NAVARASA:The Series-- # 2 UP on Pg 13! Vibhatsa (Disgust)

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Samantha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Heart wrenching and beautifully written

I have no words...

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nema123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

It just gives me shivers...thinking about what if the innocent Paro had to go thru this... god... please save the innocent girls...

You are simply awesome

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Farwa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

RES ITS A VERY GOOD IDEA

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bkamber

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Awesome writing. 👏

Don't know what to say.

I read this during breaks as I watch the news about the kidnapped Nigerian girls. This is reality for so many and not just fiction here.

As Diya said, this needs to be seen by ST and his writers.

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Roshni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Naps I don't have the words to express at how good this is is.
I felt hurt and saddened at how and what nandini must have gone through all those nine months where she was in a brothel. For her to not feel like leaving to go back to where she came from shows how much she feels she doesn't belong there no more. Her feeling more safe in the brother then the real world is heartbreaking and you have written her emotions down so wonderfully that even I could feel very hurt for her.
Beautiful peace of writing.

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DDC1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Navin,

I started to read and just could not go on... its just too much to take in.

Will come back to it later..

Even as my rational mind tells me this happens in every corner of the world, I can only pray that mankind finds it in their hearts to end this horror a tleast in the generations to come

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Unres-ed on Page 1..

Sorry for the delay...

But after I read this, I knew I was going to write a long comment..and I hate to type too much on the touch keyboard of my IPad..

Had to get the trusty ol' laptop out for this one...

Cheers

Maya

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bohemia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Simply brilliant, Napster. I am utterly speechless. Vibhasta is such a strong emotion, even stronger when internalized. You nailed it with Nandini's journey.

I am in awe of you style of writing. Really looking forward to the navarasa series. I do confess I am not much into Fan Fics. But the concept of writings on the navarasa really intrigues me.

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devsum

@devsum

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

OMG! absolutely superb... after reading this i wanted to take a shower as i could literally feel Nandini's disgust for her body. I do not have enough words to comment. You have portrayed, with economic words her despair...

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MOnamy11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

I'm speechless ! Never I've thought you are gonna remind us of the lost NANDINI IT was heart wrenching , deep and most of all TRUE for all the women ,victms of human trafficking . Forgive my unablity to comment properly on this piece !

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