PaRud SS::Piya Na Rahe Man Basiya(Angst)Part 2 up, Note on PG 10(4/05)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: lourel24
paro should retort back in her own strong way instead of just listening.I wonder wat will rudra do if paro really will do as he had suggested.plz update soon .

You will come to know about Parvati is coming updates...

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Originally posted by: kidrauhlforever
Love it.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: bebo2050
TS to SS yay !!
Nice update , i found rudras character a bit scary ur dialouges are really good give the effect .

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Originally posted by: shagun-rocks
that was super awesome..rudra is trying so hard to push her away, but paro is one resilient woman..i did get a little confused though...is she still with rudra??...why do i get this feeling that paro is not with him at the moment...

Yes! Parvati is still with Rudra...I think you guys got confused because of the room...right?...that was his HQ's room...the one where Rudra took Parvati after he left his Haveli having a verbal fight with his Kaki-sa...

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Originally posted by: love14356
Great pls update the next chapter soon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: princessunara
that was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time..hmmm.. the starts of it.. before he went back on memories he had Paro's photograph with him n she was not..
I feel worried.. what has he done to her.. he says she didn't break...but she was still not there...

anyway lovely writing Sambhavi .. waiting for the next part :)

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I think everyone got confused because of the room...its was not his Haveli's room...it was HQ's room...where he took Parvat once he left haveli with Paro..having a verbal fight with his Kakisa...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ..Jyoti..
Amazing update

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Originally posted by: Jaz1990
Love how u have managed to capture the characterisation of both! Some very excellent writing bravo!

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Originally posted by: Suchi.R
both are suffering.. :( Awesome part..

Yes both are suffering ...thanks for the comment

Originally posted by: -Shanzy-
This is absolutely brilliant! Loved it. Continue soon. xx

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Originally posted by: sarita_barun
You write so well...
Absolutely amazing update.

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Originally posted by: LyssaPie
This was brilliant

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Originally posted by: Shafoo
tht is niceee update

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Such a unbalanced Rudra... feel like banging his head on a wall ya...

Nice chapter, will be waiting for the next. Give him a nice long guilt trip, deal? 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: aruni50218
Such a unbalanced Rudra... feel like banging his head on a wall ya...
Nice chapter, will be waiting for the next. Give him a nice long guilt trip, deal? 😃

Guilt trip for sure...but keeping Paro's character intact...I dont think I can stretch it too long...

Actually about Rudra's character ...I would like to repeat something which I just replied to one reader...

Both are suffering...Past is playing a big role here...I personally think that Past is something which we can't forget even if we desperately want to...and cheated by your own mother???...how can that heart again trust someone and constantly live with the fear of another heartbreak ...Its better to avoid such situations...and Rudra is doing same by pushing Paro away from his life...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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That was good.. depict their feelings v well...

As much as i was sad for paro, cld feel e helplessness n pain of rudra..

Giving her pain was his way of protectg himself...he had gone tru e betrayal n still hurting frm it...

Paro is one amazing woman...so strong in her faith/love that she endured all bravely...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: choochootrain
That was good.. depict their feelings v well...
As much as i was sad for paro, cld feel e helplessness n pain of rudra..
Giving her pain was his way of protectg himself...he had gone tru e betrayal n still hurting frm it...
Paro is one amazing woman...so strong in her faith/love that she endured all bravely...

You got it right!!

This is what I wanted to depict by showing Rudra's POV.

Yes he wants to protect himself by keeping Paro away...but Paro will prove herself and one zor ka jhatka and he will lay his heart bare in front of her...at her mercy to keep it or toss it away