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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#251

You're not following any storyline but u're making each drabble connect.
I love this drabble series. Continue soon

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SherryGS

@SherryGS

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#252

Its amazing that you can write poetry like this in 5 minutes. Gifted for sure.

Both Paro and Rudra trying so hard to conceal their feelings, so afraid of the reactions of the other or themselves. You conveyed it so well.

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#253

Originally posted by: radhikalaya
Wow! Beautiful. This series keeps getting better 😊

Awww! Thank You! :)

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asmi279

@asmi279

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#254

this is my fav drabble so far..bcoz it simultaneously conveys the feelings of both of them in one breath..loved it :):)

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Anushka

@bebo2050

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Posted: 11 years ago

#255

just caught up on the parts i missed , i like this series a lot 😊

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Anita

@neet2407

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#256

Hello again!

another fab drabble - apart from the story itself _ I love your style of writing - the emotions come to the fore when the words are few - because the spaces in between allow the emotions to breath and really hit home

Am so happy they are together and they both realise that they matter to each other - wonderful!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

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+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: MissAsian
You're not following any storyline but u're making each drabble connect.
I love this drabble series. Continue soon

But I AM following a storyline! And thats why its coming across as such...the drabbles happen the way they do without intention but there is something akin to a storyline in my mind...

But thank you for your comment! :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 11 years ago

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Maya

@What_the

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#258

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Unres...

Such a beautiful confession..

No words needed...

The universe not only conspires for them to be together, the elements of nature are attuned to their love... the wind carries their silent confession to each other...

They are just meant to be, no matter how hard they try, they cannot restrain their emotions and their need to be with each other..

I esp loved this sentence:

he moment he had wiped her tears, and the moment she had allowed him to see them.

Yes, when we trust someone enough to share our sorrow and seek comfort from them, it is the best form of confession, isn't it?

The past, the future, nothing matters - when they have each other... perfect!

This series is just beautiful Angel!

Love

Maya

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago