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Posted: 10 years ago
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NEK DIL ZAALIM


PART 2

Thanks a ton guys for all your likes and comments! It is a big encouragement for writers to read what their readers feel about their work. Love you all !!! And a big thanks for welcoming me to the Alzia forum.

Altunia: Humari mohabbat ka imtehaan mat leejiye Razia. Iss dil ne bohot zakhm khaaye hain lekin dharakna nahi chhora. Lekin agar is dil se uski dhadkan cheenne ki koshish koi karega, toh Mirza Altunia usse chain ki maut bhi naseeb nahi hone dega.

He forced her hand to deepen the knife into the wound on his chest. Razia struggled to get her wrist out of his hold but in turn was leaving the knife to deepen inside the wound. Her eyes oscillated between his blood shot eyes and the wound in his chest, right next to his heart, with blood oozing out with each passing millisecond flowing down his bare chest.

Razia: Humein dard ho raha hai!!! Her voice couldn't hide the pain she was going through as she wriggled to set herself free.

Altunia: HUMEIN BHI...

Razia stood still at her place hearing the two words which meant much more than one could fathom. And with that he jerked her hand away leaving Razia to drop the knife covered in blood fall at her feet. But the knife didn't get any attention as Mirza Altunia's eyes were enough to create the havoc in Razia's heart.

Altunia turned around and walked with brisk pace to find his way out when an order made him stop in his tracks.

Razia: Rukiye! She demanded.

Without turning around or saying a word, Altunia just stood conveying it to her that he was listening. Razia walked up to her dressing table and took out a small "sandook" royal box, adorned with gems and then walked up to him.

Razia: Aaiye! She pulled his hand and took him to bed. Baithain... she asked him to sit. But Altunia looked away trying hard not to lose control. He was so mad that he could swear on allah that if now this princess dared to act smart with him, he wouldn't take a second to lose his cool.

Razia noticing him not obeying her held both his shoulders and made him sit on the bed. However the governor kept looking away trying his best to not look at her. She really caught his attention when her soft palm cupped his face, making him look into her eyes. Her thumb caressed his cheek while her four fingers slightly massaged his neck and the back of his ear. For a split second Altunia really thought that he had got his nek dil pari back. She traced her hand slowly down his neck and further to his bare chest. Altunia hissed in pain slightly as her nail almost touched his wound. Razia knelt on the bed over him, her legs on either side of the torso as she comfortably placed herself on his lap and pushed his chest down on the bed, making altunia rest his head on the pillow. She towered over him, with her hair falling on one side as she held the small sandook in the other.

Razia opened the box as Altunia lay completely mesmerized. Altunia: Kya hai yeh?

She pulled out a yellow paste clad in her four fingers, and blew over his wound before applying it over it. Altunia closed his eyes as his breaths slowed down.

Razia: Dil se dhadkan jo cheene... She whispered in his ears.

Altunia opened his eyes to reality as her words hit him. Razia: usse aap maut tak naseeb na hone dein. She paused for a second. Aur jissne humse hamara sab kucch cheen liya usse hum aise saste mein jaane dein??? Marte dam tak nahi...

She looked at him with her hatred filled eyes while saying the last sentence. Razia: Humse mohabbat ki? Aur humme itna bhi na jaana??? Sharm aani chahiye aapko janab.

Altunia just stared at her with pitty on his face. Razia: Ab jaake toh insaaf hona shuru hua hai. Aap intna tadapenge ki aapki ruh tak kaap uthegi. Maut ki bheek maange ge aap Subedaar SAHAB... Bheek maangege! She said spitting fire.

And with this Altunia rolled over and pinned her down towering over her. Altunia: Aapki mohabbat ki tadap hi toh hai jo humaari ruh ko sukoon deti hai... Aur rahi baat maut ki, toh aapki yahi ada toh hain jo humein har pal maarti bhi hai aur sawaarti bhi hai. Aapki mohabbat mein milli har khairat sar-aankhon par, phir chaahe aap usse tadap kahein ya phir Maut!

Altunia left Razia panting heavily on the bed.

Altunia; Aur haan Shehzaadi! Iss zakhm pe ab agar marham lage gaa toh sirf aapke haathon se. He winked at her smirking and turned around to leave. Razia saw his retreating figure as she tried hard to catch her breath.

***

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SHOPAU

Edited by Shopau - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
ouch !!
i mean nek dil razia itni zalim kaise ho gayi .??😲😲😲
her words spitting fire..!!😲😲😲
itna gussa ...aur altu itna hone ke baad bhi didnt lose his cool !he remained composed!😲👏👏
this was amazing !!
lovely update !
and thanks for pm.😃

Edited by dinazz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
It was amazing...!!👏
Intensely romantic... Poor Altu, he still just got hatred
But I liked his spirit of love.❤️... Hope Razia understands his love soon
Thanks for the PM
And please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
An awesome update once again
Loved it
I hope to see them together soon
Thanks for the PM
Update soon
-Manu-
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
yes it was a great update...😃😃
I really like the story's title ...⭐️⭐️
keep up the good work...👏
please update soon...😆😆
will be waiting to read them😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
I simply loved it dear!!👏👏👏
Its marvellous!!
Please update soon.I am eager to read more😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
This is Amaaazing
Loved it lot ...Gr8 update
I love this angry razia
Plz update sooon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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NEK DIL ZAALIM


PART 3

It had been three nights since Razia had last seen Altunia; Three nights since anyone had come to see her and three nights since the doors to her royal suite had opened. It was only for food that the small overhanging flap opened to slide in her food on time at all meals.

But this time instead of quietly taking the thaali in, Razia refused and demanded: Jaakar humara pegam do, humein unse milna hai...

Gulam: Kinse shehzaadi?

Razia took in a deep breath and whispered with pressed lips: Subedaar Shahab se.

Gulam: Ji..

Razia: Aur haan, unse yeh bhi kehna ki ye sirf humara paigam nahi, humara hukm hai.

The gulam bowed and vanished in the dark, as razia stood looking at the delicacies with disgust.

***

A few minutes later the gulam returned and knocked on the flap for razia to open.

Razia: kahan? Kahan hain woh? She asked with eagerness.

Woh abhi ghusal khaane (bathroom) mein hain. Aur kissi ka bhi zaroori se zaroori paigam tak dene jaana mana hai.

Her blood boiled just imagining the scene in front of her. Her rage filled eyes turned red as she ordered in simple words: Darwaaza Kholo

Gulam: Maaf kijiye shehzaadi par...

Razia: Darwaaza Kholo! She repeated furiously. The gulam panicked and opened the door fearing the consequences. Razia came out and asked without sparing him a look: Unka khwab khaa kis taraf hai?

Gulam: Ji... yahan se seedhe jaakar, aakhri darwaza. Razia didn't even let him finish and started to walk straight with her head held high.

She entered his bedroom and then looked around to find the way to the bathing area, walking towards it. The moment Razia entered the bathroom, there was an awkward silence as all the kaneezein went quiet seeing her. Some were shocked to see out of her room unlocked and some were intimidated by her shear presence.

Razia: Baahar Jao, she said patiently not letting the upheaval of emotions in her heart come alive in her voice.

It was her voice which made Altunia realize the cause of the sudden silence around him. He opened his eyes as he lay in the bathing pond to see her standing right in front of him. Her eyes fixed on his.

Razia: Lagta hai bohot sakt jaan hain Bhatinda ke kaneez. Ek baar kahi baat samajh nahi aati. *She gave a look to each one of them standing around* Ya phir bhehri ho tum sab? JAO YAHAN SE! she shouted the last words, making them all leave except two of them who sat right next to Altunia massaging his arms. They looked at him and got up to leave when indicated the same to them.

Razia had her lips pressed in a thin line and as the two kaneez were passing by she held one of their hand making her stop right there. She took the oil which she had and spoke with her eyes spitting fire: humein lagta hai ki tumhari zaroorat ghoron ke astabal (stable) mein zyaada hai. Kal se tum yahan nahi balki ghoron ki zeen bandhne ke kaam mein madad karogi.

The kaneez bowed to her and left. Razia turned back her attention to Altunia who relaxed back in the bath tub smirking back at her. Razia: humein yahan dekh kar hairani toh nahi hui aapko? She asked with sarcasm.

Altunia: hairani? Hairani kyun hone lagi humein; kucch naya toh nahi kiya aapne. Aur waise bhi mohatarma, aap mohobbat hain hamari... aapki har ada se wajah pharmatein hain hum.

Razia: mohobbat??? Yeh lafz istamal mat kijiye subedaar sahab. Koi gandi gaali lagti hai. Aise pak shabd aapki zubaan par acche nahi lagte.

Altunia's eyes shot up to look at her. Razia: aap isse mohabbat kehtein hai, Jo sirf aapke hoton tak hi seemit hai? Aap ke mann mein toh najaane kaise kaise laalach bharein parein hain.

Altunia swallowed the lump in his throat, as his eyes started to turn red. Razia: aur yahi nahi, yun humein uss kaid khaane menin bandh kar, humaare peeth peechhe yun kaneezon aur raqasaon ke saath najaane kya kya... chhee!! She looked away disgusted.

Altunia: kya hua? Bola nahi jaa raha? He questioned with his deep ocean green eyes now forming a frown on his face. Jab iss hadd tak ghatiya baat aap soch sakti hain toh bolne mein kyun taqleef ho rahi hai?

Razia: taqleef hoti hain humein! She said turning around to look at him with tears flowing down her cheeks uncontrollably. Hoti hain humein taqleef yeh soch soch kar ki humne aise insaan par aitbaar kiya jiska koi imaan hi nahi hai. Jisne humare aitbaar ka faida uthaaya, humaari masoomiyat ka faida uthaya aur humse humara sab kucch cheen kar humein yeh bebasi ki zindagi de di.

Altunia lost his temper seeing those tears in her eyes and blasted. Haan toh aapne humara aitbaar kiya hi kab? He got out of the tub furious and walked up to her. Aur yeh kis bebasi si baat kar rahi hain aap? Bebasi ka matlab bhi jaanti hain? He pulled her arms, his fingers digging in her flesh on both sides causing her to let out a cry out of pain. Jab woh insaan jiske aaghosh mein ek baar sar rakhne ko ji chahta hai, wahi aapko dudkaar de, toh usse kehtein hain bebassi.

Jab apni saari zindagi aap is umeed mein bita dein ki ek din aayga jab woh aapke iraadon par be buniyaad shaq nahi karega toh USSE KeHTEIN HAIN BEBASSI!!! He shouted at her as tears formed in his red painful eyes.

Razia stared at him numb as her pain felt nothing in front of his. Aur jab aap roz yeh dua kartein hain ki kash yeh dil sach mein pathar ka hi hota, phir bhi uski ek jhalak par hi yeh dhadrakna nahi chhodta toh usse kehtein hein bebassi! He pushed her to the wall as he finished his sentence.

Razia was breathing heavy locked in his arms as she saw nothing but his pain struck eyes, his wet locks through which drops of water dropped over his forehead and his lips which she could swear were more close her mouth than air. Her hands rested on his bare shoulders, the water droplets ready to evaporate under her palm. And his, firmly placed on the back of her waist as he pulled her more into him. A moan escaped from her mouth as she sensed his bulge on her abdomen. But Altunia was quick to take in her cry as he closed the distance between the two taking in her lower lip. His lips crushed on to hers, giving her no chance to protest. He kissed her angrily, roughly, his other hand gripping tight around the back of her neck, making escape impossible. She shoved against his chest with all her strength but he didn't even seem to notice. His mouth was soft, despite all his anger, his lips molding to hers in a warm, unfamiliar way.

She grabbed his face trying to push it away, failing again. But he did seem to notice this time and it aggravated him. His lips forced hers open, and she could feel his hot breath in her mouth.

Acting on instinct, Razia let her hands drop to her sides and shut down. She opened her eyes and didn't fight, didn't feel... just waited for him to stop. He noticed, and the anger seemed to evaporate. He pulled back to look at her. But she stood there pale, expressionless like a lifeless doll. He pressed his lips softly to hers again, once, twice... a third time, but she pretended she was a statue and waited. Finally he let go off her and leaned away.

Razia: Kya hum jaa saktein hain? She asked as if completely unaffected

Altunia: Ji. He whispered with his back towards her.

***

PLZ DO COMMENT AND LIKE!

Edited by Shopau - 10 years ago
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res...for reading😉

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It was brilliant...!!! 👏
I could feel Altunia's pain... Oh why is she doing this to him and herself!?😔
Thanks for the PM

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