PaRud SS::Piya Na Rahe Man Basiya(Angst)Part 2 up, Note on PG 10(4/05)

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Anushka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

TS to SS yay !!

Nice update , i found rudras character a bit scary ur dialouges are really good give the effect .

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shagun-rocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

that was super awesome..rudra is trying so hard to push her away, but paro is one resilient woman..i did get a little confused though...is she still with rudra??...why do i get this feeling that paro is not with him at the moment...

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Meem

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Great pls update the next chapter soon

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Sunara

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

that was beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time..hmmm.. the starts of it.. before he went back on memories he had Paro's photograph with him n she was not..

I feel worried.. what has he done to her.. he says she didn't break...but she was still not there...

anyway lovely writing Sambhavi .. waiting for the next part :)

Edited by princessunara - 11 years ago

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Jasmin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Love how u have managed to capture the characterisation of both! Some very excellent writing bravo!

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Suchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

both are suffering.. :( Awesome part..

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Shanzy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

This is absolutely brilliant! Loved it. Continue soon. xx

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Sarita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

You write so well...
Absolutely amazing update.

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-NatureLover-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome update
amazing start.
Rudra is also suffering the same pain which he gives to Parvati.
Truly Parvati, her strength, her faith in herself is amazing and she never broke down even when Rudra accused her for the sins she didn't even could think to commit. His perception for parvati is changing.
Update next part soon

Thank you for the lovely comment 😊

Yes! Both are suffering...Past is playing a big role here...I personally think that Past is something which we can't forget even if we desperately want to...and cheated by your own mother???...how can that heart again trust someone?

Thus Rudra is trying to push Parvati again...so that there will never be any heartbreak again

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-NatureLover-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Tannakstar
Brilliant, just brilliant! I love how accurately you're able to portray all the characters, it makes the story so much more rounded and complete.
Definitely looking forward to the rest of it, it's very likely I'll be stalking this page so I don't miss the next update ;)

Thank you dear😳

No need of stalking ...will notify you as soon as I update😆