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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SherryGS

👏 I only now have discovered these pieces. Masterpieces. You should be proud. You are very talented to convey such emotion in such few words.

I was enthralled by Fancies, in particular. It was masterful. Rudra at his most vulnerable. I have commented on other threads that I find Rudra's POV to be my weakness. The toughest characters are always the most interesting. You wrote that piece so well and it said everything it needed to. I was lost in it. Thank you! ⭐️


Thank You so much! Glad you are liking the drabbles and the writing! Much grateful for the appreciation!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sparikh

This is too good; both of them suffering same pain - dealing it with differently.

-Sona


Thank You! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jaz1990

Great Drabble, ubahve managed to capture the emotions in so little words


Thank You! Glad you liked it! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

^ I am so sorry if you felt bad but I try to respond in order of the comments and I would have definitely responded to your earlier comment (which I am going to do as soon as I reach it in the order as I will to this one) because I loved it! It was so quirky and sweet - all rolled into one! So please dont feel bad and wait for my response, madamoiselle! :D


I am the one who should be shoudl be apologising and not shamelessly demanding for an response. Glad you liked the response, 😳😳, it means a lot.
You are the one who sincerely replies to all your comments and not skip it, so I guess it is valid if that takes time and that I need to wait patiently for it.


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: adi09

Loving it, keep it coming . You've got a good style which should be developed and expanded more.👍🏼


Thank You! Glad you feel so! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zeffy2k2

I must say you redefine the term "A man of few words", you are the perfect version of "A woman of few words", your ability to leave us pondering about your work which we read in less than a minute pretty much shows what a wonderful impact you have through your piece of art!!



Hey! Why did you edit this out! I loved the original comment with all that about the future Mr. AT! *Pouts*

In any case, thank you so much! :)


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyrains

There are always these certain phases/instances in our life we tend to remember by particular sounds, visuals etc. In this case, most of the misery and pain Rudra deals with is bookmarked by the rickety sound of this bus, which keeps coming back to haunt him.

Beautiful rendition of both their situations!


Thank You so much, Sona! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AngelTeen


Hey! Why did you edit this out! I loved the original comment with all that about the future Mr. AT! *Pouts*

In any case, thank you so much! :)



Wow, yup made me realise I could have crossed a line and you might have felt that it got too personal.
So here goes the unedited part,

Lucky I guess would be your students if you are a teacher and unlucky would be furture Mr AngelTeen since he would get to hear less!!

Hope it makes it up and cheers you!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am loving this series...
Very nice concept...mirror images...both their perspectives...wow!!

Beautifully written...and creates clear images in your mind...of a Rudra clutching at thin air, as he wakes up to find his Paro gone...of a Paro who wants to forget, but just can't do it...she can't stop listening to the sound of his heartbeat as it resonates inside her head...
The way you used the concept of sound in such different manners, from their respective points of view...it was just lovely...

This video is for you... I dont know why, it came to mind as i read the third drabble...
I love this scene, hope you like it too...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l6_vgpbqd48[/YOUTUBE]
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Posted: 11 years ago
U have captured Rudra's emotions brilliantly and I bet this is ho he will feel when Paro will eventually leave him for that mannat of hers.

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