One Charm Forever.(Fic)Last Part Pg53 - Page 12

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Posted: 19 years ago
CONTnueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee fast plzzzzzzzz i am dying to noe d next part,.plz shreyasi..plzzzz
u r a roxtar yaar i was enthralled by yr fic,,,,,,i luv iT!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
its very good
plz continue fast
if u continue fast it
would be very very good
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Posted: 19 years ago
As usual khub bhalo hoeche 👏 . I hope tui janish je tor ki korte hobe........................................................ ............................................ekhono bhabsish 😕 😕 ?
Lekh 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey shreyasi plzzz continue soon
i m w8ing
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Posted: 19 years ago

Part 9

"Kya Bebasi Hai Yeh Kya Majbooriyan
Hum Paas Hai Phir Bhi Kitni Hai Dooriyan
Jism Tu Jaan Main Teri Pehcaan Mein
Milke Bhi Na Mile Yeh Hai Kaisa Bharam"

Helpless tears were falling from her eyes. The shock of the fact that her interview was going to be with Yuvi had still not absorbed in. "Why," she thought, "why are we all punishing ourselves like this, Yuvi? There is only a door in between us.. both of us on the other sides, and yet we are so far away. There is so much to tell Yuvi, so much to confess and so much to love. Please Yuvi, please come back to me.."

But she knew that all this would be of no help. Yuvi couldn't hear her, Yuvi couldn't hear the pain in her voice. The pain which has mingled with love..

Slowly, she raised her knocked on the wooden polish door. It was the ridiculousness of what she had done which dawned upon her. "This is Yuvi, psycho Yuvi, whom I have taunted my whole life. And today I am destined to call him 'sir' and knock on his door. Hey Bhaggu!" the thought made her smile even through all her despair.

"Come in." the voice which came from inside was dominant and had a touch of impatience but still in some ways it had the boyishness and carefree note which it held six years ago. Ashi noticed all this but there was not much she could do. She couldn't register the fact that Yuvi was ordering above him.

She turned the brass handle and went in..

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Posted: 19 years ago
guys i know this part is boring..
but the next one will be super interesting i promise..

so plzzzzzz comment and tell me how it ws
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Posted: 19 years ago
post the nxt 1 fast
dyin 2 knw wat happens!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was not at all boring it was super duper hit plz cont fast and isbaar next part jaldi cont karn varna mujhe heart attack ajayega suspense ke maare ter har part m ain suspense hota hai jaldi karo 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
😆 😆 thxxxx and i will cont fast
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Posted: 19 years ago
not boring but it made me curious lyk hell

gotta cont soon
i m waiting

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