One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 8

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Posted: 19 years ago
#71
ohhhhhhhh !!!!
a cliffie agn 😉
cmon now dont make us wait for tht long
plz post da nxt prt soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
oooooooooooooooooooooooo
damn cool
continue fassst 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73
its 2222222222 gud .plz conti soon.hope ashi chooses yuvi
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
shreyasi its roking again 👏 but do write long long long parts coz these small parts have much suspense 😕 which i dont like at all 😡
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey shreyasi you hv done a brillioant job you are an amazing writer i wish only i could hv a beautiful mind and imagination as you it was fantabulous i hv no words to show my joy oh my god u r amazin plz jaldi cont aro nahi to i will die of suspense 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey Shreyasi

plz continue naah

cant wait yaar

Divya
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey bhaggu.....
i luvvvvvvvv it shreyasi.......i luv it!!!!!!!!
You are talented yaar.......keep it up......
Plzzzzzzzzzzzzz conti soon . and of crse u deserve an applause...a big one 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this is wat i call ittefaaq or watever
plzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wooooooooooooooooooooooooo.......i jus cant w8 4 the nest part...post asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 7

"What did you say her name is again?"

"Anvesha. Anvesha Banerjee Ray."

"Ashi!".. his murmur was so slow that it was unheard of in the other side. He hung up without saying goodbye.

"Ashi….. the word was like music to his ears.. and today it sounded poison. He had always thought that Ashi was only for him. Ashi was his. And now Ashi had become Pierre's.

A single tear rolled down his eyes and landed on his cheeks. He couldn't stop himself. All these years he had waited for Ashi was now a failure, a barrier of time and he would give anything in the world to bring those years back. He couldn't, he knew he couldn't. Ashi was gone. He couldn't stop himself. All the tears for Ashi which he had somehow managed to retain in himself were worthless. And today the tears knew no bounds. Before he knew, he was crying like he never cried before, he was sobbing his heart out.. like he has never experienced pain before.. it was the heartrending sob of love. The tears glistened like diamonds on his cheeks only made brighter by the shining rays of the sun…..

Edited by devilangel - 19 years ago

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