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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
Blue
"Regarding you a complete fool for even believing in the first place that such serene blue could exist."
And this is the crux of it. He cannot believe that a human like her exists, he must be a fool. This is what his mind is telling him.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_


Sukhi, someday I wanna chat with you and eat your brains out discussing Ashish. Promise me you won't be creeped out by me.

I have developed a really unhealthy obsession with the awesomeness that is Ashish Sharma. And everyday I think he cannot get better than this, I stumble across facts like this that make me go loony again.

I knew about his father writing books, as he always has them in his hand in almost every BTS. He reads on sets it seems.

But IAS? Any idea which division? I am sorry I am asking crazed questions. Just curious! 😆


Well I have no idea about division but according to so many interviews of ashish his father is a retired IAS officer from Rajasthan cader.Even acc.to some recent interview in newspaper his father was an IAs officer from Rajasthan. ..about chatting. .you are most welcome dear 🤗..being his fan since his first show I know so many things about him dear. .one more thing his parents are very good luking. ..ashishs niece's name is angel sharma.
She is very cute.



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Posted: 11 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: CyberOstrich

Hi Senbon- You are Ankita right? Can I call you that?

You there is an honesty and simplicity in your writing that really touches me! Really like both green and blue here 😊 Green- especially I like reading about the laila angle and also i had really high hopes with the Laila track going on now and that it will bring out the emotional intensity to the fore- real emotions- jealously, guilt, insecurity- but last 2 days have been a little blahish for me! Maybe early days yet! Blue- any insights to Rudra Dev's mind is always enticing to me.

I have read your previous work also- but I am the alasi kinds who generally dont comment- sorry for that!

Also- I have to mention that I find your posts unbelievablely cute- bilkul 'cheek pulling' kinds- so consider your cheeks pulled😊


Yep yep.. Call me Ankita! Can I ask your name CO-sa??

I think its just the start of the track, that's why there has been no intensity. But ohh well. Lets see what happens next. The way Laila is being, I am already exhausted by her.

Even if you comment once and like the post, I am super happy CO-sa!


*considered non-existent cheeks pulled* 😆

Thank you so much CO-Sa!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: shagun-rocks

loved the way you drew a parallel between a mirage and the colour blue... blues is also the colour of calm...paro's presence in rudra's life would bring in that soothing effect that he desperately seeks...


.Thanks Shagun-sa!

Exactly, Paro is the calm to Rudra... If only he let her be.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
I always love this non basher zone. .really love to read this discussion.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
such beautiful drabbles - the way incorporated the beautiful colors with the feelings..
-Sona
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: chotidesi

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Res oh mygod</font>

Unres:

First of all, I'm so sorry for stealing KD's spot- I didn't realize it! Second, I'm sorry it took me so long to unres. I'm still reeling from exams

Now that all my excuses are done- wow. Wow wow wow. I did not expect this for green- it's such a creative way to incorporate this scene. I would have picked this for yellow, but you completely surprised me. I'm very, very impressed- you didn't write a lot, but you certainly packed a punch. There's so much emotion in your words- every single word in this is meaningful, and says something.

Coming to blue- I loved this one too. I like how you've changed the meaning of things, how you've made the impact of her in his life so vivid. The sky is something that's so constant on our lives- and the changing of the color was a wonderful way to describe this.


Phenomenal writing. Absolutely wonderful



I am happy you got the first spot CD! KD was giving me panic attacks by going all invisible on me..!


I know that haldi se hi yellow inspire hota.. I would love your reactions on yellow. ^)3^

Thanks so much CD!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: niyoti

Back at ya :*

@Colored text: I loved those lines when i heard them the first time and they'll stay with me forever and ever...

Why do i have a feeling you're going to do yellow next?😳

EDIT: I just scrolled up and saw that you ARE in fact doing yellow. 😆


Orange or yellow. That is.

Actually, I have written 6 of them by now. Sssh, don't tell anybody!

Just the replying actually takes time. :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: niyoti


I've thought of that too, when Thakurain is talking to Paro and Bindi near that lake/pond about the kind of man she can see Paro with.. They kept cutting the scene to Ruda chasing those terrorists and it made me wonder how different he might have been had his mother stayed.



The bread and butter of a writer... What-ifs and Could haves..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: tic-tac

Haila!!! What have you done with Rudra Banna😲

Where is the brooding, demanding, pulling and pushing, shouting and sulking Rudra banna???😲
😆
Aap ne toh usse shaayar hi bana diya...he has turned all poetic...
Don't give him ideas, Baisa...waise bhi aaj kal ghar mein hi rehte hain, and I am afraid that now he will take a book and a pen and start writing poems on his beautiful (blue-blue) wife😉 😆

Waise that was a treat to read...amazingly written..👏

I don't know the exact name of the drawing...but when I was in school..my drawing teacher use to teach us various types of drawing...like sketching, pencil shading, painting , and as I said I am not able to recall the type...but there was one were she use tell us to use cool and hot colors...the cool colors include of green, blue, and one more which I can't recall and hot colors includes of yellow, orange, red...

So, what more apt color than blue to describe some one as cool and serene as Parvati??

You did a amazing job...

waise I don't know anything about violet color ...so will be waiting to know about that...

waise it's so mean of you to keep the red last😔 😆



Love


Sambhavi...




I didn't do anything to Rudra Banna! Shaayari kahaan ki usne?? Bataao? 😆

You know I wouldn't mind him actually writing on his wife.

Waise Thank you!


You know I used to really suck at drawing. And half the time I used to be punished in drawing class! So, I have no idea about the drawing style you are saying!

It isn't mean. Red is PaRud and its huge to even attempt red on them. Red is the only color that's haunting me and I am cursing KD for it!

Violet... Hmm. Wait for two days and you'll know! :P

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