PaRud OS: Laal Ishq - Page 6

Originally posted by: shutter

A very fitting title to a tale of love dipped in everything red... Pain, Passion, Death!!!!!

I loved the fact that you could pretty much sum the entire story of about 93 episodes in just one OS, albeit a very long one!!! But I loved your style of narration and how the story of Paro and Rudra progresses from their very first meeting on that rainy day in the bus stop...

Ohh I loved your version of Dilsher too... And am glad that this Dilsher did not ask Rudra to hold the beauty of women against them, just because one turned out to be bad...

And the emotions... and the thoughts... of both Paro and Rudra were bang on!!!! That moment when Paro says "she felt exposed yet protected"... I could feel it myself!!!!

But, having all said and done, I could't bring myself to believe that they died!!!! 😒 But, I guess I'll make myself believe that they were meant to be together, forever... Even in death!!!!

👏

Originally posted by: SS88

This was like watching a movie. A beautifully crafted tragic tale. Paro and Rudra are still together. But not in this world. I hope at least the villagers are rid of the Thakur. Or it will all have been for nothing.

Originally posted by: What_the

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This was beautiful Titaliya baisa, I am just speechless now!

What a wonderfully engaging tale you have woven for us!

I loved how you took elements from the show...like Rudra's Rudraksha, Paro's doll, the wedding sham, Dilsher's advice on beautiful women...and you put your own spin on it.

I especially loved the motorcycle encounter, the sweet, romantic moments between them left me with a smile on my face.

Your simple narrative technique combined with some very interesting ideas, made this story a very nice read!

And all the scenarios you put up were so plausible, yet so interesting, it made me think at times that I would have really enjoyed watching this kind of track on the show as well!

I know your Rudra was different from the one on the show - softer, gentler - yet I couldn't help falling in love with him...

He seems to embody the man of every woman's dream - strong, smart, handsome, brave, loving, caring, sweet..

Your Paro was in her element here, jumping to save her Nandu Jija and taking on the bride's role..

I am of course a big fan of happy endings and was looking forward to one here as well, However, the way you ended this story, made it more poignant. My heart was heavy as I finished reading, to know that such a sweet love story was destined to live such a short life..

I am very, very impressed by your writing Baisa and I do hope that you would write more often on PaRud...

Do drop me a line when you do, I would be keen to read more of your work!

Lots of love

Maya

PS: Do consider changing the title of this thread to "SS" instead of "OS" so that people are not surprised at the length! 😉

Originally posted by: LivesInHope

Hi

Im so glad ur os is long
Iv loved it but the tragic ending
Was unexpected and soo sad :(
Nooo! They both died sob sob

I really liked how ur made positive changes
From the actual serial.

Ie dilsher encouraging rud to trust a woman.

Paro taking her cuz place in wedd is SOO in keeping
With her character.

A fabulous piece of long hard work.

Thank u

Originally posted by: chotidesi

I love the way you write- The Rudra you've built up was so sweet, and I really really liked him. I like how you've made Dilsher teach him properly, instead of the way they had it in the show- the ending was so sad though. I wasn't expecting that!

Originally posted by: custodian75

That was one lovely emotional OS. Rudra's faith in Paro even after seeing in the wedding dress was touching. This was totally different Rudra and very sweet too.

Originally posted by: mklam

Well written and several things stood out for me
1. Rudra is not such a dark character and comes across as a normal one with all warts
2. Dilsher is not as bitter as in the show and that again is probably the reason his son is also more balanced
3. Paro and Rudra are equals here and thats something I always like to read or watch
4. The brief encounter at childhood stays in their memory and becomes the catalyst for their union - well brought out
5. Sad ending but since this is a story and not going to happen on the show I reading enjoyed it
6. No Laila here - thank you - the current track is dangerously going downhill - hope the CVs pull it off well showing Paro to have some spunk - its ok to see a naive Paro at times but not a stupid one - how does a wife and an ex live under the same roof with the man and even shar the same bedroom albeit briefly? But then only in tv dramas ...sigh!

Originally posted by: momo121

wow! amazing OS! how did I miss this OS?? I come on RR forum DAILY and still missed it.

Nice seeing you in this forum too! :D, I will so be posting a OS on this foum shortly :D

Just Awesome OS :)

Originally posted by: dumas

beautifully os heart breaking at the end but then they were together in life and death well done thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: napstermonster

thank you for alerting me to this amazing piece. Its been very very much of a privilege to read such a long and well written and still ultimately tragic piece. Thanks for writing it and thank you for posting it all together so we can read it to the end and get the full effect.