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dreamwinner

@dreamwinner

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#281

Most powerful was red in this series of Drabble

But then red has a power to overshadow others

due to its significance brought by u and the way

u wrote it

Hopefully will read more of u on this forum

Keep writing anky, u do write well

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#282

Amazing writing again 😊

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-NatureLover-

@-NatureLover-

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#283

sorry for not commenting on every color,Senbon...I was going to comment yesterday but after few post IF restricted me giving the error.. as I am groubie, I cant make more than 20 posts in 24hrs.

But I loved every drabble, my fav was orange...you have described it beautifully...grey, I just loved the little cute convo between Mr and Mrs Ranawat, loved Rudra 's thoughts...and then Red😃...just the way I thought it...filled with love and passion

You have done an awesome work here..I loved reading this drabble ...hope to read more from you :)

love

Sambhavi

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#284

It's sad that this series has come to a end, but I look forward to reading other pieces of ur work

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#285

I thought of Dor the moment you mentioned the indigo attire...and then I found the song at the end of the update...

It is something that has not been touched upon in the show.. even though they showed it in the promos..

Just one short reference, when she wished to change out of the suhaag ka joda...

Paro's reaction to living the life of a widow...

It is not a colourless life...but it is so thoroughly drenched in one single colour..someone like Paro, who is full of vibrancy and bright hues...it makes her shudder to think of such a life..

You really brought that out so well..

Her current existence confined inside the BSD prison, accused of crimes she had not committed?

Or a possible existence back in the village, where she would remain confined within the boundaries that society draws, serving a sentence for life, for something that she cannot be held responsible for?

How can she possibly choose one over the other?

Lovely writing Anky...

Love always,

Maya

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#286

Red..

a colour that represented blood and violence to him previously..

a colour that he was immune to..

And now it reminds him of the mangalsutra he tied around her neck..

the sindoor in her parting...his sindoor..

I just loved how you showed Rudra's changing perception of the colour red...

beautifully thought out..

Oh and I love how it beckons him closer, reels him in...and he is powerless to stop himself..he absolutely must answer the summons...

wow!!

And the series has to come to an end...a fitting end!

This entire series has been written so well Anky..

I am trying to pick a favorite, but I just can't... I loved each and every drabble so much!

Standing 👏 you deserve sweetie..

To write seven updates over 4-5 days...and to execute each and every one of them so perfectly..and each one has been well-thought out, conveys a novel idea/concept...

kudos!!

I also want to thank Couch Potato for putting you up to this...or we would have missed out on such wonderful writing, right? 😃

Love

Maya

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#287

What an amazing closing piece! 👏

By the way, what is it with arrogant men and fetish for red? 😆

The thisgs that Rudra is drawn to are very much acceptable and, dare i say, sexy. Being attracted to the signs of marriage of your wife is... hot.

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#288

It was a beautiful piece baabu...

Red is one color that stands for emotions all varied..

Love... violence... danger..

i just loved how you drew the parallel... how you brought about two emotions...

Beautiful it was.. I just loved the depth of it..

Amazing.. Blissful... Awesome.. :D

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Aishwarya

@Aish002

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#289

this series has a fitting end...describing how Rudra is now literally at the beck and call of Paro..😊..she wields that kind of power on him..

Strange..that though he was the one to that thread around her neck, he ended up being the one TIED to her..now tats love...

liked how you portrayed the way Rudra was helpless in love..in their relationship...lol..not even seal 6 training is gonna help him in losing this battle with his Paro..

Enjoyed reading each drabble and pls PM when you write next time..

Edited by Aish002 - 11 years ago