ALZIA - NEK DIL ZAALIM... Pt9 - pg10 - Page 3

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it was really a vry touching update...

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Yaaar now another one I started reading and such an amazing and passionate one aur isko bhi beech mein chod diya aapne and at that time only when things just started getting so heart achingly amazinggg...please please please im begging u to write more and more and more.

NEK DIL ZAALIM

PART 4

Razia: Kya hum jaa saktein hain? She asked as if completely unaffected

Altunia: Ji. He whispered with his back towards her.

Razia walked towards the exit with firm steps, but halted at the door and turned to look over her shoulder.

Razia: Mohobbat... Aitbaar... Jisney humein karna sikhaya, aap wahi hain ya koi aur?

A tear escaped from the corner of her eye as she walked out leaving Altunia standing alone looking at her trailing figure.

***

It was about evening when Razia saw Chanda walking towards her in the royal garden's of Bhatinda. Razia from this day forward had decided that she would not stay locked up in her room. Yes, she was very much a prisoner in Altunia's palace, but she commanded her special place in his palace and in his life.

She had been walking outside all afternoon not able to erase the morning episode from her memory; His painful eyes, his hurtful words to her and his wound which was becoming worse with each day.

Chanda: Sultan aaiye, ander chaliye... aap kai ghanton se bina kucch khaaye piye yahan bahar ghoom rahi hain, aise toh aap bimar pad jaayengi.

Razia: hum theek hain chanda. Bohot dino baad yeh nazarah naseeb hua hai humein. Yeh doobta hua sooraj humein yeh ehsaas dila raha hai ki apne mann ke samundar mein humne kya kucch duba dala. Is nazaare ko dekh humein pehli baar yeh ehsaas ho raha hai ki sultan bante bante humnein kitne urse pehle hi razia ko mita dala.

Chanda: Shehzaadi ek baat kahein?

Razia: Kaho?

Chanda: Humare liye, aap aur aapki izzat se badkar kucch nahi. Humaari mane toh aap Subedaar sahib se door hi rahiye.

Razia frowned hearing her say something like that and asked: Kyun?

Chanda: Jitna dikhta hai usse kai bada hai yeh sab. Aap chahe maanna chahe ya nahi, par na toh aap ab sirf razia hain naahi woh Mirza. Aaj aap Razia Sultan hain aur woh Mallik Iqtiar-ud-din Altunia.

Razia: tum kehna kya chahti ho?

Chanda: Aap khud hi samjhdar hain shehzaadi ... woh waqt aur tha jab sultan altamush ne aapka nigaah Mirza se taih paaya tha, aur yeh baat kisi se chhupi bhi nahi hai. Gustakhi maaf ho shehzaadi par aapka... ab unki begum ke kamre mein rehna aur is tarah unse kareeb rehna... bolne wale toh baat banayenge hi.

Razia's lips pressed into a thin line: kiski itni zurrat hogayi ki woh humpar tohmat laga sake?

Chanda: chhota muh badi baat shehzaadi... par kis kisko chup karwayengi aap? Sach toh yahi hai ki Razia aur Sultan mein se ek ko toh mitana hi hoga aapko.

Razia without a word turned around and walked straight towards the Subedaar's chambers. Some things were to be cleared.

***

Altunia sat in the court discussing the important matters regarding the welfare of Bhatinda with his ministers and other darbaaries and amirs, when a gulam came running inside and recited the happenings in the royal chamber of Altunia. Altunia's lips formed a slight smile and he dismissed the court to leave for his chamber. As Altunia approached his room, he saw some bandhian coming out of his chamber with piles of his clothes he had not seen for months now. Two men came out holding a large trunk as they bowed slightly and walked out. Bewildered Altunia walked inside.

The Sultan walked around with firm steps ordering Gulams around as she set her trunk full of her cloths and jewels in his chamber. Altunia couldn't help but notice with regard that she had made sure only his old stuff and things which he didn't use anymore were taken out to give room for her belongings.

Altunia: Uhmm!! He cleared his throat to gain attention. Razia turned around to see him and the qadims bowed down in respect.

Altunia: Taqlia... The qadims and gulams left the chamber and Altunia, without reacting to any of the changes in his bedroom quietly moved towards the large mirror kept in the right most corner. He swiftly took off his rings and placed them on the dressing table.

Razia found his calm demeanor rather absurd. Awkward she broke the silence in the room. Razia: Hum uss tang kamre mein nahi rahenge. To her utter surprise Altunia payed her no attention. He quietly moved to remove his neckpiece and brushed his jaw line lightly looking in the mirror.

Razia continued: Hum yahan, issi khwaab ghah mein rahenge... (She said looking in the mirror to read his expressions, which were the same) Aur waise bhi aaphi ne waada kiya tha humse ki is mahel ka yeh bardhe jharokhe wala karma humara hoga.

This time there was a brief moment when Altunia's hand froze for a second but then he continued to open the buttons of his sherwani. He remembered his gift to her minutes before she was about to get married to Yaldoz a few years ago. A smile played on his lips but he very well knew that his moharma was up to something quite big this time. Something which could cost him big time.

Razia irritated with his ignorance towards her walked and stood in front of him facing the mirror. Razia: Aap chaahein toh chhat par jaakar so sakte hain... MALIK SAHAB.

Altunia looked at her tight lipped and then stepped a little to the left and opened the remaining buttons. Razia annoyed to the utmost stepped in front of him again and moved her hair to one side over the right shoulder and started removing her jewelry. Not realizing that her bare back was in complete view to the Subedaar. Altunia inhaled a deep breath and looked at her reflection with dangerous eyes.

Razia: Ab yeh humaara khwaab ghah hai. Toh yahan ki cheezein bhi sirf hum hein istamaal karenge. She was unscrewing her left earring, when she gasped with an unknown pleasure as she felt the back of his right hand on the nape of her neck slowly moving down her bare back.

His deep eyes were fixed on her in the mirror as his hand moved further down to the dori on her lower back. Razia tried hard to control the sudden upheaval of emotions she felt but her body gave away. She was breathing heavy, her eyes going dizzy and she tried to think fast to escape his slow torture.

Altunia: Kya aap jaanti hain log humare bare mein kya kehtein hai? He whispered in her ear making her shiver slightly. Altunia with his other hand took the earring she was removing, relaxing her arms down and taking the earring out himself.

Razia: Haan!

Altunia: Agar hum dono issi tarah pesh aate rahe toh who sab baatein sach hojaayengi. He pulled her a step back while saying this and her back hit his bare chiseled chest making Razia let out a sigh and closing her eyes to escape the moan. She forced herself to control her feelings and opened her eyes to look into his in the mirror.

Razia: Aap yahi toh chahtein hain? Humein... Jisse aap apni mohabbat kehtein hain usse ek chalta phirta mazaak bana diya hai aapne. Ab ek aur mauka miljaayega bhatinda ke kaneezon ko, Dilli ki Sultan ko aapki rakhel bolne ka???

Altunia's blood boiled hearing her words, how could she think so low of him. Altunia: Khuda gawah hai... Agar Mirza ko yahi karna hota toh saalon pehle hi kar chukka hota.

Razia: nahi kar sakte the aap. Agar saalon pehle hi humein haasil karlete toh phir dilli ke takht ko kis tarah hathiya te?

Altunia: Be tuk ki daleelein pesh mat keejiye Razia... humne faisla karliya hai, logon ka muh band karne ka ek hi tareeka hain. Hum agle jumme nikaah karenge.

Razia: Hum aapse nikaah nahi karenge!!! She almost shouted.

Altunia, filled with rage, dug into her arm and turned her around forcefully to face him. Strands of Razia's hair fell on his cheeks and neck as he pinned her to him. Her hands locked in his at the back. They both were nose to nose.

Altunia: Uss Habishi ki mehbooba banne mein toh aapko koi harz na tha. Hum aapse pooch nahi rahe! Hum aapko bata rahe hain.

Razia: Hum agar nikaah karenge toh sirf apni mohabbat se. Kissi badzaat baadshah se nahi.

Altunia: Muaaf kijiega mohatarma! Aapka nikaah agar hoga toh sirf humse. Woh bhi agle jumme. Warna hum aapko bhi wahin pohacha denge jahan aapki uss namurad mohabbat ko pohchaya tha.

With this he left her and turned around. He took off his sherwani and through it on the bed in anger. Altunia: Aur haan ek aur baat. (He said with his back towards her) Aap yahan rehna chaahein ya mehel ke kissi aur kamre mein aapki marzi. Lekin sirf chaar dino tak. Uske baad aap yahan humaari begum banker rahengi. Allah aapko sukoon bakshe!

And he left her standing there with utter hatred for him and herself.

***

Next: Razia's night in Altunia's Bedroom J

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Mash'Allah Subhaan'Allah !

itna intense !! Haaye

and finally yaar you gave an update. You should have continued it like this only na. Khair ab next update mein 3 months ka gap nahi daalna please.😛

this was the most intense and passionate proposal ever. Zubaan pe na-na aur dil mein haan haan 😳😆

I really like how you make mirza so dominating in a romantic way that cant be resisted yaar hats off to that.

"Hum aapse pooch nahi rahe aapko yeh keh rahe hai"

Also the way you have portrayed their characters are awesome.

this was just tooo awesome. ...I cant wait to read more and ur precap got me all excited ...pleaseee update sooon pleaseee. ...real soon...infact aaj ya kal hii 😃

After a long time... A great update!

IT'S REALLY A GREAT UPDATE I LOVED IT MUHAHH... UPDATE THE NEXT PART SOON

I was waiting for this update for a long time.