Once Upon In A Moonlit Night- A short story on alzia(final part @pg9) - Page 4

Wow awesome update! It was not boring at all..totally enjoyed reading it!
Loved the way you narrated it..very beautiful! 😊
Please continue..waiting for Razia's reaction!

Originally posted by: overactor

loved it esp the repeated mention of his eyes u have described the scene so well👏

and this Jissey aap kee jaise nazuk aur laziz shikar kii be sabari see intezaar raheta hain activated my gutter mind 😛 ☺️ 😆

Thanks sonu dear.. I am madly in love with altu's eyes.....
What... was that dialogue sounded really so guttery...😆

Originally posted by: beintehaaZaYa

Wow awesome update! It was not boring at all..totally enjoyed reading it!
Loved the way you narrated it..very beautiful! 😊
Please continue..waiting for Razia's reaction!

Thanks a lot...😃

Originally posted by: ifians

Thanks sonu dear.. I am madly in love with altu's eyes.....
What... was that dialogue sounded really so guttery...😆

Originally posted by: overactor

no no the dialogue is shareef on the whole but my eyes landed on this particular line before i read the whole so😆

Oh god!!😆
I was thinking to write the dialogues in english... it won't feel like guttery then... but as i wrote... english didn't suit altu...😆... so i have to convert it into hindi... and it came out like that...😆

Originally posted by: ifians

Oh god!!😆
I was thinking to write the dialogues in english... it won't feel like guttery then... but as i wrote... english didn't suit altu...😆... so i have to convert it into hindi... and it came out like that...😆

Originally posted by: overactor

No no let the dialogues be in urdu/hindi who cares if its guttery 😆

My urdu is not at all good... only know some few words... not the accent... Hindi is better but not so good...😆... specially i feel confused with the words...😛
Yeah... i think no one cares...😆

aha! nice part .

Originally posted by: dinazz

aha! nice part .

lovely and beautiful

described very well .

jaldi update karna 😃

thanks😛

Riyu jee,you're great.But you will get to here the same things from me.This is AFSAW(Awesome-Fabulous-Splendid-Amazing-Wonderful).