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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: asmi279
Ws waiting fr kd to res first..unka haq hai :D

ab my res
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unres..

hai baisa..wen I read the color of the day, I ws sure it ws gonna b abt paro n bholenath n rukmini...bt u completely took me by surprise...I hd never thot abt wat this beautiful color wd mean fr rudra...amazing amazing take baisa!!

Wasn't that sweet of you, Asmi-sa! Thank you for letting KD take the first!

And Thank you for the beautiful comment. Wow, actually I didn't even think once from Paro's angle. Now that you said it, I realized that yes, Paro has blues too...!!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: HappilyLost

I am in for a sloppy kiss😆😆 And yes I have read Kashish's work. You two are amazing writers and glad I am reading your stuff on this forum😳
I mentioned sweet evil because they had something similar about colours and emotions which I liked but they went unexplored of course, Dont worry, its just another YA books, fantasy types, but with that color emotion twist,

Yes of course you may know my name. I am Nidhi and you??😳😳

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Just saw your next update and needless to say that was beautiful!! I loved the flow , the comparison.
Loved how he compares her to the serene and clam sky, dreams about it and refuses to believe that she exists. Almost lyrical.
You must be really working hard Baisa coming up with these. If this is how the series will unfold then I am not leaving you anywhere through it😆

Hope my comments do justice to your work. Just know that you write beautifully😊

I am Ankita. Nice to meet you! :)

Rudra could have made for a brilliant brooding poet or writer. I dunno why.. I just think so at times. :P

I really am being threatened and tortured by KD. But I think its all worth it if I get readers like you who promise to stay! :*

Thank you Nidhi!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: rangprab
green is synonymous with lailas... her envy jealousy etc etc... but blue for Rudra... i never though... loved the analogy of a mirage and blue and paro...

lovely concept...

Thank you!

I hope you stick around for other colors too!

😃

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: What_the
The blue of the water...of fleeting mirages...that never last...
Your creativity and imagination is fantastic!!

Love how you compared her to water, to quench his unbearable thirst...
Yet, he cant believe that he would be so lucky as to have her in his life...and puts it all down to a trick of his mind...

And i absolutely agree with KD, you are the queen of last liners...
This one was also ended brilliantly...

Me quoting shayari n all for you now...completely random though...

Pani Se Pyaas Na Bujhi,
Toh Maikhane Ki taraf Chal Nikla,
Socha Shikayat Karun Teri Khudha Se,
Par Khudha bhi Tera Ashiq Nikla...

Maya! Haaye. Kya shayari hai... I think you are gonna spoil me!

Isn't that how Rudra is. She has been offering him her love for ages now. Yet the fear of it all never really lets Rudra accept it!

I saw your PM. And then I saw the comment!!

Thank you.

And a big sloppy kiss!! :*

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: prettypri
Anky... just read both color drabbles and wow!!!
👏
Rudras lack of self worth and hence his doubt's regarding paros love was so beautifully brought out by the imagery of the blue water and the mirage!

He is scared to get closer because if it is a mirage it will disappear as he gets closer leaving him alone in the scorching desert again!

And blue is a lovely color for rudra as it also symbolizes the calm paro has brought into his life!

You write amazingly well and I loved reading this!

Thank you Pri!

And I loved your comment absolutely. The way you described Rudra. Yes. Ekdum bada wala Yes.

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div26

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Amazing 😊

Love the concept of mirages. Can't wait to know which colour is next.

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..
Awesome concept
Loved both drabble

Thanks so much..!

Originally posted by: shreya_rc
Wow zaaku ! both green and blue are 👏.
In a hurry now. will write a detailed feedback later !

Shreyu! Comment soon! I'll wait!

Originally posted by: MissAsian
I love ur creativity and imagination
love how Rudra can't bellieve that a person can be so beautiful inside and out like Paro

Thanks so much... And Rudra is a cynic. -_- Its the beliefs he has that need work!

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: niyoti
Will unres green soon 😃

LOVED this!

I've always loved the comparison of parched desert and soothing rain when it comes to our Paro and Rudra.

Now I'm in love with this drabble. A thirsty weary traveller.. Every single time he falls for the mirage, and the elusive promise of relief, he is mocked by the unforgiving desert. But no more! No more... The desert has laughed long enough at his expense. He finally rises form the sand, the lesson has sunk in, his heart is steeled, he will not fall for it again..

What then will he do when the promised relief is so close at hand. So real?

You made me feel that breathless second of suspended disbelief when one hovers between shunning what is apparently real and reaching out to touch it just the same for reassurance.. just to make sure.. what if the desert wasn't playing tricks this time?

Loved it.. bas..

Aaah Niyo. Are you trying to make me feel ekdum hi completely useless with the descriptive drabble that you wrote here!! Haaye! I could read and re-read all of this!!

Tu banjar registaan sa... Aur woh baarish jaisi.. Tujhpe giregi toh thandak milegi tujhe.

Those words will be timeless. Likhwa lo mujhse!

And if this is how you are going to comment everytime, I am willing to update more often!!

Love you my Shrimati-ji! :*

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Ankita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: bluemoon255
Anky baisa🤗

that was beautiful. blue is one of my favorite colors maybe that is the reason I liked this one better or maybe it was because I hate laila and her thoughts just annoy me😆 anyways lovely drabble baisa. you have captured his emotions beautifully. waiting for ur next update.❤️

Nishoo-Sa! 🤗

Be it any reason, i am just glad that you liked it!

Although if its the Laila wala reason, I am completely with you!! 😆