Opposite Distracts:Part 3 on Pg. 4 - Page 2

wooooooow gleeeeeeen😳😳 i couldn't believe my eyes wen i saw u😆 i need to confess ki u were t one for wome i ended up writin dis u were cravin for a remix ff and unfortunatly not many pople write one dese days so i decided to write one in my own pen😳😳.feeeeeeeels superb to know daaat u liked it gleeen taaaanx for motivatin me to write one seriously i decided to write it only coz u requested one😳..muaaaaa sweety😳

When i read ur first line i was confused... bt after reading the whole thing it makes perfect sense :)

Oh k now i just read the 2nd part 😳 What an adorable family! uv reli shown the mother-daughter bond wonderfully!

Seriously, this is the first ff of urs im reading, and im like WOW, its fabulous!!😃

Luv

Ash

tu meri jaan leka hi manegi

1st tune itni achi start di hai apni fic ko ki mein 10 tymes padh chuki hun but very tym i read it i feel im reading it 4 1st tym n dis 2nd part is making me laugh everytym

hs hs ke my stomach is aching

2nd is baat pe toh faint hi hone wali thi

aapne itni jaldi continue kri apni fic

shayd hum pe reham aa gya hoga

hahahah js joking gurl

u know i luv ur writing skills so i dont think i'll repeat it once again but i'll luv 2 repeat it dat I LUV U smritu 4 dis GR8 FIC

u rock looony

u really do

chao

Gun😊

Firstlyyyyyyyyy...whennnnnnnn I readddddddddd the titleeeeeeeeee "REMIX" I just couldn't believe my eyesssssssss... I mean youuuuuuuuu and remixxxxxxx ficccccccc?? But I know its AY fusioned Remix☺️☺️ So its gonna be like July 2005!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! except it wont be much of romance😆😳 it would be fultoooooooooo AY flavorrrrrrrrr!☺️☺️☺️ Neways dicusssing that later when i will ask u to continue...right now lemme put my thoughts on part 1 and 2!😳😳

Starting with the beginning of the ficcy...loons this is totally opposite ur genre and I am so proud of you that u went and tried something new and different...something that is new to you!😳😳🤗 And trust me you rock at this toooooooo! You definatly rock in potraying inner feelings and thoughts but u hardly did with their outer feelings...even in part one it was mainly inner feelings and setting...but still it had this genre you are potraying too! And I simply love it! You kniw I love the way u did contrast of ashi's room to tia...where ashi's color is red...color of passion and color of intensity, tia's color is pink...color of sweetness and color of affection. One is bold and other is soft...you have soo perfectly described their room with their personality and beautifully contrasted with each other! But I felt that "NO ZONE" should be a "COMMON ZONE" because that would be the only zone where their thoughts and feelings would meet. No zone tells it doesnt even exsist...but common zone or something like that would be like you know potray their whole relationship. Tia-Ashi's...where they are in two opposite directions but their path for acheivement is same (common zone is gonna be white leading to door)...i don't even know if i make sense but I actually after soo many days made some interpretation! Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy! though wat u wrote in part one is exactly was it is i guess!😆

And I love how you used red and pink symbolizing ashi and tia's character...but I like all...was loving the last two para... it was actually how it was in remix...they both HATED each other but still they loved each other!😆😆😳 I loved how u described ashi's character and tia pov towards ashi... her red hair shinning from the ray of sun and ashi giving tia a feeling of security! Loved it man... see you actually know tia's character soo well...that's why u timboooooooooo...samji timbooooooooo?🤣 :*:*:*:*

Coming to part twoooooooo... mereko zorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr ki aa rahi hainnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...ekdum zorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr kiiiiiiiiiiiii... ashi-soniaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and AY ki yaadddddddddddddddd😭 Sacchiiiiiiii...me miching themmmmmmmmm😭😭😭 And I loveddddddddddd this parttttttttttt... mummaaaaaaaaaa is soooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeee... man I loved that u kept her SONIA RAY... you kept her as an independent woman... and just loved how u described it... Sonia-Sumeettttttttttt... mannnnnnnnnnnnnn they are soooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeee... I can imaginee sonia all on sumeet🤣 Mannnnnn what a couple! 🤣🤣🤣 But what touched me was the last bit... not sumeet-tia fan...but I loved how u potrayed a feeling of a parent for a child and how it should be!😳😳 Loved how u showed the inspiration of sumeet's life...sonia☺️☺️ just like ashi is yuvi's inspiration!☺️☺️ Ashi-Sonia are poles apart but still they soo similar naa?😳😳 I just loveeee themmmmmmmmm!!

And that's why I love this title...Opposite distractions... hahaha...everyone is poles apart if we look from different perspective. Tia-Ashi, Ashi-Yuvi and Sonia-Sumeet are obvious but so are Sonia-Ashi😳😳 Loved the titleee...PERFECT title u knowwww...opposite distracts🤣🤣🤣 It does...surely does after I know the future of this ficcy🤣 Man i can't waittttttttttttttt for you to conitueeeeeeeeeeeeee loonssssssssss...continue jaldiiiiiii and pleaseeeeeeeeee bring my physco jaldiiiii...abhi se missing him☺️ you see ur fic. seems soona without physco and wacko in it☺️

CONTINUE SOON and its an ORDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry to keep u waiting kaar i had thought of continuing this weekend but fell ill again😡😡 but u don't worry i wld see if i can continue htis tom wld try my besht😳 am not going to kepe u all waiting for eternity for thi one coz oh well am like hell excited to bring in her heman asap😳

and mahiiiiiiiiii oh my god mahi its so good to see u in here and i can't believe u have read my purana work😲😲😲 a new day perhaps was my first one shot ever😲 gee its a humbling feeling reeee😳😳 thankoo so so muuuch even am quite fond of that shot😳..especially the end i was myself amazed ao how beautyful it turned out to be😆😳😳

waiting for your views on this one i seriously hope u like it and its not a disappointment😳

continue whn u r fine smrit...........wll wait......i ws also excited abt the entry of yuvi in the nxt part.......