Four Shot: SAY GOOD-BYE--Part 3, Pg 26 (updated--June 17th)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

The second part is also super...

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Radhika

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

This is too heartbreaking and beautiful. I feel something is afoot from Rudra's side too. Can't wait for part 3 and the final goodbye. It will probably be even more heartbreaking, but I am sure you will make it worth the while for the reader. I wish you could write a 500 word character sketch of Rudra and Paro and the creative team actually pins it up on their soft-board at their work-desk. Like remember, this is the beauty you have created, stay honest to it.

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lourel24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

paro was really taking care of him as if her life depended on him.there were so many sweet moments like the one in which rudra was waiting for her massage.aaaw!His way of paying back was also unique.loved it thoroughly.

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Blondiexzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Awesome writing loved your writing skill and the way expressing paro emotion was amazing I don't think we can see anything like this in an episode because you are doing a fantastic job writing about it, maybe the RR writers and director could use your story for the show,

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harshana1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

Wow I was waiting for someone to write
About this topic. I really like how your writing this. I can't wait for the next part. I want to see her leave and rudra's reaction. I know you will make it descriptive and beautiful. I hope it's a happy ending though. Please add me to your PM list.

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Napster, your writing is so powerful, it is truly a pleasure to read. I know of very few writers (fanfic and otherwise) who have this ability to draw the reader in willy-nilly, accelerate her heartbeat, make butterflies erupt in her stomach, and make her heart twist with painful longing over the fate of the protagonists.

I could feel my heart break with Paro's as she spent her last few days making memories and preparing to cut herself off from her family. For someone as insular and protected as Paro, leaving her family to move to the capital would be akin to beginning a new life altogether.

I love the vast abyss between what Paro considers madness and what a regular person would consider madness. We certainly have an unusual heroine with us. Most of the time the CVs have no idea what to do with her, but writers like you always do.

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Asma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

How can you write so well?! This is ridiculously good stuff. Honestly your version of Paro (and Rudra in your Yesterday series) is so much better than anything the RR team will ever come up with. And that right there is a gift for us readers, but a tragedy for us the viewers.

Thanks for writing this. Look forward to reading the final part.

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ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

Wow... both parts, so mesmerizing. Completely lost in Paro's emotions and i've got a horrible feeling at the pit of my stomach - that goodbye is going to be heart-breaking :'(.

Your writing, Pure beauty!

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RebeccaDaphne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Just so beautiful to read! It's heartbreaking but so real, you capture the emotions wonderfully! Honestly it's giving me what I want to see in the show, please update soon!