SS: Rangrasiya ~message on pg.13 (31/03)

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

-Disenchanted-

@-Disenchanted-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Love the way your story is shaping up. Waiting for the next update. Pls PM when you post it.

Quote

Aruna.negi

@Aruna.negi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Lovely update.Pl PM when you post it.

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Aisha

@ChotiDesiGirl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

@_Ms.Foxy.Angel_ @Paro_rudra @kulfi89 @Aruna.negi @.Jyoti.. @Harshuu Thank you soo much for reading. Glad you guys liked it. The next update will probably be next week. Hopefully i'll be done by sunday if nothing unexpected comes up 😊

@henamani i really sorry! my intension was not to insult their relationship. I just wanted Paro to slap him and for that it was important to push her to the edge. Plus, i found it essential for the next chapter, which you will understand when i update next part.
But thank you for telling me your opinion. i'll keep it in mind😊

@kirim Thank you, i'm really glad to know you're liking it 😃.. don't worry, no family drama, maybe a dash of it's but mainly it's PaRud, PaRud and more PaRud 😆
As for now, i believe my SS will have 5-6 parts. So there is no room for much family drama. 😊
I want to keep it short and sweet...

@babyji aww, thank you for your big big tumbs up 😊 hahaha .. i'm happy you liked it

@KhushiParo Thank you for reading!

Her grief and her tears is only for a little while ... hopefully 😉

Edited by TearGold - 10 years ago

Quote

Aisha

@ChotiDesiGirl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

@arniepervaiz yupp, he is being a true jallad .. honestly, i just wanted him to get slapped 😆

@blue_rose1605 @Love2read Thank you soo much. Really happy to know that u guys liked it. Keep on supporting 🤗

@Aish002 Thank you soo much for reading! Happy you liked Paros' reaction 😊

@rithureuben @Aruna.negi Happy to know you guys liked it. Just buddy me, and i'll PM you when i update next 😃

Edited by TearGold - 10 years ago

Quote

Aisha

@ChotiDesiGirl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

@parorudra205 @Lily30 Thank you soo much for reading. Glad you guys liked it.
I have posted the translation of almost all the hindi dialogues. Next time there will be a translation on the update itself.
Actually had planned on translating all the lines, but i forgot it somehow. hahah

"Aap ki himmat kaise hui?" - how dare you?

"Mhaare pass mat aayie" - don't come near me!

"Mein ne kaha na, mhaare paas aanyiki koshish bhi maat kharna, warna" - i said don't come near me, or else!

"Mhaara haat chodiye" - let go of my hand!

"Shrimati Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat, bhule gaye kya? Tera pati hoon me aur iss nate se mujhe pura haq hai tum par.Mein jab chahun tujhe cho sakta hoon. Pass a sakta hoon. Mujhe koi nahi rok sakta." - Mrs. PRPR, did you forget? i'm you husband and because of this bond i've all the right on you. Whenever i want, i can touch you, come near you. No one can stop me.

"Hamari shaadi ek jhoot hai aur jhoot kabhi haqikat me nahi badhal sakta." - our marrige is a lie and lie can never turn into to reality.

"Tumari wajase mera maan, mera sammaan, meri zindigi , meri wardi hai mujhse chin gaye aur mere siphaahi jinhoneuss din apni jaan iss desh kilie di thi, woh log aaj bewakoof kahe ja rahe hai. Yeh sab sirf tumari wajase. Aur iss sab kilie tume saaza tune boghatna hai" - .. my life, which is my uniform has been taken away from me and my soldiers who gave their lives for their country are being called idiots. All this, only because of you and for all this you have to be punished.

" Tumara yeh darr. Tumari aakhon mein joh sawaal hai, ab kya hoga? Me kaise pesh aaunga? Mein kya karonga? Mujhe bohot pasand hai..." - this fear of yours. the questions in your eyes. what will happen? how will i behave? what will i do? i like it.

Jo darr, ghrina tu mehssos kar rahi hai, ab yehi teri zindagi hai. Tu isse na toh bhaag sakti hai na chipp sakti hai. Ab apni baki ki zindagi mei, tu ek jallad ki patni kehlayegi aur tere ye aanson kabhi khatam nahi honge. - "The fear, the digust you feel. Now this is your life. You can neither run or hide from. For the rest of you life, you will be called this jallads wife and these tears in your eyes don't have a end."

Ab jah, soja zamin paar." - now go and sleep on the floor.

"Mhaare se muh mat pheriye , bholenath. Mein bohot daari hui ho." - don't turn you face away from me. I'm scared.

Edited by TearGold - 10 years ago

Quote

@rupao21

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Oh my gosh, this is so dark. This is better than the track they showed. This is just a very dark dark shade of grey. LOVE this.

Don't know how I'm going to wait till the next update thu.. + thank you for the eng translations, my hindi isn't that good. ;p

Good day and keep going. Would've love to see whether this ends in much lighter shade.

Quote

Aisha

@ChotiDesiGirl

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: rupao21
Oh my gosh, this is so dark. This is better than the track they showed. This is just a very dark dark shade of grey. LOVE this.
Don't know how I'm going to wait till the next update thu.. + thank you for the eng translations, my hindi isn't that good. ;p

Good day and keep going. Would've love to see whether this ends in much lighter shade.

aww, thank you! happy u liked it.. 😊

i always wanted someone to right this dark kind of a love story on PaRud .. how their hatred turns into love but no one did ( or i just missed it). Therefore i started writing this.. i'm soo happy with everyones respons.. 😃

the next update will be next week, probably on sunday.

I can give u a small spoiler, the next chapter will be the first turning point!!

Quote

SPraba

@SPraba

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Wow super story dear
Totally intense and dark. Poor Paro and Rudra as usual being very heartless
Now excited to read more
Thank you once again😊

Quote

Parud7

@Parud7

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Super duper hit yr. What a twist! This one the totaly we missed in the show. In entire journey of Rangrasiya this type of jalladpan of rudra towards they had never shown. Gr8 work yr. The darkness and passionate state of this chapter made it super hot. The twist u made so remarkable plus u wrote hindi dioulogs wid english translation. This shows u lvd ur al fans. can't w8 more plz update soon nd do pm me.