Opposite Distracts:Part 3 on Pg. 4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: smritisashi

Part One

The scene is set in a very dangerous room, which can smolder into flames ANYTIME

One quarter of the room was painted in pretty pink and was stuffed (suffocated rather😆😆) with dozens of soft toys from bears to dolls from ellys to mickys it had it all and to add to the misery of 'someone' it also smelled of lipstick and nail paint of allovera and cucumber. In short it had all the ingredients to bring vomit to 'someone's' throat.

The only gleam in such a big disaster being a bedside photo frame, which hoisted the smiling face of 'someone's' best friend, his eyes asking her to take care of his princess. It was only because of Him and her Mom that this 'someone' was tolerating all the bimboness around her

But then this 'someone' was no less was she? She knew how to throw her weight around when the need be. Just a look at her quarter could make 'someone' else feel the acute paucity of oxygen in her lungs. What with the deadly red colored walls that symbolized blood, the gory reptile posters, heaps and heaps of mashed clothes that did not even had the aroma of a perfume (which in 'someone's' eyes stood 4^th in her list of most hideous crimes anyone could ever commit), loads and loads of junk food which gave 'someone' nightmares full of pimples and obesity😆😆😆.

The only thing that stopped 'someone' from fainting was a collage full of beautiful memories and amidst those was the memory of the wedding day of her father, the day, which blessed her not just with a mother but also a sister and gave her the family she had alwas dreamt of having

And in between the two unmistakeably different corners lied the No Man's Land, a land especially carved out by their parents in order to maintain the MUCH NEEDED sanity of their brains😆😆 Thye had deliberatly colored this area in white because white is the only color which was made by blending all other clolors including "red" and "pink"

The room was unique and so were the two individuals living in it. They were poles apart and most of the time they were each others biggest itch but there were moments which melted their facade. In Red's case it was the sight of pink sleeping with her teddy tucked in one arm and a shy smile etched on her face which made it obvious that her Prince Charming was visting her in her dreams.....a sight that always made Red's eyes moist and made her heart vow to always preserve her happyness

And in Pink's case it was the sound of her snoring which woke her up every morning and made her see the shining sun flaming in her red hair...this was a moment when she always realized that the brigtness in Red's eyes had always reminded her of the sun's light, that there was some similarity between Red and the sun, that both filled her with a massive sense of security...a belief that at the end of the night dawn would break and both the sun and Red would be there to vanquish her darkness....

shuckssss..... wat are you upto gurl.. hey bhagguuu 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆, m laughing like a crazy clown man.. the description of the first room was fir bhi understandable, but the second one was a warland.. hey bhagguu 😆 😆 😆 😆, fancy me reading it yaar.. hey bhaggu goshy.. m reading further, and laughing, reading further and laughing.. seems a lauging gas is passed by u..(ooucchh that was rude 😉) definately Sonia Ray wuld be Sonia Ray, she will not change, just marrying to a Mr. plaster of Patyala... 😆 😆 😆, ossumm gurl... sahi tha... why would she change her identity, why? why? why? definately not man !! shuckss.. Aashi wuld have killed her if she wuld have changed her surname to Ahuja, definately aashi wuld start up with a crowd of people, a full on MORCHA, if she would have joined the Ahuja Clan.. thats a No NO rite !! 😛 😉 😆 already the poor red head is suffering an indigestion, so true man..😆 😭 the adjectives that you have used to portray Sonia's madness for her Mumum is just accurate gurl...the bestest Mommy Dotty jodi ever present, awww the nest para was like aww aww aww.. that is the beauty of yr fics sim, once you bring humour, then the very next moment, you are in sync of a emmotional but so true words man.. hatts off.. definately Aashi was always Sonia's strength and vice-cerse, both were oxygen to each other man, her prayers with bhaggu is genuine man, may it be she becoming the queen of the Ahuja Kingdom, or Queen of Buchingham Palace , doen't matter 😛, aww that was really great gurl... the Aura of aashi cannot be replaced by ne1 under the sky man , you have acctually written a great irony, that she was her biggest strength and her only weakness man.. that is chow true..😛 , that was it man when Aashi was wid Sonia, going away from Aashi for Sonia wuld be like death, her sustainability would get a fullstop, I respect this mommy dotty relationship a lot man.. goodness sim, you have beautifully presented the birth of ashi, cotton feathers, tiny hands trying to grasp Soniya, oh my god.. that is just fantastic gurl.. I was just gazing, and eyes gleaming at that very sentence bacchaa.. awww that was really touchy man, love you...👏 simply beautiful, I am still awing yaarrr... m feeling as if m seeing the chotu baby in Sonia's hands, I can imagine the moist eyes of Sonia at hat time man, hey bhaggu, she would have felt to be the happiest person not alive in the universe, but the happiest person ever born.. goodness. that was simply outstanding man..👏 😛 😉 aaj bhi Aashi kitni badi kyu nah ho jaye uske liye bacchi hi rahegi, that is the case with all of us rite.. our parents are equally possessive for us, I can now imagine how my mom must have felt when I was born.. aww.. m geting emmotional.. no no.. I wanna laugh..😆 😆 goshhyyyyyyy wats this... hey bhagguu.. she wanna pee at 3:00 damn cool, arey toh ismein burai kya hai, we have the rite to pee whenever we want, just open the toilet door, sit on the pot, and relaaxxxx awwwww how satisfying rite.. 😆 😆 😆, Tum kabhi Buddhe nahi Ho Paogey, Kyunki Mien TumHara Khoon Kar Doongi.. hey bhagguuu... damn cool re... that was an icecream to me... fab fab fab.. see a I said, at one moment you will fill our hearts with emotions, and a no. of emoticons flying, and on the very next sec you will make us laugh, rite now with toilet jokes..😳 wattt wat.. sey mumum ki yaad aa rahi thi... hey bhagguu.. tu nah sim ki bacchi... I didn't know this, m reading each line and replying.. marungi tujhey moti chudail..😆 that was rocking man... tumhe godi mein uthakar le jao.. abey mar jayega, she is not feather weight (com'on accept it Sonia 😆 ) awwwwwwwwww the last one was the limelight I guess.. that was way too touchy yaarr sim.. both loved their daughter choww much nah... m reading the third part and replying.. abhi tak between one and two, the second one is my fav. I thoroughly enjoyed it man..😛

hmmmm.. so finally both the ppl are gng to visit the beauties of their lives.. awww Sumit's feeligs for Tia.. hey bhaggu.. well I think this is the very first time that I am reading Sumit and Tia.. but believe me, yr words have made me feel Tia also, this is great huh!! but I respect Sumit's feelings as he is a father, and a father's emotions for his daughter is unexpressible, we can just feel it and thats what I am doing, he will definately feel that he is blessed to ave an angel like her, that what u have said nah!!! Sumit wants to do better an better to have his Tia always with her, that is just so relative man. one day he will have to give her hand in her prince charming's hands, awwww that is so tue, missing you dad, lets go for a bike ride.. hehehee... that is what every father feel when he is blessd with a daughter, I swear and every1 will agree to this, that fathers are really possessive than mothers man, but incase of humari rocking mommy dotty jodi, its a bit different, cause they are unique man. I realy knew this that she will have to acctually take an adventure before reaching her dotty, and thats what happened nah,Ashi's Mother India had to creep and crawl through the maze of shoes and skates, tennis raqets and basket balls, music CDs and bubble gum wrappers, used towels amd soiled socks, by the time she finally reached her Sleeping Beauty she was panting for breath. I swear.. this is our Aashi.. seedha kaam ho jaye then kaheki aashi huh?? if you wanna reach the DIVA, struggle hai nah!! awww hat was beautiful man.. seems you have the talent of creating a hurricane of words, man yu express it so excellently, that we have no other option but to read further gurl.. fantastic.. m chow luving it man.. hey bhaggu.. Sonia' passion for Aashi yesh.. thats what I can say, Sonia's passion for aashi is like great man, no barrier is barrier for her, no wall is wall for her when it cums to her Aashi man. hey bhagguu oopzz when it cums to her mumum man.. awww that is chow cute man.. hey sim.. luving this part also..Sonia is a mother who will do nething but mend Aashi's flaws, she is the one who will take ou only positive points no matter whatever Aashi does, she will not stand by her, but infront of her when an obstacle is gng to come and touch her mumum, she wuld go beyond her limits when it is the topic of her mumum man.. m too ggn so philosophical, but m enjoying every bit of it man.. m really sorry for replying so late gurl, me chow unlucky to read this extravagnza so late.. we we we..(m clying) Aashi's 'MESS' can never be treated as mess with Sonia man, she wuld be like do it more mumum, that wuld pass a feeling of pleasure and pride to Sonia, as a typical acchi bacchi types dotty wuld not be our Aashi, she hs to be unique, and she is wat say ppl ? only the sight of aashi can fill Sonia with delight man, aashi's presence in Sonia's life is more than nething, as I said Oxygen, that is what both are for each othe rman, just way to to tooo amazing, I really respect and cherish both of these ladies man, this is my fav. para from the entire fic, man.. it is simply great, I truely loved this one as it shows the essence of insaneness in Sonia, The sight of her was enough to fill Sonya with life, her heart would start jumping and pumping and beating so fast and loude that the whole world could witness her exhellarating joy. She would be sweapt with waves and waves of happyness and all she would want to do is cuddle her little baby in her armsss and rain showers and showers of kisses on her cheecks, her forehead, her eyes, her eyelids, her ears, her little round round noseyyyyy. She could never undertand this feeling, it was like the most insanest of all feelings, anyone watching would think she is mad totally mad, and she knew even then ki she was bubbling with madness but there was no which way she oculd control this lunatic love she felt for her dotty and right then and thee she pounced on her bed like a hungry tigeress and wrappped her little cub in her embrace, the cub wiened for a bit, but then settled peacefully in the most beautyful haeven bhaggu had carved out for her.... simply outstandin work yaarr simi... I wanna read more more more more more more and more... come onn.. write or else be ready to grave in the cemetry okk..

Originally posted by: ash419

omg, that last part was adorable smriti! u no i thought that romance is the onli thing i like to read about.. bt on reading this fic uv made me remember how beautiful other relationships can be too.. howw much a daughter can mean to a father and a mother! just toooo sweet! cant wait to read more!! 😳😊

Luv

Ashma

post the update na Simmmmmmmmmmmmmmm😡

patience maate patience😆😆😆