Originally posted by: neet2407
Loved both contemplation and Cured!
Contemplation - on the back of a phatphatiya! awesome! loved the way you described her hesitation and her eagerness to hold him and how maybe Rudra sensed it too and decided to show her it was ok by holding her hand bringing it around his waist - tru 'haq'and Cured - a wonderful description of the room which has seen so much, become warm and cold dependent on how the occupant has been treated and how it swung back to being comforting again as his Paro returns with him - it's like the room breates again as Paro does!it's amazing that you can make a room express his depth of love for Paro!