Navarasas || Bhayanaka- PART 2 UPDATED (18/5)

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SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Rudra has progressed so much since the beginning, very nicely shown in your descriptions of the 3 scenes. He has changed enough, been changed enough by her presence in his life, that he can almost accept this beautiful woman into his life. He is terrified ti lose her now, his most vivid nightmare. Losing a person , a woman, that he loves.

As usual, your writing is outstanding.

⭐️

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

fantastic 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

its simply fabolous

beautifully written.

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lourel24

@lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

amazing
U have beautifuly shown different phases of their relationship. 👏

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

That was a brilliant piece of writing..

loved it.

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Tia

@White-Lies

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Chotiii!

Success! Success!

*Wipes happy tears*

I will update my pg 1 comment once I get home.

But I'm so glad our idea worked. Tomorrow, my shot will complement Choti's.

Now that the format is accepted, I'm worried for my content tomorrow.

We kinda did it!:D

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Hope

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Wonderful...Bhayanaka, it was... You captured Rudra's fear very nicely.

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603840

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

I'm not going to comment on how late I am because I've cried buckets already. Nahiii!

Anyways this update to the series is just perfect. Your writing really catch Rudra's fear perfectly for each scene making it such a rereadable scene. Serious hardcore writing means for seriously proud applause.

Really great work sis and can't wait for tomorrow. 😳

Edited by -Zara- - 11 years ago

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shutter

@shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Absolutely brilliant!!!! Who would have thought of associating a word as "Bhayanak" to such emotions and that too for Rudra????

When I saw the title I thought of something very deadly and dangerous would be happening but no... It turned out to be even better!!!!!

All the emotions that Rudra goes through, right from the first word to the very last speaks volumes about all his being tuned to Paro...

A very very innovative way of writing!!!! 🤗 ❤️

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ujwala444

@ujwala444

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Way to go chiti desi way to go

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Meena

@chotidesi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: White-Lies
Chotiii!

Success! Success!

*Wipes happy tears*

I will update my pg 1 comment once I get home.

But I'm so glad our idea worked. Tomorrow, my shot will complement Choti's.

Now that the format is accepted, I'm worried for my content tomorrow.

We kinda did it!:D

It worked, it worked!! Do not worry about your content. I know it's good, Baisa. Self doubt is not allowed. Lau you lots! 🤗