Seven Hues- A Drabble Series Complete Page 39 - Page 30

Just read indigo and read in one go and all I want to say to you right now is, No you didn't disappoint Ankita baisa.

Starting with indigo, that was one piece of amazing imagination!! You brought back the memories of the cod aloof BSD walls swallowing a young innocent girl who stares helplessly as her meek future ahead.

I gather that the song was for reference purpose? Well it did fit amazingly well with Paro's situation though.

The sense of desperation and despondency was almost palpable and that was made possible with this effective piece of writing, beautiful.

Her torment when the mark of her being a married women was ripped apart was heart wrenching and the colour indigo matched the dull atmosphere that is associated with a widow's life in the deserts of Rajasthan.

Coming to red. The connection of red and the sacred bond of marriage was beautiful and thought provoking. I loved how you talked about Rudra's familiarity with the colour due to his profession. And then how it changed meanings and the colour red holds new significance in his life.

I liked how you brought out the unique mangalsutra in this whole concept!

And of course the force , the power it held was exquisitely portrayed. How he can't ignore when she beckons him with her relationship as a wife was lovely!

It had been an amazing journey for me as well baisa! And I am so glad I read through your work and familiarised myself with your amazing talent! And I got a friend as well!😛😛😛

I will definitely look out for more of your works in the future.

Originally posted by: _SenbonZakura_

Rave on Sonata-chan! (Imma call you Chan.. Tell me if you are older, and I'll change it to San! :*)

I loved how you said Paro leaves her colors everywhere.. She is amazing. And your comment is amazing!

I am just overwhelmed with your comment and I wanna say Aishiteru!!