passed through them. It was as if the hands were saying I Love You. She knew she couldn't let him go. Last time, with Yuvi, she had been too late and had been sad beyond dreams. But at the same time it surprised her how fast she had forgotten Yuvi. How fast she had forgotten his element of charm, the person in a forest green "Shark Attack" T-Shirt which she distinctly remembered.. since she had known love, it has only been one.. now there was someone else. She couldn't let Pierre go. It would be too much pain again. She couldn't let love slip away for her grasp once more.

"Ok, I should really get going, Anvesha." She snapped out of her thoughts.

"Uh.. yeah. But I would have liked to know more about you."

" I am a simple person. I just graduated from Army College. My mother was British, but my parents separated a long time ago. I couldn't leave France. It was my life. But at the same time, I always took pride of my English heritage. I always wanted to be a doctor and save our brave comrades. That's why I went into army. I will start practicing soon. Now I am under one of France's most famous surgeons. But Anvesha, you are new to this place. Be careful and stay safe. Here's my card and please call me if you need some help.

And he was going. She couldn't hold him back, she couldn't form any words, and she just watched him go. And he went. Just as he was nearing the exit, he turned and waved. She waved back. It was when he was longer to be seen, she realized that she was clutching his card tightly. Now she smoothened it and looked lovingly at his name in bold blue letters.

Lieut. Col. Pierre Dupont Fulton. Jr.

Surgical Assistant to

Dr. Yuvraj Dev

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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
thxx for the comments.. really helped me 😳 😳

and if you don't remember, ashi is still in the airport and her baggage is misplaced..

please comment on this part !!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
oh my god!!!!!! this is what i call fate!! 😳 these two are meant to be together 😳 😳
the fic's awesome shreyashi i love it!!!!! just cont fast!!quick!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
haan this is mind blowin gr8 fantastic super cool jaldi cont karo i m very eager to know wht happens next plz cont fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59
wow !! its really mindblowing , mind blasting , todu fhodu types !! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
omgggggg shreyais its brilliant yaar continue soooooooooooooooooooooooooooon pleeeez 😭

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