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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2

Wow what a lovely take on the aspirations of an innocent soul, who just cannot stop dreaming. After all why should she? You capture the simple bond of mother and her child caught up in her own world in an immpecable manner, such radiance, such purity is witnessed and it is hard to not wonder if ever her dreams would turn into reality or not.

Bringing back the sweet memories of her childhood in comaprison to the bitter ones of Rudra's shows how much her presence is going to heal him, help him battlle his emotions and come to terms with it. She knows which memories are close to her heart and chooses to stick to them, leaving behind all the painful ones, unlike Rudra.

Her undyinng faith, undeterred way of ensuring that she can dream big and turn them into reality is definitely making her stronger emotionally day by day. She is able to pick up from she left and move on showing her capability of accepting reality and act maturely, take responsiblity - to be a loving daughter and dutiful wife, given the opportunity.

A beautiful and subtle Shiv-Parvati scenario comes to play. Her dreams, wishes are all simple and pure and yet she might willingly sacrifice them just to be with him, her ultimate dream.

What a refreshing take after the emotional, heart-wrenching bus ride, which I am sure many would think about when actually travelling in one.

I guess may have gotten off-topic and related unneccessary things.


Thank You so much for such a thoughtful and reflective comment, one which looks beyond then what is written in plain words. I have highlighted two parts of your comment which I would like you to go back to when you read the the companion drabble to this one, you will know why when you do! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2

Well I must say aapki sincerity cha gayi!! 👏👏👏 When it comes to reponses, looking for feedback, taking it into account useful remarks if found marks the character of true master, who yet so skilled is only able to continue to exceed expectations with every new drabble!! Loved your Dreamers, you make us all dream ki kaash hum bhi kabhi aap ki writing skills ke 1% kareeb bhi aayen!!


Awww! You are making me blush and resemble a tomato now! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: MissAsian

Omg i feel so bad for Paro


I understand that but the last chapter wasnt just a little bit uplifting?
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago

He needed her dreams to make up for his nightmares.


What a Beautiful Line ⭐️

Loving these shots angel

HOw beautifully your portray there pain in a simple way

I hope Bholenaath fulfills their dreams 😳

so that you give us happy shappy drabbles 😛😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
I did not get the last drabble, so i did not comment. Hope you don't mind 🤔
But this, is amazing stuff. Reeking of loneliness. I hope he act on his thinking too, rather than lamenting or cursing khoobsoorati.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok... This is my most fav drabble so far.. Beautiful, clear, simple truth.. Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen



<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I understand that but the last chapter wasnt just a little bit uplifting?</font>



Course, the bit about Paro daydreaming as a child and thus ending up with burnt rotis was cute

But because u're extremely good with words, i sympathise too much with the character and end up sad. Not my fault :P

Ahaha. But can u plejj give them a happy ending ? (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg by far the best piece of drabble!!

This one was sure as hell uplifting

Can't wait for him to go get her

And tho the response rate isn't what u expected, don't lose hope. You're a talented writer and ur stories are what make me stalk RR forum ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi just back on the forum
wonderful last two drabbles - Paro's views and dreams and Rudra's dreams - they are each other's heart and soul and you can definitely get that from your wonderful writing

waiting for them to see each other again!
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