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mona

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

angelteen u just has gain a new fan .u r such amazing writer i just loved the first two drabbles they r just n i will read the others . but i wanna read all ur work . should i send a buddy request or what .plz do tell me.

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SherryGS

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

He is a man tormented by her absence. He knows now what it is to really lose love. Great work!

Edited by SherryGS - 11 years ago

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peppygeek

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

I don't know what to say other than a thank you. The last two pieces gave me hope :)

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

I really liked how you built up to his acceptance that he needed her.

Starting with an outsider's view of him and culminating with his own self reflection.

Clever.

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anisa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

loved the way he melted down and realise he needs her!

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: XSilentPrayersX
He needed her dreams to make up for his nightmares.

What a Beautiful Line ⭐️
Loving these shots angel
HOw beautifully your portray there pain in a simple way
I hope Bholenaath fulfills their dreams 😳
so that you give us happy shappy drabbles 😛😆

Thank You so much! And wasnt this a slightly more 'happy shappy' drabble? :p :)

PS - I like that line too :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: aruni50218
I did not get the last drabble, so i did not comment. Hope you don't mind 🤔
But this, is amazing stuff. Reeking of loneliness. I hope he act on his thinking too, rather than lamenting or cursing khoobsoorati.

Thank You! :)

And if you have any doubts about the last drabble or any other thing, you can ask me :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: asmi279
Ok... This is my most fav drabble so far.. Beautiful, clear, simple truth.. Loved it!

Awww! Thank You! :)

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Maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#149

This was lovely...

Your writing is so poignant...their emotions come across so well, I feel my throat constrict as I mentally will Parvati to be there for Rudra...to be there with her dreams, to make up for his nightmares..

Loved the way you wrote that being with Rudra gave Parvati the desire to leave her fears behind and dream again, of a life with him...its a beautiful thought..

You are executing this series perfectly - their contrasting perspectives have been very well-written and are an absolute pleasure to read..

Love

what_the (Maya)

PS: Have res-ed Intertwined for now...will read later...

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago