One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53

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dia

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Posted: 19 years ago

#131

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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This part is OUT OF THE WORLD,I tell you!!! 😳
It's TOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
I TOTALLY loveeeeeeeeeeeee it!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#132

amazing , fantablous, fantasic, really gud

luved dis part

"He spun around. Yes.. it was her. It was Ashi. Ashi.. the girl about whom he had dreamt day and night.. he had always relished this moment.. that it would be a complete surprise..they would be lost in each others' eyes.. and he would kneel down in front of her, hold her hand and kiss it.. and later on propose to her in a hall full of tulips.. and sing to her the most romantic song .. and lift her in his arms and never let her go.."😳 😳

nicely written

plz continue soon

Divya

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Divya

@divya_92

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Posted: 19 years ago

#133

n sice when has my sweetheart Yuvi started wearing a dark blue/black suit with a marvelous blue silk tie??

i can imagine him a suit 😳 😳

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Alomi

@2kool

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Posted: 19 years ago

#134

damn cooooooooooooooooooooooooool
i luveddddd it 👏

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komal

@komal_ashiyuvi

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Posted: 19 years ago

#135

do continue soon shreyasi
i luved it 😊

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Saloni

@sal_remix

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Posted: 19 years ago

#136

hey shreyasi...please cont asap...amazing fic!
😃

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anushka

@anushka_ranveer

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Posted: 19 years ago

#137

the fanfic was just amazing
make longer ones
plzzzzz
n cont asap..
👏

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Charu

@cz13

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Posted: 19 years ago

#138

super duper todu-phodu fantastic
mind blowing

exceptionally good

u gotta cont fast 😉

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srkm

@srkm

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Posted: 19 years ago

#139

i read the last 3 parts 2day as my net was down for all these days...but readin the 3 parts together i can say its awesome!!!!!!
totally sufi!!!
plz continue fast n kill the suspense...i expectd their convo in this part but u nah shreyasi love killin me in suspense...
anywayz continue fast wid their convo...fast!!!! n sry for nt commentin these days...srry