Alt ending FF: Our RR ~ Th#5~ Th#6 up! (31/5) - Page 4

Originally posted by: Cutemithra

Nice chapter zara. Emotional one actually. For Rudra and maithili especially. Two people who are in a dilemma.

Myrah, though she sees about Rudra's care for Paro and everything she doesn't want to believe it. Feeling bad for her too.
Poor Paro. She feeling weird. But not able to pin point wat it s. Waiting to see wat Rudra will do nw.

Originally posted by: -Suganthi-

Congrats on the new thread. This update was the most beautiful thing you have written so far. The Ranavat's frustration at not being able to embrace their bahu, Paro's feeling that everything is familiar, Rudra's anguish feel so real. My heart goes out to them. Desperately waiting for Paro to remember her past and for Rudra to sort out his present.

Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Wowowowwowow! So beautiful !! Once again such an awesome update which left me totally paralysed and speechless...
(1) Loved how you begin the story with Ranawats greeting The Singhs & Rudra's eyes fixed on the open door,waiting for his Paro to come in ... The thali scene was amazingly well written...it overwhelmed me so much and it has not been any different during my subsequent readings after the initial reading...reading it just brought tears to my eyes ( happy ones ) and was just spell binding... This was one of those puppy love moments which I adored in the real rr. Rudra the rough and tough guy, would always have that soft spot for Paro. Thanks for liking it sis.😳
(2) I liked the way Mohini was given a taste of her own medicine by Devyani when she made a sarcastic comment about the number of Aman's family members,lol...Devyani is adorable ..she is loving,oozes warmth & is very perceptive...her wise eyes ,her wisdom could see through Paro's loneliness ,her sadness behind her smile in the previous chapter...yep,I like her.. Yep Devayani is like Dadi from IPKKND if you watched it, but with a bit more spunk. The jolly all hip and dance grandma who is also wise and observant. 😉
(3) The young girls giggling,looking at Rudra was such a cute scene...Which girl wouldn't want an intense,towering personality like him in her life,lol ? There was also a hidden message in this scene, which probably be clearer in further chapters. Remember I write my scenes for a reason.😉
(4) Naksh is an endearing firecracker & I simply love his crazy antics alongwith his sense of humour & not to mention his great observing skills...he has somewhat sensed that there is no love lost between Myrah & Rudra,isn't it Zara ? Naksh is a little on the fence, but nothing firm yet of what to think. As Aman said, he's not just a happy go lucky guy.😆
(5) The narration of the entire scene 'Rudra making Paro hold Yash' was beyond brilliant...Here is a man who loves his beloved with his entire being and is willing to go to the ends of the world to get her back in his life...Paro's pent up emotions finally found their way and those pearls were let out resting upon her Dhruv...I was putting all my strength in fighting back my tears but to no avail...the way both mother & the son hugged each other...oh goodness me Zara...just broke all my will & I let my tears flow... Yh this was an emotional scene. The mother instinct reminder of what she loved and lost on that night, though she doesn't remember it yet. But the feelings and emotions are fresh.
(6) The last part was Absoulutly marvellous...Among so many people,it was only Rudra who realised that Paro wasn't to be seen anywhere & his sixth sense or maybe his love for her made him rush to find her & just in time he averted a disaster...his fears were working on his psyche... Losing her again, watching her slip out of his life because of his actions or someone else's terrifies him & rightly so... Rudra always had an eye on Paro from the start and now isn't any different. 😆
(7) When Paro looked in the mirror and smiled,it reminded me of her scene in Rudra's blue shirt & the way she smiled back at her reflection..it was so cute...I loved it then & loved it now...BTW,was it her dressing table with mirror that's in the store room ? Yep all her stuff is there, but hidden for how long?😉
(8) The last two lines of the update...hmmm...if I am reading it correct , Rudra might consider faking his 'jallad' thing to slowly get Paro to remember ?? What a cliffhanger to end on! Now I will wish for the week to go by ASAP & wait eagerly for your next update...I am so overwhelmed with how you move me each time with each update. Now here is a super tight hug filled with so much love for the writer who made me move on with life & who is giving a beautiful closure to eternal soul mates who deserve all the happiness in the world. Yep Rudra is a man with a plan. You'll see how he develops this idea in his own way. Thanks sis for all your support. *Hugs*

Originally posted by: deepsel

Congratulations on the new thread Zara dear..😊

Another beautiful update from you again emotionally drained me..The initial paragraphs gave me the festive mood with all the giggles but what pulled me more is that look on Rudra's face after seeing Paro's wide eyes..I myself was perplexed for quite some time and closed my eyes to see my Paro literally standing there with her doe eyes Yep our Paro and her doe eyes. A total sucker for Rudra who would literally die for that look. 😆

You are very cleverly creating doubts in Naksh mind with small small instances , like with Rudra's milk outburst in this chapter ..Paro's blessing for Sunehri, I felt a lump on my throat..that was beautifully written.👏.These small hints will increase for Naksh, but how much til he in convinced is the question.

I know Myra is naive and trying the impossible but I really lost my mind when she told "Real cute na"😡..I wanted to smack her though she is not at all at fault...may be Paro's love have clouded my mind to see Myra's innocence...What are u doing to me Zara!? 😕 I love making the reader feel confused in emotions. Don't worry sis you won't be alone.😆

Are you really thinking of Nakshra pair?! Though right now I donno how to feel but surely looking forward to see how you take it forward.. Wait and see😉

Now the emotional part, you had me in tears again..dammit..when Paro was holding Yash and tearing up , it tucked my heart so hard I couldn't control my emotions..How do u do this everytime? I could feel her pain so real..Great writing 👏 *hugs* thanks for saying so.

Another thing I constantly note in your chapters is the way you use all the characters to the fullest just like how a successful TRP garnering story would, still keeping the essence intact..I may not have written about them , but do know I love how you play with them in this story..I try my best to use all the characters, but I also don't write scenes for no reason, There are hidden meanings behind them which indicate what's to come or an insight into how one is truely feeling. I try..but sometimes I think I try too hard.😆

So Rudra going to be Jallad with Paro to bring her memory back, but I believe its going to give false hope for Myra too thinking Rudra really doesn't want Paro anymore.. You are right on this point for sure sis.

Will wait for all the answers..though you are making me impatient with every chapters..*super hugs*🤗

Originally posted by: bhavali4RR

Weddings - always a fun event & I absolutely love 'em😃. It's a place for renewing old relationships, forming new ones, creating moments of joy and reviving old memories. And that's exactly what Rudra is trying with Paro - he's trying to create a moment that will trigger a memory. The affect of which might not be immediate but the feeling will linger. And that's exactly what's happening with Paro, which Rudra and other Ranawat female folk, are noticing, sans Myrah.Exactly😃 I couldn't have put it better myself sis. The twist to come in the next chapters will be interesting however.😉

Naksh is not far behind in his curiousness about Rudra's behavior towards Paro and it won't be too late before he puts two and two together. *fingers crossed* hmm?😆

Why did Mamta react differently to the milk incident with Paro? What other track are you spinning Zara?😕 Nothing. Mamta was genuinely curious of where Sunheri was.😆

Naksh finding the relationship between Rudra and Myrah funny whereas Rudra not finding anything cute about Naksh and Paro. It'll be an interesting read for Naksh and Myrah to talk 'bout it when Paro and Rudra become one😉. ohhh sis there will be a lot of talk between myrah and Naksh. trust me.😆

Rudra sensing a familiar reaction in Paro's eyes to his anger, has set his mind ticking and heart beating - what will be his next steps? Would he become the Jallad that he once was, which would bring his Paro closer to him? Oh Zara! just thinking 'bout it has my heart pounding and mind racing. Muahahaha! Yep Rudra's BSD mind is working up again on how to trigger something in Paro. But he'll have to wait and see how that works out and what the actual result is.

Congrats on the new thread :) Awesome update loved it Aman entire family came to meet Sunheri and they are so nice together so tightly bonded n loved how they are not letting Mohini remarks get to them n answer her back n Naksh n Myrah are so alike n Rudra badly wants Paro to remember the truth but what would happen if she does she is going to learn that her husband is remarried n have a wife n what will Rudra plans to do if she regains her memory so many questions n Naksh starting to notice Rudra behavior wonder if he will find out the truth n what is Rudra planning to do to make her remember go back to being rude n yell at her? cant wait for the next update thanks for the pm