| Mirror Images | Drabble Series ~ Last Drabble + Note - Pg56 (24/05) - Page 27

This is beautiful! Such a pleasure reading this. You know this whole series is drastically different from your usual writing. I mean I have more or less read most your work, which focusses on profound storylines and the story being spun around it. This series on the other hand concentrates more of the innermost emotions embedded in these two characters' hearts, the sounds, the scents and the sights they are walking through each day. Its a visual delight!

That was really good! Amazing writing!

Originally posted by: SherryGS

Its amazing that you can write poetry like this in 5 minutes. Gifted for sure.

Both Paro and Rudra trying so hard to conceal their feelings, so afraid of the reactions of the other or themselves. You conveyed it so well.

Originally posted by: asmi279

this is my fav drabble so far..bcoz it simultaneously conveys the feelings of both of them in one breath..loved it :):)

simply superb
loved it👏

Originally posted by: bebo2050

just caught up on the parts i missed , i like this series a lot 😊

Originally posted by: neet2407

Hello again!

another fab drabble - apart from the story itself _ I love your style of writing - the emotions come to the fore when the words are few - because the spaces in between allow the emotions to breath and really hit home

Am so happy they are together and they both realise that they matter to each other - wonderful!

Dil ki baat jisse zubaan se baya karne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi - how beautifully you described it.

Fusion of hearts, words, feelings, elements. The build through each drabble from both perspectives is so beautiful in this 'merged' drabble :)

Originally posted by: tinkleby

Wow! I mean really wow!!! How do you do this every single time?

In those few line you managed to bring forth both of their feelings and how! It has been done so beautifully that I am in awe. 👏