FS: A traitorous taste (for Smitar) Part 5 page 27 completed - Page 20

So lovely update... You have written the vulnerable state of Paro very well and also Rudra's dilemma and passion.. Beautiful ending.. But do write more.. Don't stop with this..

I'm so not done yet. I'm here only just now. Read it thrice already. May be I will read it umpteen no. Of times. How amazingly u merged the hospital scene here and u showed their feelings one by one. Both of them. How Rudra restrains himself to not go overboard, not to take any advantage as his mind tells her she dislikes him. How Paro leaves her mind behind and calls out for him to seek solace and peace. !!!! 🤗. I'll be back again I think. I'm quite mad really. Hee hee.

you are a fabulous writer dear..i keep checking whether you've updated or not almost every single day...i'm super sad now that i don't have anything to look forward as the series is over..but i fervently hope that i get to read something new penned by you soon...do keep me posted..please please don not forget to post a scrap or PM me in case you write anything

this was lovely. The intensity of earlier epis of rr is clear in it and it is making me miss those epis so much. I really loved it. paro's thoughts and her feeling of remorse for kissing him and rudra caught between his brain and heart. loved how you ended it with them finding solace in each other.

Words cannot begin to explain the magic of this update Sabs. I am awed by ur talent . You bring the scenes alive. Loved it.👏

Awesome, my darling Sabs! Could feel Rudra's feelings and Paro's uncertainty. That kiss was a lifesaver!

Hello Sabs,
Loved this chapter also.. your whole story captured the real essence of rangrasiya. (story of initial episodes could have turned like this than going to ranawal family that soon!) 😉
Rudra's reasoning with himself for his actions- he will do whatever it takes to get her sign, for it..
even if it meant to keep her warm, taking care of her, worrying for her. 😳 ( he contradict his move's himself).
"she licked her lips & desire slammed into him, he wanted to kick something preferably himself" 😆
loved this line. I liked how paro's safety mattered him most that time & not if her lehenga riding
up while sitting 😳 but he is always left effected by her.
I guess his BSD mind had already used her dupatta in every useful way possible!😛 Hospital scene
which got repeated again..Rudra caressing her, noticed red marks and immediately thought he did it! Paro in sleep searching him and he went back to kiss her😳


loose ends which you left in this story.. I am glad you will take it forward latter on.
I am looking forward to read more of your amazing stories. 😃

Very Well Written

Originally posted by: deepsel

Wowww!!! What am going to write is truly from my heart..

There are some stories and writers whose works are so ecstatic and euphoric that I feel so small to even comment there..you are one such writer and this story is one such...am truly humbled to even share the same space with you trying to acknowledge your work dear Sabs..Frankly am little intimidated and overwhelmed at the same time...This is pure magic what am witnessing with your words..

You have carved the exact replica of our original intense RR for which each one of us fell..

This is the "Jallad" I fell in love with..this is the "Bewakoof Ladki" I fell in love with..this is the damn salty sand dunes I fell severely in love with...and you are bringing back that love for me again..Thanks is a very small word I can give right now..

A chapter merely for a conversation but what impact !!👏

I want to scream out loud to that crappy system- dammit this is what RR is and this is what you screwed..Am truly missing RR Sabs and your writing have made me more...You are the real genius..

Originally posted by: smitar

Absolutely super. I am Loving this and waiting for more, my dear, dear TVbug!