Four Shot: SAY GOOD-BYE--Part 3, Pg 26 (updated--June 17th) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: napstermonster


So you know I love you, and we always end up thinking along the same lines and reading the same things. When I see that you've commented, i feel better, like...oh, okay, she;s seen it, and said something about it--its not just me. So, this comment of yours carried more than usual weight with me. I have to ask you, and any reader who is following this, to tell me something--tell me what you think is more important---her pact with God, and in essence her faith, or her pact with Rudra, by which I mean what she owes him as is wife. What should carry weight?

I deliberately left Part 2 open, because I am asking myself this. Paro's love for Rudra is WHY she is leaving him, why she gave him up. If it was a lesser love, then she wouldn't have sacrificed it before her God. And BTW, I don't buy the--but God wont bargain, he is selfless" argument--because as per the serial--God kinda did. The second she gave him up in the temple, the light shone and he came back to his senses. That showed God accepted their pact. Now, which of her two Gods should she anger, which one should she betray? Suggestions? Opinions?


Napster darlinggg!

I have been thinking about this all day. I am going to sit at my desk and type on the damn ipad with both hands, because one-handed typing makes for road rage type profanity!

I think that the whole scene in the temple brought out one very important thing. When you make a bargain with God, you ask for something that you cannot live without and you give something that you cannot live without, right? THAT IS ONE AND THE SAME THING ! ...ok I will stop shouting.

So what are you doing in effect? You are asking for your life, and giving up your life. You are in fact, surrendering unconditionally to your Maker. What He is doing up there is shaking his head and smiling at our foolishness! In our barter, there is no barter! In our deal, there is no deal! We are asking for what he gave us, and we are giving back what he gave us!

Really, we are just running to him and hiding our faces in His Lap! We cease to think we can control things, and we become helpless. And then, He will lift up our faces and show us the way!

That was the message I got. Thats why the Pandit asked her his conundrum of a question! Thats why she answered ... His life is most important to me, and I will give him up! God was showing our poor lost silly Paro, and she in her grief did not see it, does not see it!

God gave Rudra to Paro, just as he gave Paro to Rudra! Her duty to him, is but her duty to God!

Napster, remember Abraham and Isaac? In my interpretation, the message is the same. God gave Isaac to Abraham, to love and protect, and asked for him back. And at the last moment, he spared Abraham of what would have been a terrible thing. It is kind of the story told backwards! But Abraham surrendered to the will of God, and God had already willed that Isaac would be the son of Abraham, and carry his seed forward.

So, if we read the signs, we know that Paro must learn to read them too. Now, what will those signs be? Will they come from a pair of molten eyes? Words spoken in a voice that whispers of thunder? From a discovered bus ticket? From danger and thus protection?

Show us the way, Navin!

Waiting! 🤗


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Posted: 11 years ago
It would be madness to not read this...
Bored? Never!!!!! And I'm sure the forum agrees...

This update was so moving..
Paro's love, her care, her longing, her helplessness - all depicted so beautifully, one can't help the quiet tear that escapes the eyes...that she should suffer so...
She knows she shouldnt indulge herself...that she should maintain distance...but just cant help herself..cant resist giving in to temptation from time to time..to build memories to cherish later...

I don't know how this can possibly have a happy ending..but i do know that my heart will break for Paro if it doesnt...
Sorry...but im a sucker for happy endings...😳

Can't tell you how eagerly I am waiting for the next update...

Heart-wrenching tale...
Really..

Love
What_The


These lines from the song "Ja Rahe Ho Agar Door Mujhse Sanam" came to mind and wanted to share..

Tumne Maangi Dua Humko Miley Har Khushi
Tum Hi Meri Khushi Phir Kyun Miley Na Hamein

You prayed that I am blessed with every happiness..
You are my happiness, then why can't I have you?

Edited by What_the - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
napster !
my eyes are still wet...such powerful emotions u invoke.
waiting for the final part.
and one more thing, U simply write to inspire !! get published, asap, and let us know when u do 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Super mind blowing i really loved each and every line
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Posted: 11 years ago
my heart felt for Paro her feelings.. OMG I can felt yaar your nailed loving to read Ur update can't wait for next part hope u post tom... no words
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg as much i liked the first part the second part is more more amazing. hats off to u but plz plz let them be together dont seperate them plz. n eagerly waiting for third part but it should be the one which give us happy tears not sad one.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just read both the parts... How beautifully you have depicted the emotional turmoil that Paro is going through... I wish the creatives could read this and execute it as wonderfully as you have written it ! 👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb !!!! I have no words to describe your writing... 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 I can just say that I felt Paro's pain...I felt like crying with her.. I could see your story in front of my eyes like a movie..!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh these flirtatious-rudra scenes were blissful!! For a moment i forgot the sorrow of her 'good-bye'!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
You know what- after reading these wonderful three-shots of yours, people won't like the actual drama on their TV screens!! 😃

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