| Mirror Images | Drabble Series ~ Last Drabble + Note - Pg56 (24/05) - Page 16

Originally posted by: MissAsian

Course, the bit about Paro daydreaming as a child and thus ending up with burnt rotis was cute

But because u're extremely good with words, i sympathise too much with the character and end up sad. Not my fault :P

Ahaha. But can u plejj give them a happy ending ? (:

Originally posted by: neet2407

Hi just back on the forum

wonderful last two drabbles - Paro's views and dreams and Rudra's dreams - they are each other's heart and soul and you can definitely get that from your wonderful writing

waiting for them to see each other again!

Originally posted by: automaticstart

angelteen u just has gain a new fan .u r such amazing writer i just loved the first two drabbles they r just n i will read the others . but i wanna read all ur work . should i send a buddy request or what .plz do tell me.

Originally posted by: SherryGS

He is a man tormented by her absence. He knows now what it is to really lose love. Great work!

I was left a little weepy eyed after this piece. Its so well written, although no surprises there. But there are so many lines that have left me speechless here. Lines which I'm not likely to forget any time soon. In fact I think I'm going to take out a notebook and jot them down for future reference! For instance, he needed her insanity to make him sane and he need her dreams to make up for his nightmares. Such poetical, lyrical lines. Then another part that stood out for me was the analogy you may have drawn consciously or subconsciously between his physical demeanour and the thoughts rioting within him. I mean we see his rigid stance, but his mind is mellow acknowledging these new sensations. And even before we have seen this umpteen number of times, when he thinks something, does something absolutely different. Amazing, amazing drabble, my favourite till now.

continue as soon as you can.. All have been amazing!

Originally posted by: peppygeek

I don't know what to say other than a thank you. The last two pieces gave me hope :)

loved all of the parts.they are awesome.

Lovely again. Indeed they are soulmates, the two halves need to come together. Once gain you conveyed so much of depth with such economy of words.

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Thank You so much! And wasnt this a slightly more 'happy shappy' drabble? :p :)

PS - I like that line too :)

For me Happiness starts with The Leads Reunion 😳😆
Us se pehle nahii 😆