One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 16

shreyasi u wrie just too good yaar too good
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da romance in this prt was so well written 😳 😃

cont soon plz 😃

shreyasi u wrie just too good yaar too good
👏

da romance in this prt was so well written 😳 😃

cont soon plz 😃

Wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww
how sweet yaar..............soooo romantic!!!
Keep it up shreyasi....man, i was enthralled!!!!

fantabulous
u left me speechless


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jaldi continue kar shreyasi
i m w8ing

Originally posted by: devilangel

Part 11

"Ashi…"

"Hi, psychotic he-man. Finally you recognized me." she said with a grimace..

"Ashi.."

"What duh-uh. Tell me what happened to you all these years. You and a suit. Hey Bhaggu! You're still the same Papa's boy right.."

"Ashi.. shhhhhhh.

He raised his right finger and out it over her lips. She stopped talking automatically and looked at him. He looked back. They both had eyes full of love, or in his case, brimming with tears.. he held her very close to him, he could her soft breathing and the gentle noise she making.. somehow it felt right to both of them, to snuggle closer and closer to each other and stare in each other's eyes.. they wished they could just be like that for the rest of their lives…he pulled her a bit closer .. their hands were touching each other and there was almost no gap between them.. they forgot where they were.. they forgot how they met, what had happened between them.. the only thing they cared about was about each other.. she could feel his arms stroking her hair… they had such a conveying message. His eyes.. his fingers.. his look.. they all conveyed the same look, everything seemed to have a feeling of love.. she felt protected in his arms.. she knew that no one could ever harm her now… this was the only thing worth living for.. this was how she wanted to die.. in his arms.. his hands were stroking her face now.. she rested slightly on his hand.. he lightly smelled her hair.. they smelled like little drops of heaven.. they were eternity.. now he could be in peace.. now he had nothing to regret..

Slowly he brushed his lips against her neck and rested his head against her.. slowly and tenderly.. he put his lips against hers and kissed .. it was a nice long kiss.. none of them wanted it to end.. it was a passion they have never felt for anybody else.. it was the feeling of infatuation, it was the feeling of devotion.. It was just what Psycho and Wacko would do..

Shreyasi,

u r Tooooo gud at this👏👏

this part was so real, so romantic,

it felt as if i was there wid Yuvi...😳

plz giving me sum coaching for writing fanficsss.... plzz

n continue soon

cant wait

Divya

Shruti,ami totally speachless tor fic ta pore. Jani na je ki bolbo but it is too good.

PS-toke ami pore pm korbo. Aaj time nei.Muah-muah.

hey shreyasi u wrote it so well
the scene u described seemed so complete n real
ur fic cant be described in words
u really deserve a grand round of applause yaar
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khush ho gaye naa??????? 😆

guys thxx for the comments .. i will cont soon but plzzz others read it na.. m feeling not many ppl like it

im speechless...it has touched me shreyasi! it has seriously

plz continue as soon as possible