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anisa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

amazing work in just a few words!

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@LadyR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

And we meet Paravti and an insight into her innocent mind of dreams and aspirations, that were shattered at a young age, she slowly learnt to dream again , hope again, she dares to love again..

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: mistyrains
This is beautiful and heartbreaking. And still stirs up a little hope. I have always pictured Paro's character as this woman with a multitude of dreams. Not only dreams of being in love, having that loving family ; but you know- seeing the world outside of Birpur, having new experiences - something that would mould her into a stronger person. This seems like an insight to all that. ( or maybe I'm over-analysing).

Nonetheless, very refreshing read. And wonderful writing, as usual! <3

I love your take on this drabble...its extremely reflective and looks past the usual in the drabble :)

Thank You so much! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: SherryGS
Dreamer could almost be about anyone of us. Well written.

And that was the point. Thank You so much! :)

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asmi279

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

I hd completely forgot this side of paro..a carefree girl with her own dreamland..m so used to see her being the obedient niece n mature wife/daughter in law, that this drabble seems like a jolt back into the past..loved it!

u know wat, reading the first few words, for some reason I thought this drabble ws abt maithili..she must also hd a dreams n fairytales of her own..if u find the inspiration, I wd luv to read ur take on her :) nt in this series probably, bt as a one-off piece..

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: anisa79
amazing work in just a few words!

Thank You! :)

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Wow what a lovely take on the aspirations of an innocent soul, who just cannot stop dreaming. After all why should she? You capture the simple bond of mother and her child caught up in her own world in an immpecable manner, such radiance, such purity is witnessed and it is hard to not wonder if ever her dreams would turn into reality or not.

Bringing back the sweet memories of her childhood in comaprison to the bitter ones of Rudra's shows how much her presence is going to heal him, help him battlle his emotions and come to terms with it. She knows which memories are close to her heart and chooses to stick to them, leaving behind all the painful ones, unlike Rudra.

Her undyinng faith, undeterred way of ensuring that she can dream big and turn them into reality is definitely making her stronger emotionally day by day. She is able to pick up from she left and move on showing her capability of accepting reality and act maturely, take responsiblity - to be a loving daughter and dutiful wife, given the opportunity.

A beautiful and subtle Shiv-Parvati scenario comes to play. Her dreams, wishes are all simple and pure and yet she might willingly sacrifice them just to be with him, her ultimate dream.

What a refreshing take after the emotional, heart-wrenching bus ride, which I am sure many would think about when actually travelling in one.

I guess may have gotten off-topic and related unneccessary things.

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Sumneet

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

Well I must say aapki sincerity cha gayi!! 👏👏👏 When it comes to reponses, looking for feedback, taking it into account useful remarks if found marks the character of true master, who yet so skilled is only able to continue to exceed expectations with every new drabble!! Loved your Dreamers, you make us all dream ki kaash hum bhi kabhi aap ki writing skills ke 1% kareeb bhi aayen!!

Edited by zeffy2k2 - 11 years ago

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: LadyR
And we meet Paravti and an insight into her innocent mind of dreams and aspirations, that were shattered at a young age, she slowly learnt to dream again , hope again, she dares to love again..

Thank You for such a poetic comment! :)

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AngelTeen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: asmi279
I hd completely forgot this side of paro..a carefree girl with her own dreamland..m so used to see her being the obedient niece n mature wife/daughter in law, that this drabble seems like a jolt back into the past..loved it!

u know wat, reading the first few words, for some reason I thought this drabble ws abt maithili..she must also hd a dreams n fairytales of her own..if u find the inspiration, I wd luv to read ur take on her :) nt in this series probably, bt as a one-off piece..

Thank You so much! :)

I will try and write on other characters too as and when the inspiration strikes! :)