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Posted: 10 years ago
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ZAAALIM ...tick tock...update kithey hai 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NEK DIL ZAALIM

PART 6

Razia: Humme hamari mohabbat lautta saktein aap??? She asked innocently.

There was an instant rage that filled Mirza's eyes. His hold around her tightened and lips got pressed together hiding his gritted teeth. But then seeing the softness in her eyes, the eyes which were void of any emotion for over a month, he tried hard to calm himself down, closing his eyes... taking in a deep breath in her long luscious hair curls and moving his lips to her ears; He spoke firmly making his each and every work clear to her.

Altunia: Aaj bhale hi humaari mohabbat aapke liye kam padrahi ho...

Razia's eyes moved back to their reflection in the mirror; her teary eyes sparkling in the dim light of the candles. (Imagine them to be standing in the dark with just a few candles around, enough for Razia to their reflection. The reflection is almost like that of the two standing in spotlight in a dark room)

Altunia bit her earlobe lightly making Razia hiss in pain closing her eyes. Altunia: Lekin ek waqt toh tha na... jab humari mohabbat hi aapkeliye mukammal jahan ke barabar thi? He spoke in a dangerously intimidating voice.

Razia tried to explain: Aap samajh nahi...

But Mirza was quick to silence her keeping his finger on her lips. Altunia: Shhh... koi shor nahi chahiye humme... ab lafzon ki bhi jagah nahi honi chahiye humaare darmiyaan. He had a painfully seductive expression on his face as his command came by. Razia lowered her eyes slowly as he turned her around in his arms. Her heartbeat was already racing in an exceptionally high speed which was quite visibly evident even after so much control and all of a sudden she felt another emotion all together. She couldn't bare his eyes on her flushed face let alone her rest of the body. As shame took over, Razia hugged Mirza with her arms slipping under his robe... under his arms wrapping his upper torso completely. He felt her shivering cold hands on his back desperately trying to hide her into him if it was possible to pull him any closer. She hid her face in his chest breathing heavy... her lips shivering and brushing over his color bone.

Altunia felt a strange tickle just where her lips touched him and he closed his eyes pushing down the rest of her dress. Within seconds her dress dropped and pooled around her feet. Razia dug her nails in his back causing some blood drops to form scratches. Altunia groaned as she fisted in the cloth of his robe and felt her pulling it away. Altunia's arms left Razia for moments for his robe to fall down before he enveloped her back in his arms.

They stayed like that in each other's arms for a while before Razia felt her gold silk robe on her shoulders. Altunia covered her with her night robe slightly pulling away. Razia felt a sudden void and the warmth that enveloped her moments ago disappeared suddenly. And REALITY STRUCK HER...

Before Mirza could even utter a word she quickly picked up her clothes and left the dresser going into the bedroom.

***

Razia hurried into the bedroom put her clothes in the trunk and slipped into the covers without uttering a word. As Altunia followed he just quietly observed her moving briskly and slipped into the covered besides her, pulling her into him... hugging her from the back, resting his hand tightly on her belly.

Altunia: Hum jaante hain Mohatarma, aap abhi baat nahi karna chahteen... He spoke in her hair.

Razia closed her eyes and entangled her fingers with his over her belly, making his hold firm on her.

Altunia: Lekin...

Razia: Chalo... kissi baat mein toh aapne humme sahi samjha... So jaaiye, kal aapko naye tareeke dhoondhne hain hummari Zindagi jahannum se bhi bhattar bannane keliye. Shabah Khair.

And she closed her eyes tightly holding on to her cry... as a loan tear dropped from the corner of her eye and sleep took over eventually and she turned around in his arms hugging him back... breathing in his scent.

***

Razia got up fresh and after a long time she had had such a peaceful sleep. She was still very much locked in his arms, and her legs entangled with his. Altunia's hold tightened around her as she tried to move away, when her sight fell on his wound in his chest caused by her a few days ago.

FLASHBACK

Altunia: Aur haan Shehzaadi! Iss zakhm pe ab agar marham lage gaa toh sirf aapke haathon se.

// END OF FLASHBACK

Razia remembered his words and noticed how the wound had only worsened. If not to be treated any sooner it will really cause him much harm. Razia slowly pulled her arm to his chest making sure not to disturb him and caressed it lightly judging how bad it had become. Altunia hissed in pain as her soft fingers touched his wound. Razia immediately looked at him to make sure she hadn't woke him up. She moved closer to him in his arms bringing her lips to his wound and lightly blew over it to ease the pain. A small smile crept on Mirza's face as he felt a sense of relief. Razia kissed it lightly and then tried to get out of his hold to get the Medicine to be put on his wound without his knowledge.

No way will she give him another reason to taunt her. But the more she tried to move his arms away... the tighter he would envelope her bringing her closer to himself. She was wriggling lightly in his arms when his powerful and alluring voice fell in her ears.

Altunia: Aap chahe jitna dur jaana chaahein... aap utna hi humaare kareeb aayengi... Chaahe aap koi bhi raasta chunlein... Manzil yahin humaari bahon mein paayengi.

Razia Froze at her place hearing those words. Was he awake all this time??? She thought to herself. Razia: Chhodhiye hummein... Hummein uthna hai

Altunia: Lekin humaarin neend toh abhi puri nahi hui... He pulled her back closer and took in a deep breath in nape of her neck nibbling on to it slightly.

Razia: Malik sahab ... Sooraj sar par chadhne ko hai... uthjaaye and jaakar taiyaar ho jaayiye.

Altunia's hands left her with a jerk almost pushing her away. Razia couldn't understand that behavior of his. What was wrong with him???

He got up left for the other room into the humaam.

***

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Love

Shopau

Edited by Shopau - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
First my excitement reached its peak...then I sank back in disappointment as I expected them to complete their ahem ahem and then I realised that these two arent married yet😆
So you are saving the best part for the night after nikah ? I hope you are actually coz as ur updates are coming, my hopes r increasing and reaching its heights.

Now about this update. It was sooo very intense...ahem itna ki khoon n all haan in scratches...now thats highly romantic and passionate. ...expecting scenes like these to come up during the night after nikah (request hai yeh mera)

Sorry for the late reply...I read this update 3 times before I could let the whole thing sink inside properly I wasnt just getting enough of it...it was that amazing.

My personal fav was the line aap jitna humse door jayenge...aapki manzil hamari baahon mein...
so perfectly written...!!!!

Thank u for this update and thank you for a quick one and the PM
bas aise hii jaldi jaldi update karte raho warna ek din main tadap ke marr na jaun🤣 sorry thoda zyada hii dramatic ho gaya

Hugsss🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Fabulously hot
Loved it
Their chemistry is way too good
So much of passion and love
Khoon bhi nikal gaya altu ka
And you pen in down in an awesome way
Love your style of writing
Wanna know what will happen about their nikah
Keep writing
Update soon
Thanks for PM
-Manu-
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
It was amazing to read this.I am still under its effect!!
It was mind blowing to read this!!
My fav line is-Aapki manzil hamari baahon mein hai😳
It's Awesome👏👏

BTW,I am sorry for replying late and for not commenting on the prev update.I read it and it was superb as well👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Amazing chaptr !!!
starting scene mein toh meri saans ruk hi gayi thi
I was disappointed ki itni jaldi sab kyun ruk gaya but phir yaad aaya nikaah toh abhi baki hai 😆
Razia ki bhi kya situatn hai, pyaar bhi karti hai aur nafrat bhi

my fav line , i loved it :
Aap chahe jitna dur jaana chaahein... aap utna hi humaare kareeb aayengi... Chaahe aap koi bhi raasta chunlein... Manzil yahin humaari bahon mein paayengi.
mirza ne aisa kyun react kiya !?
update soonish..!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
amazing updateeesss
really love the story u r just brilliant
so sorrryyy 4 not commenting earlier
i m inactive n off 4rm IF so but sure read ur stories sooonnn
thank uuu so much 4 the pm n keep sending
Edited by Maha-Srk - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
It was an awesome update
And Vert intense too
Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey!! thanks for the pm and I really enjoyed reading this!
OMG ! I get you when you say you didn't feel passionate enough to write about any onscreen couples after ArShi. Yepp. Totally get that. I was a diehard ArShi fan and now I think Alzia has won my heart LOL. Seriously, their chemistry is the best! I think these two couples are the only ones who have actually made a place in my heart.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NEK DIL ZAALIM

PART 7

Hey everyone... just to give a little background story for the future updates of NDZ. As we all watched in the show a few days back... Nani jaan asked Razia to promise her that she will not have any children with Altunia and raise Yasir as her own child. Now, According to what I know of history, YASIR's birth is kind of questionable... on the contrary I know that a son of Nasir s was born post his death who later became the Sultan of Delhi before Balban. He was brought up by Razia and Altunia till their death and later was raised by another sister of Razia's (Shazia, I am guessing and her husband.)

Now in my FF Nek Dil Zaalim, I am following this story and presuming that Nasir was the son of Nasir-ud-din Bhaijaan and Fatima. I am sure you all have read different versions of the story, but I request to take this just as an FF and not a battleground!

With warm regards

Shopau

Razia walked in the corridors of Bhatinda wearing a deep burgundy color jorha with a bottle green colored dupatta falling down her back heavily embroidered in gold. She was to leave for the Mosque in the quila itself for her daily prayers when she saw Fatima walking towards her lost in her own thoughts.

Razia: Fatima! She called for her dear friend but was astonished as Fatima completely lost just walked past Razia.

Razia: Fatima! Fatima kahan khoyi hui ho tum?

Fatima: Ah! Shezaadi... humara matlab hai Sultan... muaaf kijiyega. She said suddenly coming back to her senses.

Razia: Kya baat hai Fatima... aaj tumne itne saalon baad hummein Shehzaadi' kehkar bulaya? Purana waqt yaad kar rahi thi?

Fatima: Haan Sultan... woh aaj... she said hesitatingly. Razia looked at her confused and questioning.

Fatima: Aaj ke din hi... She looked into the Sultan's eyes and suddenly Razia's confused expression turned into a deep painful realization. She looked back into her best friend's numb eyes and blank face.

Five years back today was the day... the man who was the most important man in these two women's lives was brutally killed in front of their eyes; The man who was an unspoken bond between these two women; The man whose death had changed both of their lives completely. Razia was made to sacrifice all of her little dreams and moments of happiness and was burdened with the responsibility and life which was once thought to be only HIS right. And Fatima who would have been destined to be the chief queen of the Delhi Sultanate only if he was there beside her today... lived a life more miserable than she lived before he came into her life. Today she lived not just as a mere maid but more so as an unspoken, unknown widow of Shezaada Nassir-ud-din Mahmud. He had promised her that on the night of his taj-poshi' crowning he will tell his parents about his wish to marry her. The news of her pregnancy had intensified his love for her ten-folds. And it felt all the more right to him to give her and his child the respect they deserved. All his life Nassir had seen his father Altamash ignore his mother Qutub and he never wanted such a life for Fatima. But destiny was brutal to them all and within few hours the dark night had casted darkness upon all of their lives.

Razia had ordered Fatima to make sure no one knew of her relationship with Nassir or her pregnancy... which came as a shock to Fatima as these words came from her best friend shehzaadi Razia; The sister of Nassir whom he loved more than his own life. How could she refuse to accept his child, but soon Fatima realized, how wrong she had been in judging Razia's intensions. As at that time Razia's first priority was the safety of her brother's unborn child and his consort. She feared that the enemy would want to kill Nassir's child as well so as to finish each and everyone who could claim the throne in future.

Razia: Muaaf kijiega... Najaane kaise humme yaad nahi raha?

Fatima: Nahi... Nahi shehzaadi (with slight tears in her eyes) aap muaafi maang kar humme sharminda na karein. Hum samajhtein hain pichle dino jo aapar aap beeti hai uske baad toh hummein muafi maangni chahiye aapse.

Razia's face stiffened. Razia: Kyun kiya aisa Bhabhi Jaan? Kyun diya aapne Mallik Saab ka saath? Woh bhi humaare khilaaf??? She asked with utter disappointment and grief in her voice. Hum kabhi soch bhi nahi sakte the ki aap humaare saath aisa...

Fatima: Nahi Razia! Hum par aisa shak toh na kariye... humne aapke khilaaf jaakar kissi Mallik ka saath nahi diya. Humne AAPKE LIYE, MIRZA ka saath diya hai Razia. Aapke DEEWANE MIRZA ka. Wohi Mirza jiske bare mein baat karne ke aap bahane doondhti thi... jiski baatein kartein aap thakthi nahi thi.

Razia: Nahi rahe woh Mirza! Uss mirza ko toh kabka daffan kar chukein hain woh. Woh insaan ab sirf MALLIK IQTIAR-UD-DIN ALTUNIA hai... BAS!!

Fatima: Aap unhe galat samajh rahi hain...

Razia: Nahi!! Galat nahi... ab jaakar toh unhe acchi tarah se samjha hai humne... bas is dil ko hi nahi samjha parahe.

Fatima: Aur apne dil ko samjaapayengi bhi nahi aap. Mohabbat itni kamzor nahi hoti Razia... ki zara toophan aaye aur mohabbat ko apne saath door baha lejaye. Aakhir nikaah ke liye haami bharne par toh majhboor kar hi diya na aapke dil ne.

Razia: Humne nikaah ke liye na hi haan kaha hai aur na hi kahenge.

Fatima: Toh kya aap iss jumme Mirza se nikaah nahi karengi ???

Razia: Hargiz nahi! Hum aise insaan se nikaah kabhi nahi kar sakte jisne sirf taqt aur taj ke liye humare rishte ko, humaari mohabbat ko jung ke maidaan mein zalil hone ke liye chodhh diya.

Fatima: Unhone yeh sab taqt aur taj ke liye nahi kiya hai Shehzaadi.

Razia: Aur yeh baat tum kaise keh zakti ho?

Fatima: Humse behtar iss baat ka gawah aur koi nahi ho sakta shehzaadi. She said with a strange guilt on her face.

***

Next: Altunia and Nassir!

Sorry for a short update... am not well! will try and update a longer one this weekend.

Thanks for all your appreciations. Special Thanks to Arshia, Shravani, Radiance, Manu and Astoria.

To my new readers... I hope you would like the FF and will comment to give your opinions.

Please send me a buddy request for PMs.

Love

Shopau

Edited by Shopau - 10 years ago

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