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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga123

Awesome. ...thanks for the PM


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Love how you express so many emotions in so few words.

Her joy at seeing him again is so beautifully expressed.
Loved it.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains


This was SO beautiful, this scene had a dreamlike, soporific aura to it. Yet I could feel Rudra's eyes roving over her, and her eyes lighting up. My favourite was the last line!


Perfection <3


It made you fall asleep?! :O

Kidding kidding! I know you didnt mean it that way (you better not have! :p)

Thank You so much! <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ah... I'm late. Real life issues. But I do hope you will read this.
"Maybe" and "Dreams" won me over. The narrative was unique and refreshing. Given that you write drabbles, which are short by nature, you only use these words to your advantage.

That moment of coming home, the meeting- the vial of emotions must have been full to the brim. But the staccato, single line sentences left a lot more to feel.

A fan of brevity, you win me over with these drabbles. They traverse an emotional landscape which is heart-warming. Will keep an eye out for your next.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rangprab

yes dream it was that became a reality... so true...


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: neet2407

And one from Rudra - short simple sweet - they wanting one with each other so much they can 't believe it's actually happening but it is and the royals turns just for them - beautiful writing !


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Posted: 11 years ago

Bahut shurkiya sara_in :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: White-Lies

Ah... I'm late. Real life issues. But I do hope you will read this.

"Maybe" and "Dreams" won me over. The narrative was unique and refreshing. Given that you write drabbles, which are short by nature, you only use these words to your advantage.

That moment of coming home, the meeting- the vial of emotions must have been full to the brim. But the staccato, single line sentences left a lot more to feel.

A fan of brevity, you win me over with these drabbles. They traverse an emotional landscape which is heart-warming. Will keep an eye out for your next.


Thank You but I have a doubt - you liked or did not like the one line sentences of 'Maybe'? :)
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! Beautiful. This series keeps getting better 😊

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