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Dear Navi,
Thank u for the beautiful pearl of the OS ( Part 2). I loved the contrast of "So she did not" and " This she did". Beautifully written and mesmerizing. Paro's agony is tangible, I can literally touch it.I noticed that you have changed the title to Three shot, thank you for that as it means there is more to come.I feel this track has a potential of a full FF or SS.👏👏
In real life when we know that something or someone who is very dear to us is not going to be there in few days time we become extra conscious/ focused on them and they stay in our minds even in there absence. I can't imagine how Paro will step out of haveli leaving her Rudra, her soul behind. Actually asking his life from Bholenath she accepted her death as her separation from Rudra is the death of her heart, her spirit. Without Rudra she is just a shell of a body. What I would like to read is how will Rudra cope with her absence. He who keeps taunting, mocking, scolding her will actually suffer more than Paro coz Paro at least expressed her love Rudra did't and cold't even do that.
You my friend are a word magician so shake your wand( pen) and weave the flying carpet of Rudra and Paro stories as we readers can never get enough of these stories. Luv u and eagerly wait for part 3. Please update soon😊
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