FS: A traitorous taste (for Smitar) Part 5 page 27 completed - Page 18

Originally posted by: tvbuf

Very intense !

Thanks for the PM 😛

Glad the intensity came across. 😃 And thanks for responding to the PM.

Originally posted by: psagars

Hey Sabs, a damn good update.

There are stories which we read and there are stories which we see.

There are words which communicate and there are words which connect.

Do I need to tell you which category you fall in?

The way you write, it never feels like I am reading a story, it feels like a live action is taking place before my eyes.

Again this chapter is from Paro's point of view. The way she is thinking about the situation, about Rudra and about herself too.

Jallad - such an appropriate name for Rudra. But then this is Beast from the Beauty and Beast story.

So a loveable jallad for us.

So we get to see Paro's thoughts about the kiss. She is angry at letting him kiss her and also for reciprocating to it. But at no point I found her disgusting it. She was not at all angry at him for kissing her but called herself, her body a traitor for behaving in such a way.

Yet to see what how Rudra felt about the kiss. Right now he is concerned for her safety afterall he is her self appointed protector.

This is the Rudra we always loved. A Rudra playing mind games. A Rudra who is synonymous with intense. A Rudra whose every action be it love, anger, concern or fear, passion oozes out.

Love the way you have maintained Rudra's character.

So in all, a mind blowing update. Waiting for Rudra's reaction to the kiss.

Originally posted by: Roop_P

Lovely Update👏

Really intricacy with fluidity of flowing emotions of these characters.

Fabulous

Thank you Roop for your sweet words. 😃 Delighted that you enjoyed it

Originally posted by: aaliah3108

Wow ! what an update dear Sabs !!

I shall come back to pen down more. This much is not enough for the amazing piece you have written.

Your writing is so intense. !!!⭐️

Thanks Ruchi for your lovely words. 😃 Delighted that you enjoyed this part - I enjoyed writing it but was a little uncertain that it would appeal. So, thanks for letting me know that it did.

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..

Intense update

Loved it

Thank you, Jyoti. Delighted that it appealed.

Originally posted by: tiniaa

The kind of intensity you are capable of putting across, it would be bliss if you could write on Rudra , Myrah & Paro. Rudra being married to myrah & then Paro coming back with amnesia...it has so much of potential but sadly other than Zara no one else is exploring it

Hello dear Sabs 😛 ,
Firstly thankyou for the pm's, and sorry about my late comment as I was busy with
My exams for past few weeks. But I have to say I m blown away with your story 😳 .
I don't know how many times I have read last 2 chapters.. not because I didn't understand
it in first place 😆 but because I wanted to read it again n again, to read each word and
Imagine it.. the details of scenes, thought process of rudra and paro.. all this make your
writing so vivid, intense, filled with raw passion and HOT 😳 .

Parud are already a Hot couple but with your writing it has magnified even more.
The kiss which neither denied was like an outburst of so many emotions, the way Rudra
handled the situation when they were about to be caught with his presence of mind 👏 ,
how he tied her, carried her on shoulder (wish could have seen this scene in our show).
I love your writing style and wish to read more stories from you 😃 .

I don't mind if you write more parts of this story.. 😉 as it's readers delight.

Originally posted by: varshu27

Yet another breath taking chapter. I was transported to the sandy dunes and could feel all the tumultuous emotions of both Rudra and Paro. The intensity and passion of the initial days of RR was so palpable in ur chapter. As usual you have left us craving for more.

Thank you Varshu for your generous praise. Only too glad to have taken you back to the days in the dunes. RR's 'great outdoors' added much magic to the romance of the serial and I was so disappointed when the serial started focusing on the 'indoors'. So I just had to set my FF there. Delighted that it appealed. 😃