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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! That looks very very promising!
You've got to continue this. Eagerly waiting for part two. :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waiting eagerly.Pl update new chapter.
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Gr8 yr. Plz update soon. We are waiting eagrly.
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A huge thumbs up for you...any time you read anything & you can literally visulize happening it right in front of your eyes is simply WOW & your start of this SS is simply WOW.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ Love2read Thank you soo much for reading. 😊
Yes, it the same story but with a different twist. In my story Rudra and Paro get married during the maha shivaratri. Paro still believes that Tejawat is good and Rudra is unsuccessfull with handing in strong evidence against Tejawat and about gun smuggling across the border therefore he is unable to justify the shootout and loses his job.
In my story, Tejawat didn't come to the marrige venue and Mohini didn't put fire in Dilshers room.

@sweet_gargi Thank you so much. Just add me as a buddy if you are still interested and i'll PM you 😊

@Absoluv and @babyji aww, thank you soo much for giving feedback on my writing. Actually, it's been a while since i wrote stories soo i though i had lost the ability to convey correctely with words.
It feels good to know i still have it in me.
Also thank you for reading 😊
Edited by TearGold - 10 years ago
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Hey guys,

First of all, thank you, thank you, THANK YOU soo much for all the wonderful feedbacks. It means alot and i loved reading them. I literally didn't expect this kind of respons when i posted the first chapter so i'm REALLY happy 😃

Chapter 2, got delayed partly because i didn't want to disappoint anyone, or crush anyones expectation but also because i'm a student and at the moment, alot is going on. So i'm really sorry for the wait!

Chapter 2 was supposed to be longer as i wanted to write about the day after as well but that would mean i wouldn't be able to post the chapter before next week and i've been getting PMs and all so i didn't want to make the wait longer therefore i shortened chapter 2.

I hope you guys like it! 😊

Happy reading!


Chapter 2 - Black night

Aghast she opened her eyes and her breathing came to a halt as the stings of her blouse was roughly pulled off. She felt how his hand trailed down her back, slowly and seductively, finding its' way to her bare waist. He caressed it gently, before pulling her waist-chain off and dropping it on the floor. Paro hitched. She tried to grasp what was happening but she was unable to.

Again his hand found its' way around her waist. He couldn't help but to admire the softness of her skin. He pulled her tighter to him, closing the little gap between them, making it impossible to even air pass between them. She felt his lean and solid body, pressed against her, which made her shudder and wince.

As he lowered his head and nuzzled her neck, a tear rolled down Paros' chine. He couldn't help but to breathe in and adore the fragrance of lavender she smelled. When Paro felt his lips kiss her neck, her fear was replaced by rage. Determination and courage flashed across her face.
Quickly she covered her chest with one arm and turned around to face him. Because she was blinded by the hatred and disgust she felt towards Rudra, she missed to notice the passion his eyes possessed for her but when Paro pushed him away which made him fall back a few steps, his eyes quickly filled with darkness and hatred again. Remembering his mission, he smirked because he had after all succeeded in terrifying her and he was satisfied with his victory but what happened next, he was not prepared for.

The sound of Paros' slap echoed through the room, followed by pin-drop silence. No movement, no sound from nither. As Rudra finally grasped what happened, his body was shaking in anger and his both hands clenched into a fist. Tightly shutting his eyes, he tried to control his anger.
"Aap ki himmat kaise hui?" she questioned him with utmost disgust. Rudra looked back into her eyes and saw no shades of fear but the opposite which further angered him and his eyes clearly displayed his wrath. If eyes were enough to kill, she knew she would have been by now but still, she stood were you stood and refused to break their eye-contact or to back off.

Yet again, he took a step towards her. "Mhaare paas mat aayie" she almost screamed but he didn't stop but took steps toward her and she took a step back.
"Mein ne kaha na, mhaare paas aanyiki koshish bhi maat kharna, warna" she threaten but he refused to listen. Once again furiously she raised her hand but this time she was unsuccessful as he stopped her before she could slap him. He pulled her close to him and twisted her hands behind her back. He once again closed the gap between them.

Paro struggled hard to get free from his grip. Rudra looked down at her and watched while she struggled. He tightened his grip around her wrist, and a shriek escaped her lips out of pain and some of her bangles broke. He saw how her eyes began to fill with tears as she realized she didn't have enough strength to free her hands from his hard grip.

"Mhaara haat chodiye" she begged. Tears rolled from her eyes and her fear was visible in her voice but she was trying to put on a brave face. Rudra was pleased because he knew that the disgust, the hate, the fear she felt towards him would make her more miserable.

He lowered his face closer to hers, so close that she could feel his hot breath against her skin. When she saw that his lips were inches away from hers, she turned her face to one side, shutting her eyes tightly and held her breathe. Rudra smirked at her reaction and leaned in more, his lips now brushing against her ear, making her shiver and said in low, deep voice, "Shrimati Parvati Rudra Pratap Ranawat, bhule gaye kya? Tera pati hoon me aur iss nate se mujhe pura haq hai tum par. Mein jab chahun tujhe cho sakta hoon. Paas a sakta hoon. Mujhe koi nahi rok sakta." and he moved away to see her reaction.

Paro opened her eyes and looked at him and said,"Yeh shaadi ek jhoot hai aur jhoot kabhi haqeeqat mein nahi badal sakta. Mhaara haat chodie, mujhe dard hora hai"

"Dard hora hai?" and he tighten his grip around her wrist and again a sound escaped Paros' lips out of pain. "Tumari waja se mera maan, mera sammaan, meri zindagi yo wardi hain mujhse chin gaye aur mere siphaahi jinhone uss din apni jaan iss desh kilie di thi, woh log aaj bewakoof kahe ja rahe hai. Yeh sab sirf tumari wajase. Aur iss sab kilie tume saaza boghatna hai" he said, after a moment he continued and said "lekin kaal se. Aaj to humari suhagraat hai."

Paro looked up at Rudra with wide, terrified eyes on his last statement and Rudra grinned. Paro tried with all her power to free her hands from his grip. Rudra loosed his grip to make her feel as if she overpowered him. As her hands got freed, she pushed him away and moved towards the door but she couldn't get far as he managed to get a grip her odhini. She stood where she was standing, petrified. As he pulled on her odhini, helplessly she fell back into his arms.

"itni jaldi kaha jha ri ho? Abhi tho me kuch shuru bhi nahi kiya hai!" he whispered in her ear and picked her up in his arms and carried her over to the bed. He laid her down and pinned her both arms above head and he bent down. The pain of being defeated could be read in her eyes. She wanted to run, scream, hit him but it was as if every part of her was paralyzed. As he leaned down, his eyes only on her lips, realization of what was going happen hit her, quiet sobs escaped her lips. Taking his eyes away from her lips which were only inches away, he looked at her eyes. They were tightly shut and tears were rolling down. He leaned away and closed his eyes.

She felt how his grip on her hands loosened and she opened her eyes to look at him and noticed how he was looking away from her. He let go of her completely and raised himself off the bed and stood with his back against her. Paro quickly got off the bed and covered her back with her odhini.

They were now standing across from each other, with the bed in the middle. Rudra quickly scanned her, from head to toe and acknowledged her quiet sobs and how she was shaking out of fear.

" Tumara yeh darr. Tumari aakhon mein joh sawaal hai, aap kya hoga? Me kaise pesh aaunga? Mein kya karonga? Mujhe bohot pasand hai" Rudra said with a grin and continued "Jo darr, ghrina tu mehssos, kar rahi hai, ab yehi teri zindagi hai. Tu isse na toh bhaag sakti hai na chip sakti hai. Ab apni baki ki zindagi mei, tu ek jallad ki patni hai" he paused and pointed to her tears and said, "aur tere ye aanson khabi khatam nahi honge. Ab zamin paar sho jha" he ordered and turned off the lights before going to sleep on the bed.

Paro moved backwards into a corner and slided down against a wall, hugging her legs, sobbing. Firmly holding her rudraraksh she whispered, "Mhaare se muh mat pheriye, bholenath. Mein bohot daari hui ho."



So this is the end of part 2! How was it? thumbs up or thumbs down? Please hit like and write your feedback below, good or bad i would love to read it and improve.
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Thank you soo much for reading. 😊
Special thanks to @aaliah3108 who helped me to write hindi dialogues. ❤️



The english translation on almost all the hindi dialogues in this update can be found on page 8.


Edited by TearGold - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome. Plzz cont.
And do pm me.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
nice update..thats so intense
waiting for the next one 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
intense update but pls dont let rudra force himself on paro. it is the ultimate insult to a beautiful relationship
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awsm update...brilliant concept
I have a request that plz don't add family drama it...want pure parud only
Waiting for next part...plz update soon

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