One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 15

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Posted: 19 years ago
Alll da best shreyasi




Your fanfic was just SUPERB........................i luved it ; like always!!!!!! Keep up d talent dear and continue asap
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Posted: 19 years ago
shreyasi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue karo........

dekho ab plz kehne ke baad to kar do 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
all the best shreyasi 👍🏼 .
n plz do continue as fast as u could.
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Posted: 19 years ago
thxx guys i wil cont tomrrow
promise
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 11

"Ashi…"

"Hi, psychotic he-man. Finally you recognized me." she said with a grimace..

"Ashi.."

"What duh-uh. Tell me what happened to you all these years. You and a suit. Hey Bhaggu! You're still the same Papa's boy right.."

"Ashi.. shhhhhhh.

He raised his right finger and out it over her lips. She stopped talking automatically and looked at him. He looked back. They both had eyes full of love, or in his case, brimming with tears.. he held her very close to him, he could her soft breathing and the gentle noise she making.. somehow it felt right to both of them, to snuggle closer and closer to each other and stare in each other's eyes.. they wished they could just be like that for the rest of their lives…he pulled her a bit closer .. their hands were touching each other and there was almost no gap between them.. they forgot where they were.. they forgot how they met, what had happened between them.. the only thing they cared about was about each other.. she could feel his arms stroking her hair… they had such a conveying message. His eyes.. his fingers.. his look.. they all conveyed the same look, everything seemed to have a feeling of love.. she felt protected in his arms.. she knew that no one could ever harm her now… this was the only thing worth living for.. this was how she wanted to die.. in his arms.. his hands were stroking her face now.. she rested slightly on his hand.. he lightly smelled her hair.. they smelled like little drops of heaven.. they were eternity.. now he could be in peace.. now he had nothing to regret..

Slowly he brushed his lips against her neck and rested his head against her.. slowly and tenderly.. he put his lips against hers and kissed .. it was a nice long kiss.. none of them wanted it to end.. it was a passion they have never felt for anybody else.. it was the feeling of infatuation, it was the feeling of devotion.. It was just what Psycho and Wacko would do..

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Posted: 19 years ago
here is the next part guys hope you like it..

and plzz dont forget your comments good or bad 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
Good...NEVER!


Bad...Naaah!


It's BRILLIANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
FABULOUS!!!
is all i can say 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
FABULOUS!!!
is all i can say 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
HOW ROMANTIC...I LOVED IT SHREYASI..CONTINUE SOON PLEASE! 👏 👏

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