Once Upon In A Moonlit Night- A short story on alzia(final part @pg9) - Page 2

Originally posted by: Astoria

Dear,I was enchanted by your OS😳.When I began to read it,it was as if I was getting hypnotized.And when I had finished,it was as if I was in some other world.I felt as if I was in Alzia's presence witnessing their love.I loved your narration and your writing.👏👏 And I really agree with Sonu.If this is bad literature,then Ruknu is history's most popular sultan😆 This is just beautiful and an outstanding piece of work.

And now I have only one request.It is the same request that I made of Sonu.😆Pleeez Update😊

Thanks ash dear for your wonderful appreciation. means a lot to me.😃

Originally posted by: Maha-Srk

ooo wow

just wonderful

beautifully written

Thanks😊

Originally posted by: onaisa

This is amazing ...keep going

Intresting concept ...i wish sumthing happens lyk this in d show too

👍🏼

Thanks a lot😊

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Riu darling it was superb

The way u described Razia was fantastic. I can picturize her. 🤗 Eh hug tumaare liye

She was very much tensed abt her Abbujaan n Bhaijaan. She loves them very much no? She thinks n cares for everyone. She is very sweet

Aur Altu vo toh Razia ko dekhta hi raha. Razia chup chupkar jaarahi hain.

Aur khabardaar mere Riu darling ke literature ke baarein main kuch kaha toh😆😆😆

OMG nethu darling tum yahan...😳
abb main kya kahoon yaar... kahene kee liye kuch nahin hain... too chalo lee loo meri jaddo kii jhappi 🤗

Originally posted by: ifians

OMG nethu darling tum yahan...😳
abb main kya kahoon yaar... kahene kee liye kuch nahin hain... too chalo lee loo meri jaddo kii jhappi <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">🤗</font></font>

Aww meri Riu darling ki jaadoon ki jappi keliye Bangalore se Bengal tak bhaagkar aagayi teri riu darling 🤗

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

OMG nethu darling tum yahan...😳
abb main kya kahoon yaar... kahene kee liye kuch nahin hain... too chalo lee loo meri jaddo kii jhappi <font color="#CC0000"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">🤗</font></font>

Aww meri Riu darling ki jaadoon ki jappi keliye Bangalore se Bengal tak bhaagkar aagayi teri riu darling 🤗
Nethu darling...🤗
Darling you know.. maine altunia.. i mean rohit koo tweeter pee tweet kiya... first time maine kissi celeb koo tweet kiya and guess what he retweeted... yee too first ball pee chauka lag gaya yaar..😆

Originally posted by: ifians

Aww meri Riu darling ki jaadoon ki jappi keliye Bangalore se Bengal tak bhaagkar aagayi teri riu darling 🤗

Nethu darling...🤗
Darling you know.. maine altunia.. i mean rohit koo tweeter pee tweet kiya... first time maine kissi celeb koo tweet kiya and guess what he retweeted... yee too first ball pee chauka lag gaya yaar..😆
Ho ho meri riu darling ne pehle hi ball main chakka maarliya? Jeeti rahe. Mere Yuvi darling ki tarah sixer maarti rehna

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Ho ho meri riu darling ne pehle hi ball main chakka maarliya? Jeeti rahe. Mere Yuvi darling ki tarah sixer maarti rehna

he he... nahin aisi koi baat nahin hain.. actually maine dekha he is on tweeter to maine ek tweet kiya... too aaj i was just checking my account and then i saw ki he retweeted... hum bhi khus hoo gaye😆
acha nethu darling yeee batao kii aaj kis koo khallas kiya?!😆

ufff ab kitni baate krogi?? nxt prt b serve kr do ..😛

Originally posted by: RoshiniluvPrAja

ufff ab kitni baate krogi?? nxt prt b serve kr do ..😛

roshni jii right now i am typing the next part... jab khatam hoo jayega i will post..😃