One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 18

Created

Last reply

Replies

382

Views

22.4k

Users

42

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

divya_92 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
allrite.. NP

make sure ur not late 😉 😆
coolniyu thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
hehe...so ontinue alredi 😉
and yep no porbs 😊
coolniyu thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
i have a feeling pierre is gonna cum into the picture sumhow anytime now 😭
ranv_rules thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 19 years ago
yaar shreyasi, ami aaj ke hi tor fanfic pod laam and i must say it is very good . khub bhalo . plz do not delay ne more . u r killing me. the last part was so good it was very touching.though i am a t-r fan i luved ur fanfic.ur other fanfic is also very good. do keep up the good work and conti asap. 👏

that's what ur fanfic deserves. u really do know how to make people speechless.

sagarika(ranv_rules)
devilangel thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago

Part 12

'Something in your kiss just told me…'

Slowly they broke apart.. even when they were not in each others arms.. being in the same place at the same time gave them both a feeling of protection. They were still absorbed in each other's eyes to talk.. and the warmth of their love seemed to flow in the room, giving it an amazing sense of passion.. tenderness.. compassion.. care..

***

He had started to knock on the door, when he happened to glance through the adjacent window.. it was her.. she looked very familiar to him.. he had thought about her all day. And she was there, with his boss, their love for each other apparent from their eyes.. this was what he had wanted with her. He had had no idea that she had known his boss. They were so immersed in each other that they didn't happen to glance at the window.. they didn't see someone standing there with an outwardly strong expression.. yet if one looked closely, one can see the unbearable pain and sadness which was present.. he was a Lieutant Colonel.. he had been taught never to shed tears.. never to give up anything on the basis of love.. he had been taught that love was baseless.. that one should never love something or somebody.. that he should always be prepared to sacrifice everything he had.. but today he actually sensed he was in love.. he could no longer deny the feeling which had been with him since yesterday. Now he had enough strength to admit it.. he was in love with Anvesha Banerjee Ray.

A single tear slowly dropped down his eye and reached his cheek..

***

He felt jealous of their luck together.. he felt despondent that someone else could have her.. he could still see her red steaks falling around her face.. but somehow he realized that even though he was not a part of it.. Love is in the Air.

devilangel thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
guys hope you like it..sorry for the delay.. was planning to post faster but just got from school cuz the metro got stuck..

thxx for the comments.
please comment good or bad!! 😳 😳
divya_92 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
Very nice Shreyasi... 👏 👏

btw.. u c im lazy to go through pages.. 😉 can u jus tell me whose tht Lieutant Colonel?? 😕 😕

will b waiting for u to post the next part soon

Divya
devilangel thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
Pierre is the Liuetant Colonel..remmeber when he gave ashi his card he was a doctor in the army working under yuvi..
divya_92 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
oh ya.... thanx

acheli i think i should hv my memory pills 😉

THanx again Shreyasi

Divya
cz13 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 19 years ago
too good prt shreyasi

post da nxt part soon plz plz 😃

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".