Smitar's OS: Intoxication (For tvbug2011) - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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How cute.
Just to be pampered by love from his Paro he pretends to be drunk.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Wow! superb. Didn't see that coming. Totally loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful cute OS.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64







Super comment. The devil in Rudra never fails to get us😉



I am so glad you liked the OS😃





Waiting for today's analysis.





When will the CVs hear our plea? Tells me, tells me.






Edited by smitar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NICE ONE...i didnt know u write on parud also...😃...loved it...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitar


Super comment. The devil in Rudra never fails to get us😉
I am so glad you liked the OS😃


Waiting for today's analysis.

When will the CVs hear our plea? Tells me, tells me.





Smitar,

You have beautifully detailed the naughty Rudra. I always wondered whether this is what he did on the wedding night too. I always assumed Rudra wanted to marry Paro in the name of punishing her for supporting Tejawat. Then she ran away and he lost the chance. When Sumer gave him a chance he was so grateful he just hit him once. Did not even shout at Sumer. Remember ? And then used the suspension as a reason to marry Paro - am sure he was not drunk that day 😆

I wish this was Game of thrones or any such serial where revealing was not a problem. We would have got such steamy scenes. But alas ...

Who is Rulama ?
Edited by JJKKL - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: JJKKL



Smitar,

You have beautifully detailed the naughty Rudra. I always wondered whether this is what he did on the wedding night too. I always assumed Rudra wanted to marry Paro in the name of punishing her for supporting Tejawat. Then she ran away and he lost the chance. When Sumer gave him a chance he was so grateful he just hit him once. Did not even shout at Sumer. Remember ? And then used the suspension as a reason to marry Paro - am sure he was not drunk that day 😆

I wish this was Game of thrones or any such serial where revealing was not a problem. We would have got such steamy scenes. But alas ...

Who is Rulama ?



Rulama is Rashmi, my friend and one of the kindest people I know.😃

I have a problem posting on IF. That is why you find me quoting other posts so that I can post mine.😆 Rash helps me post my stories. I post my FF: Recalling Arnav on Mon, Wed & Fri on my blog & Rash posts them on IF. We have been doing this for quite some time now. I can't post a story without her help.😃

I am sure Rudra was not totally wasted on his wedding night. The circumstances gave him an excuse to reach out & grab what he really wanted & he took it. Hence the look of dawning realisation when Damayanti sa asked him if he had really wanted to marry Paro. I think Rudra was looking for an excuse to marry Paro..ha..ha.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: smitar



Rulama is Rashmi, my friend and one of the kindest people I know.😃

I have a problem posting on IF. That is why you find me quoting other posts so that I can post mine.😆 Rash helps me post my stories. I post my FF: Recalling Arnav on Mon, Wed & Fri on my blog & Rash posts them on IF. We have been doing this for quite some time now. I can't post a story without her help.😃

I am sure Rudra was not totally wasted on his wedding night. The circumstances gave him an excuse to reach out & grab what he really wanted & he took it. Hence the look of dawning realisation when Damayanti sa asked him if he had really wanted to marry Paro. I think Rudra was looking for an excuse to marry Paro..ha..ha.

smita !! u are another hidden talent , baisa ! u unfolded the twist at the end very cleverly that rudra was never drunk all the time...natkhat, rudra full of mischievous thoughts so like that jaipur phase ! write more !!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS
loved the twist !
Rudra is pretending to be drunk.. to get pampered by Paro
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely as always. I live Smitar's OS..
I missed reading these from IPKKND forum

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