Opposite Distracts:Part 3 on Pg. 4

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smriti

@FollowYourHeart

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#21

i am sowiee guys i was so not feeling well the entire day today i badly wanted to continue this even started writing wrote one para but again chakker aane lage i dunno whats wrong with me i feel drained out and weak all the time i was supposed to go back to delhi tonight but i am not in the halat only o am taking an off tom and staying back at home am really sowiee for the delay guys i am trying to write abhi if i dunt start feeling horrible again i wld definatly be able to finish it

and kaaaaaaar baby psycho's entry is not due for quite some parts Definitly not in the next part u got to wait like hell coz all the best moments always come after a while's wait but i hope whenever it comes u wld say the wait was worth it hehehe trust me am helll excited to write that paaaaaaaart.."tw'😉

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Natalie Abraham

@-DulceMaria-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#22

Hey Smriti,

first of all sorry for the late reply😳

Finally read the first chapter😳and loved it👏loved ur description of "Area Pink" and "Area Red"😆😆

As i already told u i love ur writing style, easy and unaffected😆

the best line is "perfume ranking 4th in the list of most hideous crimes"🤣🤣and that reptile wallies reminded me of Ashi's first day in Tia's room when she decorated the room wid pumpkins and bats🤣poor Tia fainted😆

Natalie.

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smriti

@FollowYourHeart

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: luv_huda
Hey Smriti,
first of all sorry for the late reply😳

Finally read the first chapter😳and loved it👏loved ur description of "Area Pink" and "Area Red"😆😆

As i already told u i love ur writing style, easy and unaffected😆

the best line is "perfume ranking 4th in the list of most hideous crimes"🤣🤣and that reptile wallies reminded me of Ashi's first day in Tia's room when she decorated the room wid pumpkins and bats🤣poor Tia fainted😆

Natalie.

😲oh my god now this is definatly a shockeeeeer😲😲its like so unexpected ki am just leftttttttt😲all i can say right now is eveeeeeeeeeeey😳🤗i lovee youuuuuu🤗trust me there is no as in nooooooooooooo feeling in this whole wide world than to be appreciated by some one you r close to😳😳😳 me definatly in seventhest of heaven nooooow🤗i wld rpely properly to what u wrote baad main ight now i seriously cna only say I LOVEE YOUUUUUU🤗

ps.....dulce chris siggy is making my heart raceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳some people compliment each other like so dammed well ki u can't help and wish them to be in the genre of "meant to be"😳😳😳

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aashni

@animateash

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#24

mannn m i dreaming or wat kya smriti singhvi wirting a remix ff ....i meannn prollly more focuussed on AY later dunnno but till nowwww it is obviosulyy remxi ff ..... but must sayy wateva u write u excel in anything u writeeeread both d partsss ......cutelyyy writteen ..... loved bth d episodesss ...... w8in for next part...

loved d description of rooomsssss mannnnn wat an apt onessss .......... and sonia-sumeet ki convo freakkk 22 cuteeeeee awww

luv ash

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Niyati

@hey.bhaggu

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#25

Continueeeeeeee karrrrrrrrrrrrrr warnaaaaaaaaa...warnaaaaaaaaaaa... main kary ko bol dungiiiii ki woh tere saath katti ho jayeeeeeeeeee! Hmphhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... 3 days mannnnnnnnnnnnn...3 dayyyssssssss... you know when i hadn't rpely u continued next day and when i did... u not continued till 3 daysssssssssss!😭😭 Not fairrrrrrrr... and tu ill haina? that's why continueee...writing is ur passion... and u will get so much lost into it that you will forget u ill😍😍☺️ And AY hoa tohhhhhhhhh....tohhhhhhhhh main tereko chocolate dungiiiiii and meri maggi bhiiiiiii!! Lekinnnnnnnnnnnn noooooooooo yuviiiiii till 3-4 partssssssss!!😭😭 Whyyyyyy bhaggu...mere saath hi aisa kyun karte ho aapppp?!?!😭😭 Main bechari kitniiii thristy hoon AY ke part ke liye just like koi water ke liye thirsty hota hain in middle of Sahara Desert😭😭😭 So finish 3-4 parts today... and bringgggggggggggg physcooooooo tomorrowwwwwwww 😍 Mera and wacko ka physco☺️☺️☺️

Continueeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee loonssssssssssssssss am dyinggggggggggggg to readddddddddddddd moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!

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smriti

@FollowYourHeart

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#26

guys me feeling loads guilty i know this fic contains parts and relationships which don't mean much to you all still u r actually reading and appreciating it and that is overwhelming me with joy trust me it takes a lot to read something u would not otherwise read i know u all r reading it just coz its in my pen and trust me am helll greatful for that i dunno why i decided to write a Remix cum AY FF perhaps coz i needed a bit of challenge i know i can do wonders with AY (becoz for me they themselves r the biggest wonder ever) and i know i can make u all dream with my words on them😆😆😳 but now i want to see whether u all end up liking things which i write on other characters or no so this definatly would be one of my biggest 'intihaan" as a writer😆😳 i hope i excel in this and my excellance cna be judged only by the deapth to which i manage to touch you by this😳😳 my fingers r definatly crossed and again i really do want to thank you all for being so patient i know every single eye is devouring this space and waiting desperatly for yuvi's arrival😳😳 bus thoda aur intazaar😳😳..and ya guys u al don't have to read it if u don't want to i know your biggest take away is AY here and i have committed the biggest sin in not bringing them till now, so i really won't mind if u guys want to skip these parts.... i know u al would be back with a bang as soon as our devil's THE biggest distraction enters this place😳😳..thank you all again for all the love u shower on me always....its hell humblinggggggg.."touch wood"😉...i wld reply to each one of u theek se later for now am posting the next part....might be a disappointment as sitll no Psycho😆😭..but still all i can do is hope u all like it😳.loads of loveeeeeeee🤗

Edited by smritisashi - 17 years ago

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smriti

@FollowYourHeart

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#27

Part Three

While Sumeet did not had to play tug of war to arrive at his princess's side, his path was almost as clear as crystal, as beautyful as the face that glowed in the hues of moonlight. Everytime he saw her face somewhere in his throat something tightened and he was always rendered speachless. there was something in that face of hers which could melt the toughest of men, just one glance and something in him would soften and he would end up wondering What did he do to be blessed with such an angel?

He had no answer but yes having her somehow strengthened his resolve to be a good man and to do as much good as he possibly can so that he is always rewarded with her. He just sat there and held her small palms in his hands and remembered all those times when he had walked her down the aile of life. And soon very soon that day would arrive when he would have to walk her down and hand her over to her Prince Charming, and just the thought of it made a tear drop from his eyes, the only solace being that her choice of a man made him swell with pride.

On the other hand Ashi's Mother India had to creep and crawl through the maze of shoes and skates, tennis raqets and basket balls, music CDs and bubble gum wrappers, used towels amd soiled socks, by the time she finally reached her Sleeping Beauty she was panting for breath. Reaching her was so not easy, it was almost as if she deliberatly errected these walls around her, but which wall ever had the strength to stop Sonya? she could demolish the greates of walls in no time at all, if she knew that at the other side of the wall lied her biggest treasure, her Mummum.And right that moment her Mummum was just at her arm's length. Sonya sighed with blissful contenment and lovingly looked around at all the "mess" that guarded her daughter's dreams.

For Sonya this has never been "mess". Insted this chaos always represented movement of life and the unbelievable amount of energy that Ashi poured in every single minute of life, to her it was a mark of the amount of sweat and blood spent by Ashi during the day and her that day's accomplishment, it represented her daughter's honest hard work and her clean conciesnce which would gaurantee her the luxury of sound sleep even in th middle of he dirtiest of litter. Both for Sonya and her Mummum this "mess" was nothing but the feeling of coming home and for Sonu home was wherever She resided.

The sight of her was enough to fill Sonya with life, her heart would start jumping and pumping and beating so fast and loude that the whole world could witness her exhellarating joy. She would be sweapt with waves and waves of happyness and all she would want to do is cuddle her little baby in her armsss and rain showers and showers of kisses on her cheecks, her forehead, her eyes, her eyelids, her ears, her little round round noseyyyyy. She could never undertand this feeling, it was like the most insanest of all feelings, anyone watching would think she is mad totally mad, and she knew even then ki she was bubbling with madness but there was no which way she oculd control this lunatic love she felt for her dotty and right then and thee she pounced on her bed like a hungry tigeress and wrappped her little cub in her embrace, the cub wiened for a bit, but then settled peacefully in the most beautyful haeven bhaggu had carved out for her

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gungun

@gungun

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#28

oh smriti cho cheet of ju jaar

tu kya likhti hai ekdum dhansu

n turi pitai hone wali hai

tu soch bhi kiase sakti hai ki hume yeh part acha nhi lagega idiot

ya i know we all missing our yuvi in dis fic coz hez yet 2 cum but jo parts tu likh rhi hai woh bhi kam important nhi hai

n believe me v all r luving it

bs aap aise hi jaldi jaldi continue krte rho

n humein Apni ki fic ke roop mein itni saari khushiyaan deta rho hamari yehi mansha hai

jai smriti devi ji ki

jai hooooooo

hehehehe

Luv u

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smriti

@FollowYourHeart

Stunner

Posted: 17 years ago

#29

gunnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn its like so aweosme to see youuuuuuuuuu after ages kahaan vanish ho jaaty hai reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee and lolz mansha and all hun when r u fulfilling my mansha wen am i getting u me and hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm??? i guess ab mujhe hunger strike pe jana padega only then u wld satisfy my hunger for your fiiiiiiiiic

and ash oh my god u read thissss😲😲 its definatly a shocker i know man i myself am shocked big time to see how well i have written on characters which i don't even like😆🤣 but guess thats my achievment as a writer😳😳 and am way too proude of iiiiiiiiit😃😳"touch wood"😉

would rpely to both of u theek se later but for now me so happy to see u guys hereeeeeeee😳😳

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funky n crazy

@funky n crazy

Inactive

Posted: 17 years ago

#30

attentnnnnnnnnnnnn attentnnnnnnnnnnnnnn attentnnnnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i am here to do the honours of giving my criticl yet not so criticl but luvabl n nice n senti n thghtful n enthu n funny n simpl n well m outta wrds REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

1stly i wud lyk 2 thnk smriti 4 d invite 2 read d nxt 2 parts 2ndly i wud lyk 2 thnk my gharwaale 4 nt bargin in2 my room while i ws goin thrgh d fic askin me 2 switch of d lappyyyyy!!!!!! yayyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!

okk nw as i wud lyk 2 point out in a v nice criticl appreciatv manner!!! i hv heard of xzooooooooor ki BHOOK lagi haiiiiiii zoooooooooooor ki lagi hai asin no 1 or no 2 zooooooooor ki gussa aayaaaa haiiiii zooooooooooor ki rona aaya haiiiiii but neva til date until todayyyyyyyyyyyy hv i heard zoooooooooooooooooooooooor ki yaaaaaaaaaaaaad aa rhi haiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it felt sooooooooooooooo nice n wrm evn 4 sumthn tht mde no sens at al n was meant 2 b funny! mde me laff but mde me undastnd n feel d depth of d relatnship b/w dis mothr dotty duo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! hats off 2 u 4 it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

also d wayyyyyyy in whch uv put across sumeet n sonya as a coupl discussin deir kids tlkin lyk deir kids...."KIDDY" influenccccccc!!!!! its mindblowinnnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!! mujhe nhi pata ki real life mein parents actlly strt reflectn like dis or no! yaaaa its possibl papa's do but i cudnt hv imagind tht 4 mummassssss! n well hre uv mde me c tht dse who r luckyyyyyyy wth thm its possibl 4 bth mummas n papas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

its beautiful in d way uv distictvly yet agn brght out d contrastinnnnnnnn images of ashi n tia wth d descriptn of deir surroundins!!!! like it goes!!!!!!! surroundins speak loadssssssssssss 4 u!!!!!!!!!!! evn betta was d way u describd how each sonya n sumeet find deir dghtrs impecbly pretty 4 deir small lil mannerisms n thghts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its really brings vrythn alive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

as amttr of fct no1 cn eva replce ashi in sonnya's life no mttr hw much she luvs thm cuz d luv she has 4 ashi cn neva b compard 2 tht whch she hs 4 ny1 els in dis wrld!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

n d way sumeetrecvs happinss in d fct dat sonya is sooooooooooooo attachd 2 her dghtr is probably sumthn i stil cnt undastndddddd!!!!!!!!!! but dre is sumthnnnnn bout it whch feeeeels ryt!!!!!!!!!! n dat vry fact is enuff 2 convinc me 2wrds it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

all in all gr8 goin!

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